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Copyright: Francesco Pascale (frappa76) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 201 W: 51 N: 137] (1346)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2004-08-21
Categories: Daily Life, Artwork, Decisive Moment, Friends/Family, Mood, Portrait
Camera: Pentax Optio S 4
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/15 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-01-22 8:55
Viewed: 964
Points: 34
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
...drives me crazy!!!

Hello this shot was taken just while we were having fun..just point and shot...so natural light and ( I don't remember why!) camere on B/W mode.
In PP...just cropping with her on the left in order to not center the figure,LUKO'S sharpening,soft touch with NeatImage,framing.

Regards, Francesco

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Beautiful girl - well captured and presented. Lucky you!

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  • tet Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 393 W: 39 N: 196] (3625)
  • [2006-01-22 8:59]
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I like her beautyful eyes francesco! awesome stolen shot!

tfs,
tet

Hi Francesco,
She has superb eyes and a great lovely expression, You've captured her very well. Well done.
Luc

Ciao Francesco,

A beautiful portrait you have captured here. Her skin tones are lovely. I really like the shot on the kitchen floor scene. It does convey the fun you express in your notes. Those eyes and that smile are the grabbers though! Very well done Francesco.

Peace and Love always to you both!
Kevin

she is so beautiful and natural:) BTW, i LOVE the haircut:)))
very nice to shot like this, playing, sometimes it's the best:)
Good stage for a cheer image.

Ps. thank you for the comment on my Sunday's usual picture:)

TFs and for making me smile, big, big smile:)
Sabina

Hi Francesco,
a pretty young lady, I love her smile so much, excellent portrait, thanks
Sabine - wishnugaruda

Hello Francesco...
Nice portrait! I like the lighting giving pleasing tones of grayscale... Dynamic cropping and good details, well done!
Regards,
Pablo -

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  • Tintin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2198 W: 267 N: 345] (1982)
  • [2006-01-22 17:55]
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Beautiful portrait, Francesco, with a very natural & relax expression on her face. Good conversion to B&W which seems to make her eyes glow. My only nit-picky comment is on the background with the back of the chair almost coming out of her shoulder. You could have selected her and then blurred the background a bit to eliminate that distraction. I know it was a spontaneous shot and you don't always worry about background in those cases but I think it is too bad for such a good portrait. Bravo!

Sorry, I have run out of green smiles!

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  • jacobo Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 666 W: 31 N: 673] (4875)
  • [2006-01-22 20:02]

Very nice spontaneous photo and beautiful girl.
You are lucky.
Regards
jacobo

Hi Francesco, This is a lovely portrait. The focus on the eyes is perfect. The lighting is good and what about the smile :-)

1 point for you and 1 point for the model.

Marie-José

LOvely lady, lovely photo, lovely use of B and W and well done with the PP work Francesco. TFS
David
PS Many thanks for your comment on City Fog

Because it's so natural, it's so beuatiful, Francesco!
Sharp detail and the B&W version makes it more authentic and sweet.
I can see why she drives you crazy... :)
Well done!
Constantinos

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  • elkab Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 72 W: 51 N: 41] (739)
  • [2006-01-23 10:46]

Yes, very nice, natural portrait, very well composed and excellent quality of photo.

regrads
eb

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  • plank Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 50 W: 3 N: 59] (2073)
  • [2006-01-23 14:53]
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Hi Francesco!
Very nice portrait!
Congrat for the photo and for the girl!
Tibor

Hi Francesco,

Nicely one. Good expression and light. Maybe an even lower POV? First impression was that the chair in the back was distracting. But now I think it adds to the scene, just don't let it be almost touching her shoulder.

Well done and TFS,

Pedro

Hello, Francesco

beautiful picture
a beautiful model of beautiful eyes
I liked the self-portrait, beautiful and simple.
Congratulations, great job!

Sérgio

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  • wayne Gold Star Critiquer [C: 292 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-01-31 23:56]
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Very pretty girlfriend you have. Hope to see more of her. Peace bro.

this is a very lovely portrait, Francesco. the eye contact and the glistening eyes are so catchy and the smile can certainly melt a man's heart! :) well done!! Ron

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