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having a friend in the winter sand..


having a friend in the winter sand..
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Copyright: Marco Rossi (Urfaust) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1554 W: 70 N: 2409] (10577)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-02-23
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Experimental, Mood
Camera: Nikon D-80, Nikkor 18-135mm f/3.5-5.6G ED-IF AFS-DX
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/500 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-03-01 6:38
Viewed: 701
Points: 94
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
having a friend on the winter sand..

having a friend.. along the life river..
togheter.. maybe with different fortunes ..
but sometime.. under the same summer stars..
on the winter sand.. walking and talking..
Someone to enjoy.. to thought.. to have an help...
while the sea is beside.. in the warm.. when daylight is ended.
Everything is throughout and through.. with you..
men and women.. sickness and health.. a love or problems..
Life becames... a long walking..
a run.. a stop.. an unquiet final..
when outside is cold.. in a quiet snowing..
Another life will come for us..
arcane as certain lovers..
beyond the moons .. the hurricanes ..
your hands over my hands..
with you... my friend..
we could forget time..
and the worst is just passing..

Paolo Conte is my mood.. ;)

comments and critics are welcome..

thanks.. have a beautiful WE

.

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1903 W: 76 N: 0] (18901)
  • [2008-03-01 7:00]

Hi Marco ;)))
excellent photo, colors, frame, atmosphere...All my compliments...
Ciao,
J ;)))

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1152 W: 62 N: 807] (12583)
  • [2008-03-01 7:07]

Hi Marco,
beautiful compo and tittle.Good framing.TFS.Necla.

merhaba dear marco
wonderful composition and atmosphere.wonderful light and silhouettes.well done.
best regads.
gürkan akçakır.

Hello Marco,
I was wondering about the red spot in the thumbnail... now I see!
The low afternoon sun adds to the atmosphere on the beach, a pleasant composition with good details...
Greetings,
Pablo -

i like the composition here Marco, impressive warm color with the touch of the blue and red slide on the image.sharp and detailed as well.
regards...andres

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2166 W: 385 N: 2277] (24684)
  • [2008-03-01 7:26]

Merhaba myfriend Dear Marco...
verynice comp...and shot..superb light and pov..bravo..selamlar

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  • pntcd (0)
  • [2008-03-01 9:02]

* I *
V V V

Nice!

pntcd

Hi Marco,

A late winters evening - a long walk - a serious talk......indeed moments to cherish.

Wonderful presentation - love what you have done both in your picture and in your note.

TFS
Els

Hi Marco,
I breathless...
Amazing peaceful scene and meaningful maching poem.
A masterpieace again.
Selahattin E

Sonno gigante, sonno elefante...
E' tutto quello che serve, a volte... un amico e una lunga spiaggia da percorrere palmo a palmo, in una passeggiata calma... niente corse a perdifiato, nč scalate tese in cui la fatica ti impedisce anche di respirare...
La luce č meravigliosa, e anche il tocco di rosso dello scivolo, secondo me, non ci sta affatto male...
Ciao, Antonella

P.S.: Il video non funziona bene! :-(

Hi Mrco,
What a superb panoramic view..Sharp, colours,light and atmosphere are beautiful.TFS.
Regards.

hAyAti

Bonjour Marco,
Beautiful scene and composition with beautiful colors and sharpness, I love the frame and excellent POV. and lovely details , My compliments.
Ciao.
Michel

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  • bizsu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 225 W: 0 N: 113] (1412)
  • [2008-03-01 16:55]
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Ciao Marco,
Your picture breathes special atmosphere. Abandoned seacoast, sunset. The music and the rest of the pictures, caused a small one for me depression. Wounds, I feel a pain from the common work. Good job. I like that.
Well done
Ciao, Zsú

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 542 W: 31 N: 50] (6642)
  • [2008-03-01 21:31]

Hi Marco,
in this image, the sky and the sea are lighted to be so bright, and the beach is dark in deep colors,,,there is rather wide difference between two.
in my feeling, it seems being something dissoiating elements in your mind to me...
and do you know the song of "You've Got a Friend" by Carole King & James Taylar?
your situation in your note looks a little different from this song, but I wish it would change to be in that heartwarming song.
thank you,
Akihisa

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3116 W: 280 N: 6312] (24123)
  • [2008-03-02 0:29]

So nice to see you exactly one story below me in the gallery!
I love the composition of this one, great mood!
I think the one thing I might have done is to desaturate the red thing that intrudes on the sand (a toy?, and anchor?)
Great composition, perfect mood, lovely notes
TFS
silke

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3298 W: 682 N: 2085] (16673)
  • [2008-03-02 0:35]

The frame disturbs me a bit but I still can get into the mood of this wonderful photo of yours.


thanks,
v
ps.I'll be back with points

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3715 W: 216 N: 3721] (28231)
  • [2008-03-02 2:44]

Ciao Marco

Wonderful sunset colours, with good sharpness, graphism & silhouettes. Nice repetition of the yacht masts, with the 2 human figures on the shoreline adding a lot to the composition. Tfs!

Hello marco

I like the composure here, excllent details very well presented colors bg pov dof excllent work

TFS Kyle

Hello Marco,
Beautiful mood in this photo.
Nice colors, light and composition.
And lovely note to go with. TFS
Vandana
later

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2088 W: 59 N: 2665] (14693)
  • [2008-03-02 7:33]

Hi Marco...
Beautiful shot, lovely view, nice panorama...
Great natural lighting, beautiful colors and contrast...
Interesting note - story... Well done,
Greetings, George

Ciao Marco, rilassante, cosa c'č di meglio di una bella passeggiata con un amico sulla spiaggia, direi solo una bella passeggiata con una bella amica, bella la luce radente, lo scivolo rosso č una piccola chicca molto ben inserita, bravo, ciao Silvio

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  • ttreen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1553 W: 119 N: 3630] (14840)
  • [2008-03-02 9:13]

Hello Marco
I really like your frame here... I like the look of the beach with the only color the empty slide!

