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my branches


my branches
Photo Information
Copyright: Cristian Dan (crisd) (9)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-07
Categories: Nature
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-10-20 15:40
Viewed: 255
Points: 2
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He offered me a leaf like a hand with fingers.
I offered him a hand like a leaf with teeth.
He offered me a branch like an arm.
I offered him my arm like a branch.
He tipped his trunk towards me like a shoulder.
I tipped my shoulder to him like a knotted trunk.
I could hear his sap quicken, beating like blood.
He could hear my blood slacken like rising sap.
I passed through him.
He passed through me.
I remained a solitary tree.
He
a solitary man.
(Nichita Stanescu)

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  • amm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 227 W: 29 N: 86] (634)
  • [2005-10-20 16:10]

Bienvenue sur TL avec cette belle seconde photo! Bravo! Une petite note serait "un plus", elle permettrait de situer l'endroit de la vue.
amm

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