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Copyright: Marco Rossi (Urfaust) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1326 W: 69 N: 2040] (8978)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-04-20
Categories: Daily Life, Decisive Moment, Friends/Family, Mood, Portrait
Camera: Nikon D-80, Nikkor 18-135mm f/3.5-5.6G ED-IF AFS-DX
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/160 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Adorable Kids 2, Marco's Feelings, portraits [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-05-12 14:59
Viewed: 547
Points: 134
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
in my thoughts..

44 days after.. my born..
my thoughts are as sounds...
as coloured images.. full of imagination..
there is the light of the sun.. not so definite..
there is the smell of the milk i usually like..
there is the voice of my mommy..
that i immidiately indentify..
the smile of my father.. warm and quiet..
and noise.. and the delicacy of the wind..
and the comfortable bed where i usually delight..
There are other images.. that i dont understand..
And the quiet.. wonderful recall of my mother hands!!

I like to be a little thinking girl..
and i think to be so pretty.. If u don’t mind ;))

little elisa.. maybe is making her first thinking...
here other images catched for you.. WS1 and WS2

my mood is Steve Wonder..

comments and critics are welcome



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  • Hendrika Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1553 W: 454 N: 3488] (15562)
  • [2008-05-12 15:10]

Oh Marco,

How precious is this - I see she likes daddy kissing her.
I so recognise this look, Myriam was here this morning (and kissed by everyone of course).
I think it is very difficult to get the perfect focus if the face is at an angle - so I now try to get everything I want to have sharp in one line (you see her left eye and the fabric of her sleeve are pinsharp.
A have a whole bunch of picture in which only half the face is unsharp - maybe someone else will give you another solution, because my technical skills are just not good enough at this moment.
She gets a kiss from me as well!

TFS Elisa, I love to see her growing up,

Els
:)

Hello Marco!
Lovely your composition!
Good crop!
The WS1 and WS2 are beautiful too!
The song, nice!
Best regards!
Lili

She will be happy to have such a portrait...even if with an eye out of focus, dear "zio Marco"... ;)
TFS

Marto

Quel regard pour un si jeune BB!
Momant bien capté!
Bravò!
Fréd

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  • Kiwis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1442 W: 0 N: 164] (10772)
  • [2008-05-12 16:13]

Ciao Marco,
Beautiful tenderizing scene. Out focus is forgotten in front of such a moment. In workshop the photographs are also very beautiful and touching. Beautiful work and excellent thought my friend.
Ciao
Didi

Boa noite Marco

It´s not for being a baby- it´s really a great portrait. Great moment you have take. Stunning posture.Congratulations

My best regards

teresat

Hello Marco,


This is your baby girl?And in ws is you holding her?
Is a pretty little baby,so sweet and inocent.
I love this one most...i love shot with baby's black and white.

sabina

Ciao, Marco,
A delightful portrait in B/W of this new member of TL fans:)
May he grow up a healthy and worthy person pleased with colours, smells and lights of the day and night.
I'd give more than 2 pts but there's limit, sorry:)
TFS
Valerka:)

cool shot good capture, as if she is so curious on everything she sees, really sweet image

tfs
cris(",)

pretty little Elisa in her dad's arm.. probably that's what she thought :) lovely capture in black and white.. the ws are great too. tfs..

regards, terry

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer [C: 759 W: 0 N: 0] (5475)
  • [2008-05-12 23:01]

Hi...
Lovely shot...
Nice composition...
Best regards...
Andro

ciao dear marco
magnificent black white portrait picture.magnificent lovely baby and composition.well done.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

Bene Elisa!
tra poco comincerai anche a sorridere, il sorriso volontario intendo, e allora saranno click continui da parte dello "zio"!
L'atterraggio sul pianeta terra resterà una delle foto a cui sono maggiormente affezionata, qui su TL!
ciao, Antonella

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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1473 W: 1 N: 98] (10671)
  • [2008-05-13 1:25]

nice expression !

