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Critiques [Translate]
- ola_kwiatek
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(7525) - [2008-03-09 8:22]
Dear Antonella!
Wonderful Flaminia. Amazing pose and POV. Original lightness. Good capture.
Cheers!
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Hello Antonella
Very interesting picture creative use of DOF lovely big eyes
Well done
Regards Kenny
Bon giorno Antonella.
Nice expression on Flaminia's face, bit pale indeed, think you used too much a noise tool ?
Sad story you wrote. I will listen to that music, as I did to the beautiful music last time.
Thanks for attending me
Very best wishes and keep well.
Jan
ps.
I just have listen to that beautiful piano sound with the wonderfull and sad looking pictures.
Wonder who was that handsome young man?
It has touched me deeply.
Ciao ciao from Jan
The score of music was beautiful. The photo, though, was washed out, pale and oversharpened from what I can see. Her face could use dome color. Good placement of the model, however in your pov. TFS
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- Urfaust
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1541 W: 70 N: 2387]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-g-g.gif)
(10433) - [2008-03-10 0:50]
a colori.. finalmente!! buona variante sul tema.. non capisco esattamente l'ombra di lato.. la compo andrebbe bene lo stesso, credo, anche senza.. spendida espressione catturata.. la musica di sottofondo è perfetta!! ottima atmosfera.. brava!
ciao Marco
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- pablominto
(27428)
- [2008-03-10 7:30]
Hello Antonella,
Pleasant portrait, a different kind of composition!
Works well with me, and colours are appreciated too as youth look better in RGB...
Interesting eyes!
Greetings,
Pablo -
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- Silvio2006
(26655)
- [2008-03-10 14:04]
Ciao Antonella, tua figlia è una santa, se ci avesssi provato comn la mia mi avrebbe fracassato la macchina fotografica in testa, bel ritratto anche a colori, complimenti a te ed alla modella dagli splendidi occhi, brava, ciao Silvio
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- Vaibhav27
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 206 W: 44 N: 245]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-s-g.gif)
(1191) - [2008-03-12 5:48]
Hi Antonella,
Nice shot,good composition,
Nicely focused,
Good job,
TFS....
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- shelbeesmom
(33712)
- [2008-03-12 8:35]
I love her expression Antonella! Very nice shot, natural, excellent in color! Could be a little sharper image, but this works well!
B-)
Linda
Antonella
Excellent composition, it realy is a good composition
perfectly presented ..also your note!
Regards
John T
ps
a late welcome to Treklens (^_^)
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- peterhanington
![Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 27 W: 117 N: 59]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/s-g-g.gif)
(369) - [2008-04-02 11:11]
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- Liberty
(5609)
- [2008-04-02 15:11]
Bonjour Antonella,
J'aime beaucoup l'expression de ta fille. C'est un beau portrait très naturel. Bravo.
Merci !
-Josée
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- yamataraja
(5785)
- [2008-04-02 18:22]
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Bonjour Antonella
....Dis-moi ce qui se passe à Montréal dans les rues ...
Je vois que vous versez dans le portrait, un défi de taille s'il en est un. En visitant ta galerie, je me suis arrêté à cette photo particulièrement pour l'attitude du modèle. Ici, on retrouve un sourire, ce qui n'est pas fréquent dans les différentes poses; et dans ce sourire, je trouve un petit peu de timidité malgré une attitude rebelle bien illustrée par la chevelure, le veston de cuir, le teint un peu pâle et le rouge très discret. Je trouve la pose très belle et très intéressante. Malheureusement, je sens la jeune fille coincée dans son cadre, ayant plus d'espace derrière elle, elle n'a nulle part à aller la pauvre. J'aurais donc placé le sujet dans la partie gauche. Tout ceci n'est que mon opinion bien entendu.
Merci d'avoir partagé ce sourire avec nous.
Mes hommages au modèle. Jean Gabin lui aurait certainement dit :"T'as d'beaux yeux tu sais"
Serge
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- photophantom
(3153)
- [2008-04-20 4:47]
Properly lit, nice treatment, gorgeous model and nice expression. Well done Antonella.
Dennis
Hello Antonella!
Lovely portrait of Flaminia!
Great light!
Triste la storia di Luca Flores...
Tanti saluti!
Lili
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- Karey
(771)
- [2008-05-28 2:28]
Hi, I like the dark effect to the left. It brings us into the image. She is very beautiful you would be proud. Cheers, Karey
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Hello again Antonella...
This is another excceptional portrait of your daughter - her beauty is surely a reflection of her mother's. Great composition and very nice setup. Her eyes, the angle of her head, and her smile give the viewer the feeling that she is quietly smiling at someone just off-camera. Your focus on the eyes allows their colour to come through clearly, adding to the subtlety of the overall colour palette. Beautiful.
I have again been inspired to do a WS to frame the image - the colours of the intermedaite and outside elements of the frame are from colour samples taken from her jacket and the iris of her right eye.