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the world in gray..


the world in gray..
Photo Information
Copyright: Marco Rossi (Urfaust) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1541 W: 70 N: 2387] (10433)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-07-02
Categories: Daily Life, Artwork, Experimental, Mood, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed], Portrait
Camera: Nikon D-80, Nikkor 18-135mm f/3.5-5.6G ED-IF AFS-DX
Exposure: f/5.3, 1/160 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Marco's Feelings [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-02-25 16:27
Viewed: 994
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 110
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
the world in gray..

maybe i’m tired.. maybe, but not at all..
sure i’m tired to fight against windmills..
to be slave of social, economical conventions and rules..
to dont be able to do the right thing!! to work without sense..
and to don’t make the difference (in the positive way)..
in truth.. every political situation is boring me!!
and also every business policy..
corporations control everything..
our thoughts.. our actions.. our life.. what’s more?!?
homologations.. standardization.. ratings.. badgets.. rules!!..
every business situation looks ever more without sense!!
dignity.. is maybe disappeared everywhere!!
it’s a global crisis!! a values crisis.. a subprime mortgage crisis.. ;))
financial goals.. financial fears.. are taking everyone!!..
and news are always worst...
the wars aren’t finishing.. the world global pollution is increasing..
petroleum price is over 100 $/barrel.. (it should be over 200 soon)..
gross domestic product is low.. general perspectives are always dark..
i dont know why.. it’s curious... but everytime..
when citizen are really tired about general situation
there are diffused fears that spontaneously born everywhere!! isn’t it?
and this is the case.. where we need more rules..
more big leaders.. more attention.. more control..
more inhuman principles.. more standardization!
to be the one against the other.. as always..
in the name of wellness.. of business..
they (we) kill.. they (we) abuse.. they (we) live!!!..

in all this while.. i hope that i’m preserving my coloured detail...
sure i’m not in gray.. and I’m not the perfectly oiled gear train..
I’m disguised... in this greyness, I’m only acting a role..
undercovered, from inside.. in my way..
I’m fighting to change this mad world!!..
i don't really believe that money is my god..
and in truth.. I like to think that I’m not alone.. ;)

i think...
never forget yourself..
in every action... in every minute of your life..
cause it's you... and it’s not yourself.. only.. ;)

shadow of the day.. is my mood!!

Comments and critics are welcome..
.

p.s.:
desaturation.. with something original.. pink.. remained!!
a coloured detail in the greyness.. to symbolize..
a secret silent revolution against the system.. from inside ;)
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  • Jens Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 661 W: 55 N: 1216] (4625)
  • [2008-02-25 16:30]

Hi Marco
Great shot, looks good in B&W, real good PP work as well, good choice to mark the tie in color.
Compliments.
Regards
Jens.

Hi Marco,

I like your note about life . .
Perfect accompany for this lovely picture . .
Well done

Tfs,
Tjutjut

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2203 W: 59 N: 2450] (13819)
  • [2008-02-25 18:50]

Hi Marco...
Great portrait - very nice in B/W combo of two colors...
A lovely scenery! Also, nice note about it... And great job!
Congratulations!
TFS
George

Hi Marco,

I really like this photo! The black and white and dash of pink.... all give a certain allure and mystique.

Well done, Lisa

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3046 W: 568 N: 3415] (15131)
  • [2008-02-25 20:40]

Hi Marco!
I think that you are not tired because there is too much energy in your revolt! You are just conscious! Perhaps more than much among us! And when humour still lives in yourself, all is possible! You are lucky to see the things differently, so much of people have a limited vision of the life, on their life!

I like to see this red necklace over your gray suit! But, it doesn't prevent me from seeing your perspicacious glance nor the unruly wick you tried to arrange without success. With your great note, this is perfectly done! Annie

PS/ Very nice selfportrait!

