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wild beauty


wild beauty
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Copyright: Giorgio Mercalli (giorgio2005) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 25 W: 0 N: 10] (1463)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-09-11
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/400 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-10-14 5:35
Viewed: 128
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
natural looking portrait of Silvia
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Beautifl protrait, beautiful eyes. Perhaps the POV and the B&W aren't the best choice but good shot.
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Francesco

Hi Giorgio,
So natural and beauty.
Great sharpness and dof.

Yopie

hello giorgio nice one great b&w and dof. just a remark concerning the composition : it's too centered, while she looks on the left side, you should just crop the right side.

great anyway

TFS

Olivier

Dober dan Giorgio,

zelo naraven in lep crno-bel portret. Vsec mi je kako crno-bela fotografija poudari njeno naravno lepoto.

Mara

Hi Giorgio!

I like the B&W. This young lady would look good in any color or no color. Great DOF and POV!

TFS
Dennis

Stunning B&W portrait of this amazingly beautiful woman. She is a natural and her eyes are just like...perfect. This photo is amazingly sharp and her pose is inviting. My only gripe with this picture is the right side of the frame which adds some mid FG distraction with the grass blades being a bit too conspicuous. I believe another reader has already done a workshop on this and it certainly improves the overall presentation and composition. I personally would have gone for a vertically orientated shot here and revealed more of her lovely shoulder line and neck line. This is only my opinion but a lovely capture of this model and hope to see more of her pictures from you. Thanks for sharing and happy shooting...

regards,

Dilshan

Hi Giorgio,
Lovely potrait with very strong characteristic of Silvia's face. I like the texture of her hair. And the word 'wild' on the title is the presentation of her eyes and eyelash to me. Nice!
Sincerely, Imelda

Hellow Giorgio,
Great choice of B @ W portraying natural beauty.Your model has exceptionally beautiful eyes and you have captured those eyes out of the ordinary looking away from the camera.Well done and TFS.
erwin...

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