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  • sela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 324 W: 1 N: 182] (2021)
  • [2008-05-13 1:29]

For me the absolute highlights of this day.Wonderfully composed with so much feelings.Thank you Marco.
Best regards Rose

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3108 W: 60 N: 2143] (15798)
  • [2008-05-13 1:34]

Ciao Marco.
Little Elisa, is an adoring lovely baby.
Whole life is waiting for her. Sure she will love it, and there parents will love to see hare growing up.
Ciao ciao from Jan

Hi Marco,
Very good tight cropping to frame this beautiful child. Nice complementing poem too. Well composed and presented. Well done! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

Hi Marco,
What a talking eyes!...thinking also....
Well done tight croppind. A masterpiece..
TFS
Selahattin E

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3238 W: 644 N: 1800] (15404)
  • [2008-05-13 2:38]

Excellent tight crop !
Beautiful B&W work.


thanks,
v

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3989 W: 207 N: 3331] (25413)
  • [2008-05-13 2:54]

Hi Marco

Effective tight framing, with superb sharpness & graphism, of lights against darks. Tfs! Ciao!

Hi Marco
Beautiful image with many nice feelings
I like this tendernes look
TFS
Ciao,Braca

Expression and composition made this photo plus the baby itself is adorable.
Dennis

Hi Marco,
This is PRECIOUS--- simply wonderful moment captured. Love the B&W for the mood. TFS Julie

Hi Marco,

Too early thinking the world . . but maybe it's needed to do it now . .
Great shot my friend with lovely note . .

Tfs,
TJutjut

Hi Marco,
Lovely your compositon,
Excellent POV. and contrast,
Nice WS too, and colors.
beautiful moments and Portrait,
Very well done,
My compliments
Michel

hahahaha funny Marco!!
beautiful huge eyes:)

Great b&w compo!i love it!
This is my beloved song for you;)
Father & Daughter!!
14 days...to get to Italy..i'm counting days hours minutes..?
trust your intuition;)
TFS

Baci tesoro!
Ania

Hello Marco,
Wonderful portrait, excelent b/w work, and a great composition. Those eyes can kill with beauty. Congrats, jmb

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 661 W: 0 N: 917] (3912)
  • [2008-05-13 7:35]

Hello Marco
Wonderful shot of this baby.
Lying on its stomach staring at who knows what, probably the lines in the blanket and already thinking this would look good in a photo.
Dot

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1928 W: 59 N: 1815] (11561)
  • [2008-05-13 7:59]

Hi Marco...
- Excellent portrait
- Great moment
- Cute baby
- interesting note - story...
Greetings,
George

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 486 W: 34 N: 41] (5159)
  • [2008-05-13 8:35]

Hi Marco,
in my feeling, this baby's eyes tell "what is all???",,,like the baby in "2001: A Space Odyssey".
a baby is the border between nothing and all, and in the unfixed all yet. this condition is quite unknown for us and beyond our imaginations. we cannot interpret it by our own way...
so I'll see this shot as "which is strange its eyes or the world".
thank you for your suggestive shot,
Akihisa

hi Marco

Quite a striking photo to show the baby in such pose. A baby has no worries, they are from heaven.

tfs, bill

I have really enjoyed seeing this, and the ws pictures as well. Such a little DOLLY!!! I love her expression, and those beautiful eyes!! Well done!!! TFS

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  • Kli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 128 W: 5 N: 105] (977)
  • [2008-05-13 9:46]
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Un enfant ... Le prolongement d'une vie ... un peu de soi, un peu de l'autre, un aboutissement ... Un nouveau regard qui se porte sur le monde ... Quel sera le sien ? Il semble déjà bien à l'écoute !
Un magnifique portrait que tu signes là !
Bravo Marco.
Amitiés.
Pascalie.