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 546 W: 32 N: 50] (6091)
  • [2008-02-25 22:18]

HI Marco,

many years ago, I think what is the colors, of course not about those of physical spectrum, but about the sensations themselves in our feelings. and I found the world has no colors from beginning to the end, the colors are only my spirit in feeling. and gray is one of color elements in my mind.
you look expressing your disappointment and angrinees to all this world by the gray, it is almost appropriate, but what is the meaning of your saving pink tie...it maybe a little hope or vanishing last warmth, I don't know...
anyway, an interesting self portrait of you in gray, with sulking expression.

thank you,
Akihisa

Hi Marco, per fortuna so l'inglese...! ;-)
Bene, appena un po' interessato al cinema, alla letteratura e alla musica, vero?
La foto è intrigante, il particolare lasciato a colori rende benissimo, a colpo d'occhio, tutta l'intensità del commento...
Ma è un autoritratto?
Bravo! Antonella

Hi Marco,
Extraordinary shot with thought provokating notes.Choice of B/W and pink are meaningful, in my opinion.
I impressed my friend.
Thank you...
Selahattin E

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3348 W: 688 N: 1921] (16125)
  • [2008-02-26 0:36]

This is just perfect, my dear Marco !
Keep this tie and your wonderful spirit; congrats !!!


v
ps.I'll be back with points

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3362 W: 86 N: 2730] (18045)
  • [2008-02-26 1:07]

Ciao marco.
Good portrait of this world representative of people, who think they have a hard life.
Every day to make more money as the day before.
Yes he really looks fed up with.!haha
Ciao ciao from Jan

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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1516 W: 1 N: 131] (11785)
  • [2008-02-26 1:17]

beautiful portrait I wish you success

Ciao Marco

Curiosamente io recupero nel tuo testo i miei sentimenti del momento. Un mondo che va inopportuno, un mondo grigiastro e violento come io lo dissi nella mia composizione 'Strange World' Lei dice con parole molto elette quello che io penso, grazie.
Io non so più dove è il piacere, se non è quell'a attraversare un sorriso nella strada. La vita è grigia per me ed io tento a colore esso coi miei sogni e 'il clic' di macchina fotografica mia.
Ritratto molto bello, io finalmente l'ho i così molto aspettarono fotografia. Visto bene la piccola chiave di colore sulla cravatta.
Hope you will understand my bad italian ...
Ciao
Marylou

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4194 W: 222 N: 3837] (28101)
  • [2008-02-26 2:09]

Ciao Marco

I like the desaturation & red striped tie. Good contrast, tonal range, & sharpness. Tfs!

Hello Marco,
Great portrait, and a great pp; it really revels your mood and your note.
Myregards, mb

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3368 W: 284 N: 6439] (23900)
  • [2008-02-26 4:24]

Superb composition and wonderful PP work. That is a memorable image -- something that I would want to see on the cover of a music album or CD
Great stuff
TFS
Silke

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1055 W: 56 N: 686] (11133)
  • [2008-02-26 5:35]

hi Marco,
really you are wrigth.I felt kidness of your hearth when I saw your note.I have the same idea with you.But we must look to the world by the pink glasses for our health.Impressive portrait.Congratulations.Necla.

Hi Marco,
Very nice picture in B & W. and model, good note too and contrast very well done.
Ciao
Michel

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  • bizsu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 217 W: 0 N: 112] (1411)
  • [2008-02-26 6:07]

Ciao Marco,
They are very good thoughts. There is an interesting saying on Hungary, " a swallow , does not do summer. Politics = war = weapon = oil = business. He is this 22 trap of his. I believe it you know it. We can fight with our photos simply. Only few people pay attention to us. Your photo very good. :)) Sneaking killer;
Bravo !!
Ciao Zsú

MARTO,

MA COSì ME FAI IMPAZZì TUTTE LE DONNE DI TL!!!
BELLA FOTO MARCO, MI PIACE ANCHE LA CRAVATTA COLORATA, LA TUA ESPRESSIONE è RIUSCITA.

BRAVO MARTUSH

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1838 W: 69 N: 0] (17532)
  • [2008-02-26 6:46]

Hi Marco ;)
original artwork...impressivr B&W, Compliments,
Best,
J ;)

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2163 W: 381 N: 2154] (23152)
  • [2008-02-26 7:52]

Merhaba myfriend Marco.
very beautiful portraid and shot... The colours are great...selamlar

merhaba dear marco
wonderful artistic portrait picture.wonderful composition.well done my friend.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

Hi Marco,
Reading your note makes me a bit depressive, but it's good to read sometimes how others think what's going on the world. You make me think too and that';s good. Regarding the picture, excellent selfportrait and partly desaturation. Excellent composition and the pink tie fitts you well :-)
Hans

