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White mood
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Copyright: Flaminia Wish (Ctrl_Alt_Canc) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 47 W: 21 N: 43] (428)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-07-06
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/6.7, 1/160 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Daily Favorite [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-07-06 13:08
Viewed: 375
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
For the first time, I was engaged as a photographer in a family ceremony, yuppi! :D

This young lady in white is the party protagonist. I shot her in various poses; this one is my favourite.

Comments and critiques are welcome! ;)



There were many children playing together and this was the soundtrack:

Time After Time - Tuck & Patti
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Hi Flaminia,

I think this is a terrific photo showing great expression with the face and arms. The black and white is a wonderful choice for this type photo.

Nice soft lighting too...

Lisa

Bonsoir Flaminia,
juste te dire que je trouve ton prénom charmant, voila c’est fait lol
Euh pour la musique c’est un peu trop doux …
cordialement
Jp007

ciao Flaminia..
mi piace molto.. soprattutto la posa e tutto questo bianco.. espressione perfetta!! many thanks ;))
greetings from Oslo ;))
ciao Marco

Pretty model, good light and nice pose, good b&w tones too.

Did you use noise reduction for this? There are areas where I can see quite a lot of jpeg compression or pixellation that looks like NR. I think I would prefer to see the unedited version.

Rew

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  • lele Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 692 W: 38 N: 740] (6626)
  • [2008-07-08 9:21]

ciao flaminia...bellissimo lavoro...buono il bianco e nero...ottima composizione....bellissimo soggetto...
lele

ciao Flaminia
Il Bianco e Nero deve essere un dono di famiglia
per voi considerando gli scatti di tua madre
Molto bella l'espressione della ragazzinza
anche se ha un qualcosa di prematuramente
adulto nello sguardo quasi di velata paura
della vita da grandi
Brava la modella
e Brava l'autrice
Saluti da Vincenzo

Congratulazioni Flaminia per il tuo esordio come fotografo ufficiale:), bellissimo ritratto in bianco e nero, splendida l'espressione della ragazza, brava, ciao Silvio

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  • skoya Silver Star Critiquer [C: 17 W: 2 N: 5] (105)
  • [2008-07-21 19:22]

Waht a great innocent portrait, all the attitude of a young teen as she primps just a bit more for the event.

I look at her eyes and I feel she is focused very intently on something outside of view, which makes me want to see it! You have some lovely portrait work in your gallery Faminia.
The B+W works well with this shot and surprisingly the eye isn't drawn to the white of her top, because of her stare.

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