Ciao Marco :)

Un bien tendre portrait ... des yeux purs, un regard innocent qui observe le monde qui l'entoure ... la candeur, la douceur, la tendresse d'un enfant ... le réconfort de l'épaule d'un parent, l'assurance d'être protégé ... une photo très émouvante !
Un peu floue, c'est vrai ... mais un enfant d'où qu'il vienne, même flou, est le bijou le plus précieux que la vie nous offre ...
Ciao

Marylou ;)

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  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1202 W: 285 N: 1312] (7043)
  • [2008-05-13 15:06]

Hi Marco.
Natural portrait of baby captured and presented. Sharp focus on one eye. I was trying to take same photo of my kids ... is no possible because they are impossible to stop ;) Only when they are sleeping but then no eyes open .... :)
Good choice to show this in black and white.
Regards.
Janek Kloss

Hi Marco,

I am happy to see another photo of Elisa. As I can see she's doing well:)
Very touching image - the babies always are a 'beautiful medium' for sending messages, not those too-cute ones, but like this one - thoughtful and sensitive... I like your framing/cropping and choice of B&W.
Very impressive. With a soul:)
Best,
Iza

a great shot my friend, the mood is there, the title is THE good interpretation, the crop can't be better IMO, can't get closer without losing something, like this.. is perfect,
& talking book Stevie's album... wow :)
especialy this wonderful title !
jo

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  • cinca Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 243 W: 0 N: 39] (2251)
  • [2008-05-14 1:49]

Ciao Marco, hai colto con gran sensibilità l'espressione vivissima e allo stesso tempo quasi contemplativa della piccola Elisa (il fuoco parziale aiuta), quasi uno stato di transfert con l'universo che crescendo diventa sempre più difficile raggiungere. Mi piacciono anche le manine in primo piano, anch'esse mezzo di gioia e scoperta. Foto tenera, mi fa venire voglia di tornare bambina, ahimè...
Ciao, Cinzia

Hi Marco.
great lovely portrait and beautiful song.I liked also white and black work.TFS.Necla.:)later.

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  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2007 W: 133 N: 2937] (16014)
  • [2008-05-14 3:03]

Oh Marco....

So gorgeous... such a little precious thing... :D the both ws is sooo cute and sooo warm hearted.. you did so well with capturing the cute little one, beautiful shot my friend, just beautiful!


Have a nice day,

Cheers,
Sweety

Hello Marco,
Tender and soft moment.
Agree with Hendrika...and still it is adorable photo.
Good choice of BW. I wish Elisa the best of best in the world. TFS
Vandana

Hello Marco. I like the sharpness of the image. The softness and deep concentration of the child is very well observed here. Beautiful crop and well done. Jusni

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1986 W: 375 N: 2060] (20518)
  • [2008-05-14 8:30]

Merhaba myfriend Marco..
Excellent job with beautiful photo, wonderful shot and a very beautiful portrait....
Selamlar...
Milas...

Hi Marco,
So cute baby...Lovely composition.TFS.
Ciao,

hAyAti

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1697 W: 58 N: 0] (15292)
  • [2008-05-15 0:36]

Hi Marco ;)
Great macro portrait and maybe one of the first's expressions...
Ciao,
J ;)

WOW marco
A super Shot
so simple and yet so very intense.
Great capture

Hi dear friend,
lovely posting!
No words are nedeed, but your note is wonderful too.
My congrats!
Best wishes,
Ioana

hello Marco
i am sorry i am late with my remark on this Delicate photograph .
wonderful expression captured here
beautiful baby girl
i like the presentation, light and focus
nice framing

regards
Manuj Mehta

Ciao Marco! I didn't know... Congratulations to you and your wife on your newborn baby girl! She's so precious! She'll be a great PISCES! I was born on the 6th of March so, I can tell... :)
Very good pp work here. Excellent tonal range and focus on half-the image. I don't have negative comments, I'm too busy watching dear Elisa! She reminds me of my son when he was so little... :) I've been saying this over and over and I strongly believe it...there's no other greater joy in life than a child!
Best regards to the three of you,
Diana
(**)

