potrait 125

Critiques [Translate]

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• Mirra78 (4674)
• [2008-10-13 10:07]

Hi Giorgio,
Nice portrait. I love the lighting here!
I also like the 'green background', this way she looks very natural and relaxed. Good use of DOF, too.
Tfs,
Iza

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• chrysalis (323)
• [2008-10-13 11:18]
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Sorry, it doesn't work for me. The lighting is just too uneven to make this an attractive portrait. It's not only the difference in exposure (with part of her hair being OEd, I think), but also in tinting - the right part of her face is warm; the left is cool

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• cobra112 (3101)
• [2008-10-13 12:20]

Ciao Giorgio. I primi piani di persone non li ho ancora affrontati. Ritengo questo ben fatto sia per il contrasto che per il canonico fuoco perfetto sugli occhi. Ottima anche la sfocatura di sfondo. Personalamente ritengo apprezzabili i riflessi forti sulla pelle.

Roberto

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• deanophotos (2582)
• [2008-10-13 13:53]

Hi Giorgio
I think one of your "fans" is a little over critical on this occasion.
The warm light on the side of her face is actually very nice and flattering and the only slight over exposure I see is the flower in the back-ground. My problem with this shot is I cant help my eye being drawn to look up the models nose, maybe thats just a kinky fetish (hope not)so for that reason the angle is a little un-flattering on the model, i'm no expert but maybe on this occasion her head should have been tilted towards the lens and the eyes making contact also, maybe this would draw my eyes elsewhere. Still a very good effort though.

Dean.