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Waiting for the customers


Waiting for the customers
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Copyright: renzo bonan (archimaticatwo) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 42 W: 9 N: 20] (1103)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008
Categories: Daily Life, Food
Camera: Olympus SP570UZ
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-08-08 8:04
Viewed: 305
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 32
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Waiting for the customers. The tables are in a restaurant in front of the sea.
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Very nice graphic effect with the repetition of these elements, perfectly sharp ! Seems a scene reflected by differents mirrors. Nice light and colours too !
Jean

Hi Renzo; great shot! I really like symmetry, and this is a perfect example of that, with all the tables set in precisely the same manner. Excellent!
Trudy

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2936 W: 618 N: 3365] (15449)
  • [2008-08-08 8:43]

Hi Renzo,
Very well seen and done!
Your composition is a good example of perspective! Great clarity of colors especially on the glasses. You rendered the light finely. The white tablecloths and ashtrays was surely a challenge that you you took up with brio. I like the contrast with the wooden chairs! Congratulations! Annie

Great shot. Good perspective. Very well done.

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  • Ruut Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 273 W: 8 N: 33] (1271)
  • [2008-08-08 10:50]

Hi Renzo,
i like this composition very much; it' s strong!
The repetition works okay. Very well done,
Ruut

Hey Renzo

Great shot. I like the repetition as well as the single motive. The reflections in the glasses are excellent.
TFS
Albatros

Hi Renzo,
Awesome picture...What a composition...Very nice.


Cheers,
Sarvesh Damle

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2879 W: 368 N: 2718] (11723)
  • [2008-08-08 12:39]

A very nice set-up, Renzo, and a good PoV to portray it.
Colours are nice and crisp, but I think I'd prefer it with a tighter crop from the right, as the top part looks a bit busy with the fence... on the other hand, you'd lose the chairs in the bottom. Mmmm... difficult. So, after all, I like it as it is.
TFS

Hello Renzo !

Great observation ! Composition and perspective are excellent . Well done!
Robert

Ciao Renzo,
Grande idea perfettamente realizzata, comlimenti, mi piace moltissimo.
ciao
andrea

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  • Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1165 W: 105 N: 3258] (16417)
  • [2008-08-08 17:32]

Excellent composition here Renzo of the repitition of tables and chairs..well seen..and a nice light too.

Thanks for sharing
regards
Dawn

Great daily life shot of repetition. I love the full colors, the details, the crop, and the lighting.
Well caught!!
TFS

I love images like this-so many of us just walk on by and don't see a photograph in a simple subject--you have caught it well--tfs---Lynne

ciao Renzo..
ottima prospettiva.. sembra un ripetizione dello stesso soggetto all'infinito! ;)) mi piace moltissimo!! ottimo senso fotografico!! bravo!
ciao Marco

Hello Renzo,

Nice pattern you found here! Congratulations!

Greetings, Dennis

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  • cinca Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 362 W: 2 N: 87] (3420)
  • [2008-08-10 14:41]

Certosino chi ha preparato i tavoli, ottimo l'occhio fotografico di chi ha colto la ripetizione prospettica. Di effetto!
compliments
cinzia

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