Hi dear friend,
wonderful selfportrait! Great choice for the tones of gray.
All my congrats!
Best wishes,
Ioana

Hello Marco!
Very nice autoportrait and perfcet light!
Good detail and lovely point of view!
Best regards!
Lili

Hello Marco
excellent portrait, impressive note, good philosophy...
cioa
Magda

Complimenti Marco,
penso che il tuo sfogo possa essere quello di ognuno di noi,immersi nel grigiore degli affari sporchi dove l'unica priorita' delle grandi caste e' l'utile,il guadagno,lo sfruttamento sulla nostra pelle.....
ritornando al post,mi piace come icona questo self-portrait dove il rosso della cravatta tiene viva ancora la speranza...

ciao sERGIO

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  • Juliet Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 716 W: 34 N: 1531] (9580)
  • [2008-02-26 15:31]

Hi Marco,
VERY WELL DONE. A fine portrait and the desat technique is perfect. Excellent lighting and details. Ciao and TFS Julie

hopefully i sometimes forget all these dark facts, if not, my life would be as dark as our predicted future ! keep this colored detail ;)
good job, excellent illustration of your message
regards
jo

Hello Marco,
Good to see you posted after long time.
Nicely done self portrait.
Good expressions captured.
And partial desaturation works fine here.
Good note to go with it. Have a wonderful day friend.
Vandana
later

I am not sure what I like more - your terrific photograph above, or a great speech you gave us...
I have just one word - THANKS!
Best regards,
Iza

Oh Marco,

After reading this I think a little rebellion against corperate policy by using colour in your necktie is justified.
I now also understand why you enjoyed reading the poem of Pessoa.
The selfportrait is special because of the sceptical look in your eyes, a look that observes and analyses the world outside yourself as well as inside yourself. Thanks for showing us yourself in your picture as in your note. It is appreciated,

Els
:)

Hi Marco,
Very nice portrait vith great PP work.TFS.
Ciao,

hAyAti

Well 'guappo ' this is a good post.
Like your PP and idea. By now all the TL Ladies are dreaming and whispering one name :
Dulce far niente con Marco Rossi in excelsius *** Hahaha.. my fiend this realy is good photowork
Welldone
John
** domani

Ciao Marco, bel ritratto in bianco e nero, grazie per aver lasciato una nota di colore, il mondo non è tutto grigio, bravo, ciao Silvio

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  • lopa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1195 W: 264 N: 877] (8915)
  • [2008-02-28 5:49]

Hi Marco ,
Excellent shot. Good choice of partial desaturation.
Wonderful position and good portrait.
TFS
Lopa

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  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1186 W: 285 N: 1315] (7065)
  • [2008-02-28 9:37]

Hello Marco.
Life is too short to be worried.

Great portrait.
Looks powerful.
Best Regards.
janek kloss

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  • clnaef Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 1035 W: 57 N: 31] (5566)
  • [2008-02-28 12:38]

Bonjour,
Joli choix du contraste pour ce portrait.
Bonne journée.
clnaef

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  • juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2470 W: 0 N: 878] (13240)
  • [2008-02-28 15:56]

Hola Marco,
realmente creo que vivimos en un mundo Gris,
buena nota y original retrato,
espléndido pov.
saludos

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1462 W: 126 N: 2045] (17677)
  • [2008-02-29 7:51]

Hello Marco, that's a great portrait, very well done, very good technical qualities and a very good effect. Thanks!

Mario

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1691 W: 0 N: 1] (11039)
  • [2008-02-29 8:23]

Hi Marco
This is a very fair portrait.
Gr Jos

Excellent portrait, Marco! You look very distinguished in this "gritty" Black & White with a red accent. Suggestive pose and look, as if you're trying to confess us something by tranmission of thoughts. Composition and depth of field are flawless as well.
Nice work!
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

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  • cinca Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 334 W: 0 N: 68] (3024)
  • [2008-02-29 14:58]

Ciao Marco, il tuo ritratto è in b/w ma non lo trovo per niente grigio! La nota colorata oltre che nella cravatta è nel tuo sguardo che esprime vivacità e voglia di scoprire nuovi colori. tienilo acceso!
ciao, Cinzia

Hey Marco, you are good-looking indeed! Your mood is well-portrayed in your sceptical expression, the choice of B&W, the light and your PP work. Bravo!
Germans have a word for the feelings you describe in your note: "Weltschmerz". Could that be right?
I do like some of your observations and the spontaneous way in which you write about them.
Wishing you a good weekend with GOOD feelings!
Cordelia :))

