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- guinness_fr
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 394 W: 153 N: 190]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-g-g.gif)
(3385) - [2007-08-09 3:14]
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Hello Karl
it could be a nice portrait, but you missed some essential rule :
first : composition, a big part of the picture on the rightis empty, making your subject centered on the picture.
second probleme, in my opinion, it lacks some contrast, the picture seems a bit flat.
I made a workshop, hope you like
TFS and keep the good job
Olivier
- Black_Dog
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 585 W: 0 N: 32]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-n-s.gif)
(1815) - [2008-02-02 5:30]
Howdy Karl!
Beautiful girl. Amazing eyes, amazing smile. Very good portrait.
Cheers!
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