Lavinia

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• drymd29 (7603)
• [2008-03-13 13:10]

You show potential; the girl shows her given nature.
Very good work; naughty and easy nonnervous look; great line work. The coloured eye spoils my enthousiasm a bit.
You don't need that trick.
Huub

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• codge (611)
• [2008-03-13 13:11]

What a lovely well thought out portrait, its well worked. maybe it would be a little better if you had not cut her hair off on top of her head. And yes loads of potential
Regards
Codge

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• x-ray (264)
• [2008-03-13 15:38]
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Hello Flaminia
Very good shot . very different well done
Greetings from Scotland
Kenny

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• OWO (2335)
• [2008-03-15 4:15]

Hi Flaminia,

Indeed a great portrait in your own style. The look into the lens is like making contact with the model, works great .The rule of thirds perfectly focussed by her eyes...I do, however, agree with drymd29: the blue eyes is a bit too much attraction.

Ciao,

Edwin

PS: I'll be back with points this weekend, fresh out this time

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• ARGI (1131)
• [2008-03-15 6:20]

Well done Flaminia.
Your POV is excellent and the b&w offers to the portrait the mood it needs.
Good idea the colors beautiful eyes of your model but i think that give to the picture a bit cold appearence.
In any case is a great portrait.
best regards Argyris

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• Urfaust (10433)
• [2008-03-17 4:44]

i agree.. Flaminia..
sorry, i didnt seen it before.. thanks for this detail!! i really appreciated it! ;)
il ritratto è speciale.. compreso il PP.. che mi piace molto!!.. c'è qualcosa che mi sfugge.. e che mi colpisce!! ben fatto F!
my compliments
ciao Marco

p.s.: dico flaminia.. lavinia.. ne hai qualche altra di amica.. tipo emilia, virginia?.. ;) immagino vi siate viste.. ed abbiate subito capito di avere qualcosa in comune.. ;)) bye

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• Black_Dog (3214)
• [2008-03-18 3:16]

Howdy Flaminia!
Lavinia is very beautiful. Amazing blue eye! Wonderful pose, wonderful smile. Marvelous and mysterious girl.
Good portrait.
TFS!

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• Silvio2006 (26655)
• [2008-03-20 12:26]

Ciao Flaminia, gran bel ritratto in bianco e nero con deliziosa desaturazione che lascia lo splendido colore degli occhi, magnific l'espressione, ottima la nitidezza, brava, ciao Silvio

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• rminkow (5933)
• [2008-03-28 15:52]

Hi Flaminia...this is a nicely composed shot...good work on the lighting and the details. I like the colored detail in this shot.

Roger

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• lilimih33 (13802)
• [2008-04-01 2:59]

Hello Flaminia!
Wonderful portrait and great composition!
Excellent work!
Best regards!
Lili

...I return... :)

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• SylvainMichel (1064)
• [2008-04-15 2:17]

Bonjour Flaminia

Quelle composition !

Félicitations

Sylvain

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• cinca (3036)
• [2008-04-25 14:24]

ciao Flaminia, gran bel ritratto , mi piace come lo hai composto e il taglio, anche la desaturazione parziale è una buona idea. Brava!
Ciao, Cinzia

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• Hendrika (17846)
• [2008-07-05 7:21]

Hi Flaminia,

Lavinia must have loved this portrait.
What I do or do not love in this picture is pure personal - I think the eye is too blue.
Her whole posture and look are great and that somehow gets less attention by showing us that 1 blue eye. (does she have blue eyes?)

TFS
Els