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  • hester Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1380 W: 31 N: 1561] (9603)
  • [2008-03-01 12:38]

Hi Marco

Nice portrait shot. Good B&W tones and contrast. Sharp and well composed. The small amount of colour is subtle as well

TFS

Karan

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  • Kiwis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1606 W: 0 N: 173] (12337)
  • [2008-03-02 15:42]
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Ciao Marco,
Good choice of color and beautiful subject :))) The choice of the pink is appropriate perfectly with your state of mind of your note. Good work Marco.
Ciao
Diane

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3257 W: 375 N: 2711] (11640)
  • [2008-03-03 13:43]

Excellent s-p, Mario. Nice pink tie too, btw ;o).
I like the colour desat, and the way the tie remained in colour - and still, it's not the tie that draws our attention. Cool!
TFS

Hallo Marco,
tolles Selbstportrait! Die Idee das Bild in B/W Tönen zu zeigen ist Toll...Gute Arbeit!

Gruß,
Chris

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 995 W: 0 N: 773] (8515)
  • [2008-03-13 11:47]

A very good story and expression Marco,and I totally agree with you,but on the end,arent we all the same.......???????............
jan

...
Come you masters of war
You that build the big guns
You that build the death planes
You that build all the bombs
You that hide behind walls
You that hide behind desks
I just want you to know
I can see through your masks

You that never done nothin'
But build to destroy
You play with my world
Like it's your little toy
You put a gun in my hand
And you hide from my eyes
And you turn and run farther
When the fast bullets fly

Like Judas of old
You lie and deceive
A world war can be won
You want me to believe
But I see through your eyes
And I see through your brain
Like I see through the water
That runs down my drain

You fasten all the triggers
For the others to fire
Then you set back and watch
While the death count gets higher
Then you hide in your mansion
While the young people's blood
Flows out of their bodies
And is buried in the mud

You've thrown the worst fear
That can ever be hurled
Fear to bring children
Into the world
For threatening my baby
Unborn and unnamed
You ain't worth the blood
That runs in your veins

How much do I know
To talk out of turn
You might say that I'm young
You might say I'm unlearned
But there's one thing I know
Though I'm younger than you
Even Jesus would never
Forgive what you do

Let me ask you one question
Is your money that good
Will it buy you forgiveness
Do you think that it could
I think you will find
When your death takes its toll
All the money you made
Will never buy back your soul

And I hope that you die
And your death'll come soon
I will follow your casket
In the pale afternoon
And I'll watch while you're lowered
Down to your deathbed
And I'll stand o'er your grave
'Til I'm sure that you're dead...

Written by Bob Dylan - 1963... cover by RPWL

You are beautiful:)
TFS
kisses

Ania

I just discover your note, it give meaning to be human, it all about being conscious.
Now the picture say even more. An yes that thought is usefull.

Excellent conversion and desat work Marco. A good portrait shot made interesting by you PP work. Well posed and good eye contact. I find the ear and teh shirt a bit brightbut that may be the hoiur of the morning I am looking at it. TFS,
David

Many thanks for your comment on ‘Fire – Swirling Clouds’

ciao Marco,

Credo preferisco le parole che la foto . . . ma le due sono interessanti.

The words are very wise, sad and telling about our modern business world.

grazie,

Richard aka Riccardo

hello Marco,

good definition of your Conscious thought about the world :)wonderful black and white self potrait.. i could never do this.. not brave enough :) i like your eyes.. i say you have tantalizing eyes.. the mole i guess is your distinguish mark of your face.. i have one too but mine is at the center of my lower lip.. quite embarassing sometime peoples keep staring at it.. probably they thought it was a dirt as it is not round.. haha..

anyway excellent sharpness and detail.. love what you done with your shot with little part in colour and most is black and white.. good job..

regars, terry

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  • Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1225 W: 110 N: 3235] (16109)
  • [2008-08-09 1:39]

Nice to meet you here Marco from Italy..my first trip to Italy was in May this year!..a beautiful country.

Very thought provoking words about life and the world that you have written.. great photo, and I like that tie.. specially in red..it draws in the eye. Good work.

Regards
Dawn.

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