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Photo Information
Copyright: lia koshim (liakoshim) (28)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-04
Categories: Mood
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2004-04-20 5:16
Viewed: 675
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
a portrait of my friend in the background of 15th century fresco. i submitted the similar one in TE with more emphasis on the fresco. here is another of the same series
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a nice close portrait lia! nice use of DOF! congrats. welcome on TL
un bel ritrato della tua amica Lia! brava!

Nice portrait with an unusal posture which works with the fresque background!
I'd suggest warming the colors a little bit.

  • Great 
  • manny Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 578 W: 21 N: 1523] (11680)
  • [2004-04-20 10:00]

Good angle and DOF is nice. More focus perhaps on her. Maybe more to her eyes. It is nice to see you here Lia.

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  • freddd Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 352 W: 55 N: 78] (1905)
  • [2004-04-22 23:23]

Beau portrait d'une belle personne admirant une belle oeuvre. J'aime la différence de ton entre le fisage plus blème et le décor du fond aux teintes plus chaudes. Tout la chaleur du personnage émane de son regard. Bravo!

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