Tricia

Hi dear friend,
nice and special mood in your posting.
Lovely seen and presented.
Nicely framed too.
Have a lovely new week!
Ioana

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2936 W: 618 N: 3365] (15449)
  • [2008-03-02 12:26]
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Hi Marco,
How I like this atmospheric photo! I can believe that it was taken in my home village. The coastal landscapes present some similarities which gather people. We can have friend over the sea, too! :)
I appreciate your musical reference. I am a fan of Paolo Conti! I had the happiness to see him and shake his hand during his canadian tour in 2006 Summer. He went in my village for a concert and he was very generous with the young participants of our song's camp inviting them to come on scene and sing with him.
Excellent photo and great note as usual! Annie

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  • cinca Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 362 W: 2 N: 87] (3416)
  • [2008-03-02 13:05]

Ciao Marco, atmosfera calda, che ispira una grande serenitŕ, lo scivolo con la sua nota di colore decisa sembra essere il legame con la realtŕ. L'amicizia č anche questo, riuscire a continuare a sognare insieme senza farsi travolgere dalle delusioni e dai problemi della vita. Ottimo Conte.
ciao, Cinzia

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  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1186 W: 285 N: 1315] (7065)
  • [2008-03-02 13:48]

Hi Marco.
Well composed and presented.
Interesting note as well.
Atmosphere is here on your picture.
Thanks for sharing.
Janek Kloss

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  • Kiwis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1590 W: 0 N: 184] (12916)
  • [2008-03-02 15:37]

Hello Marco,
Interesting mood emerges from your photo. Your poetic note and the adequate music is add in your good composition. My bad english prevents a good interpretation of my thought of your photo. Well done my friend :)
Ciao a presto
Diane

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  • lopa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1195 W: 264 N: 877] (8915)
  • [2008-03-03 0:47]

Hi Marco ,
Excellent shot with a great POV.
Wonderful beach atmosphere with the blue and red slide!
Welldone!!
TFS
Lopa

Hi Marco,

Having an honest friend is priceless . . Lovely presentation and notes about friendship and love . .
Beautiful composition . .

Tfs,
Tjutjut

Many thanks for your kind words on Eye of grasshopper .

:-)) will be back this afternoon

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3443 W: 96 N: 3045] (19608)
  • [2008-03-03 5:58]

Hello Marco.
Thanks for your nice comment.
Very nice presented picture with the red playtoy in the middle, but the vertical pole is distracting it a bit, imo should have been more to the side, or to clone out.
Best regards from Jan

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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1521 W: 1 N: 143] (12318)
  • [2008-03-03 8:43]

Walk with a friend and wait for the summer sun very beautiful

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1537 W: 137 N: 2154] (19294)
  • [2008-03-03 9:48]

Hello Marco, great composition, lovely light and a really good moody shot, thanks!

Mario

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  • edal Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 669 W: 79 N: 628] (4179)
  • [2008-03-03 12:26]

Ciao, Marco!
It's an excellent synthesis of poetry and photography. Framing adds of the mood too.
greetings!
Anton

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1701 W: 0 N: 1] (11484)
  • [2008-03-05 0:55]

Hi marco
Strong composition and a very nice lightning.
Gr Jos

Ciao Marco

very nice composition and colours,
Full mood and playfull framing !



John

Hi Marco !
the exposure looks very brilliant !
Well done. Best regards, Daniel

Hola Marco.
Una imagen bastante hermosa en la que el sol da sus últimos brillos de la tarde.
Excelente presentación.
Un cordial saludo, JL.

Hallo Marco,
ein "Tropfen" Farbe in dieser fast Traurigen Landschaft... Eine gute Idee und tolle Komposition mein Freund.

Gruß,
Chris

A fine bit of poetry, Marco, both in the words and the image. I like your use of line and light and perspective here. You chose a great time of day and tell your story well with the couple on the beach. Interesting and effective frame, too.

Well done,
Jim

Very beautiful photo. The mood, the colours, the frame, it fits. The playtool in the front makes it also a little abandoned
TFS
Cynthia

I remember
When we could sleep on stones
Now we lie together
In whispers and moans...



Baby, baby, baby...light my way....

Lovely colour and light in this image Marco. Well composed, a good diagonal and even with the darkness, fine detail. TFS,
David

Many thanks for your comment on ‘Mili Mili and Fog I’

wonderful atmosphere here, Marco.. another great composition and meaningful note.. the frame is lovely too.. nice one.. :)

regards, terry

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  • sela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 370 W: 1 N: 231] (2448)
  • [2008-05-03 4:45]

TFS for this wonderful photo. Excellently composed,I am very much thrilled by your poetic thoughts
Greetings from Germany
Rose
Smiley tomorrow.
Here it is, as promised

:O) You are SUCH a romantic! Mi piace molto le poesie e le parole con tue foto. In boca a lupo Marco.

Riccardo

Hello Marco. Excellent sharpness of the image with diagonal lighting. I like the mood and the strong color of the slide. Best regards. Jusni

hello Marco
wonderful scene
beautiful ambience
i like the colour variation
lovely evening shot

regards
Manuj MEhta
:)soon

Nice work my friend!Nice colours and composition.
Regards.
A.

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