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Silvia 554


Silvia 554
Photo Information
Copyright: Giorgio Mercalli (giorgio2005) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 25 W: 0 N: 10] (1463)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-09-11
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Friday Theme 2009/8/28 "girls" [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-09-13 10:32
Viewed: 365
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
she has a quick look...
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  • Great 
  • bupga Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 303 W: 6 N: 366] (2711)
  • [2009-09-13 10:42]

Nice eye to eye contact with the gorgeous model, the DOF is great as well as the pose and expression. I wish the hair is not cropped and I preffered more space below to include full of her arm (just my thought) nevertheless you've done a great job here.

tfs......Buddy

Hi Giorgio,
Nice picture of a beautiful lady.
Love her eyes and smile, so sweet and natural.
Regards,
yopie

  • Great 
  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 365 W: 0 N: 436] (2347)
  • [2009-09-13 10:55]

Hi Giorgio,
Great portrait shot, nice focus and beautiful shallow DoF to blur the background. I would agree with Buddy on the hair but not so much the lower arm imo. Beautiful natural model. TFS
Bri

  • Great 
  • psyce Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 170 W: 11 N: 98] (1621)
  • [2009-09-13 11:02]

beautiful model.... great DOF, natural skin tone... sharp details... well done TFS

Hello Giorgio,
An excellent portrait you have posted.
Eye contact and the expression on the face have excellently been captured.
Excellent image,but only for a change I have done WS,otherwise original image is without fault and is fantastic.
Regards
Nazir

Excellent portrait,eye contact,and skin tone.
Jim

Nice. Very natural looking shot - it seems unretouched and the light looks very natural too. Beautiful model, nice DOF.
Rew

Stunning Portrait with great expression. Love the untouched natural look and the model is very beautiful too! Nice work!

cheers,

dilshan74

Hello silvio

nice portrait, good model pose and composition. too bad it's a bit blury.

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