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The tower


The tower
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Copyright: renzo bonan (archimaticatwo) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 43 W: 9 N: 23] (1193)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Olympus SP570UZ
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-10-13 6:50
Viewed: 144
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Campanile della Basilica Palladiana, Vicenza.
The clock tower of the Basilica Palladiana, Vicenza, a sunny day of october.
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Ciao Renzo,
bello questo close up!!!
Bellissimi colori netti e saturi e bel grafismo!
Chiara

Bonjour Renzo,

Once again, this is an attractive composition. I would not have thought of centering on one half of the clock!

The seagull on the left gives a positive distration and the eye goes several times to each part of the picture. The picture would have been so different if it was a plane and not a living animal! I really prefer the seagull here as it brings the tower "into life" (a part of the daily life).

I hope you don't mind if I put you in my favorites, because your work is always a source of pleasure and learning.

Sincerely,

Damien.

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  • Anna- Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 56 W: 1 N: 15] (645)
  • [2008-10-13 9:36]
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Ciao Renzo,
anche noi, a Clusone, abbiamo uno splendido orologio planetario che tutto il mondo ci invidia :)
Orologio Planetario Fanzago

Metà cielo e metà torre, metà orologio... una composizione interamente fantastica, compreso il gabbiano!
Buona serata
Anna

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  • Reflex Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 282 W: 109 N: 41] (1740)
  • [2008-10-13 11:28]

Very original POV and nicely composed. The bird is a + ! Well seen !
Greetings
Jean

original, minimal,
regards
jc

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  • cinca Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 388 W: 2 N: 111] (3665)
  • [2008-10-14 15:17]

Ciao, composizione molto bella, essenziale ma con un grafismo potente. Il gabbiano che vola e il tempo pure, le sue ali richiamano il disegno delle lancette. Gran dettaglio e colori. Molto bravo.
cinzia

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