Hello Marco,
Nice portrait!
A different but dynamic and attractive pose, a well composed presentation and the tight framing works well...
Greetings,
Pablo -

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3213 W: 364 N: 2548] (11085)
  • [2008-05-16 15:18]

Your crop, and the focal plane that begins near her left eye, make this a stunning portrait, Marco. Really beautiful. The note is too... she's got a whole life of learning in front of her, but so do you, still... and a whole lot of thinking to do as well: which picture will be next ? ;o)))
Nice work, my friend. And a good choice for b&w.
TFS

Wonderful image Marco and a precious child. Nice tones and textures and good focus. TFS,
David

Ciao Marco, splendidi occhioni e bel ritratto con un modello che più bello non potevi trovare, grazie per la canzonne, amo molto il grande Stevie Wonder, ciao Silvio

Ciao Marco,
La piccola Elisa cresce bene.
Anch'io sono sempre mi incuriosisco sempre su che generi di pensieri possano avere i neonati. Di certo queglio occhi sempre spalancati e fissi cercano di catturare ogni piccolo particolare. In questo caso sembano fissare il vuoto... chissà che pensieri!
Bravo, ottimo scatto!
Dario

He is a philosopher.

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  • Ber Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 190 W: 34 N: 13] (2003)
  • [2008-05-18 5:50]

Hi Marco
Excellent composition and crop. Wonderful moment captured. Very impressive.
regards

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1549 W: 0 N: 1] (9807)
  • [2008-05-18 11:05]

Hi marco
beautiful.
Gr Jos
P**

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  • Loup Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 85 W: 0 N: 47] (959)
  • [2008-05-19 7:03]

Hi Marco,
Moment magique!!!
Elle a un regard magnifique et semble se demander ce qu'elle est venue faire sur cette terre ...
Superbe capture!
Magnifique joyaux pour ses parents...
Bravo tu as très bien su capter ce moment.
Jasmine

Hello Marco,

Wonderful posting, you captured your little princess very well, interesting crop. I like very much her face expression. All the best for you!
Sorina

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  • hester Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1365 W: 31 N: 1484] (9211)
  • [2008-05-20 12:28]

Hi Marco

Great POV, composition and wonderful expression from your charming model. Lovely portrait

TFS

Karan

Hi Marco, beautiful, great shot. impresive expres. TFS

Hello Marco
Lovely close up and natural attitude of the subject. The crop is perfect. Part of the face is out of focus.
Thanks for sharing
Serge

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  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 516 W: 37 N: 564] (3599)
  • [2008-05-23 3:06]

Ciao Marco
Just congratulations. Excellent verse, special mood and great expression. Probably thinking of her nest share of milk!!!
TFS
Argiris

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1261 W: 119 N: 1825] (15131)
  • [2008-05-23 12:46]

Hello Marco, very beautiful portrait and a very touvhing note, thanks!

Mario

Ciao Marco

Wonderful photo, beautiful composition , very good details, I like the the cute one
very much . TFS

Best regards,

John

great precious moment nice black and white portrait.

tfs!

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  • ttreen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1520 W: 111 N: 3314] (13334)
  • [2008-05-24 10:08]

Hello Marco
This is lovely.. the notes and the photo match perfect... she is a very, very cute little one.. lots of thinking going on.. I love the ws2 with her giving the "raspberry"

Tricia

Hello Marco!
Nice shot my friend.Great work.
Ciao!
A.

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  • kross1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 259 W: 9 N: 261] (1090)
  • [2008-06-17 19:34]

Marco,
I really like this portrait! The capture of the babies expression is priceless. Your POV is excellent and I like the focus on the babies eyes. Treasure these moments they grow up to fast. Awesome shot Marco.
Regards,
Kevin

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