Zen inside

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• brettf1 (4852)
• [2005-11-22 16:16]
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Hello Francesco,

Very nice graphical image. The B&W tones are very good, but what really attracts me are all the lines and shapes neatly arranged. Nice photo of a nice garden. Great job on both!
Kevin

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• silver (0)
• [2005-11-22 19:08]

Nicely done. The B&W adds an excellent tone to the sand, and you filled the frame vey nicely. Excellent.

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• Eru (2760)
• [2005-11-22 22:47]

Hello Francesco,

Excellente idea this vertical-zenithal view!
Great composition and the B/W is a good idea too.
TFS!

Marc.

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• emanuela (1013)
• [2005-11-23 9:41]
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Hei là! what a surpirse you have a zen garden in your home? well nicely arranged and captured, how did you take the shot from the 2d floor?
great job Francesco
ciao
emanuela

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• drymd29 (7621)
• [2005-11-23 16:05]
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Hi Francesco; I like these shapes; can you tell something about the characteristics of Zen-art; e.g. in you note? I'm interested; Zen is used in philosophy as well, but in art I'm looking for more information. Your top-down view here is great.
Huub

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• tulare (308)
• [2005-11-25 7:03]
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Hi Francesco,

Very good B&W shot here, I really appreciate the geometrical lines here.
Special Zen feeling rendered by the lines used to draw circles on the sand.
A very fine work of precision as well to do the garden as to take the scene.

Regards,
Lawrence.

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• sasa (510)
• [2005-11-25 9:23]

Hi,
Beautiful shot, composition is brilliant and with vertical (top->down) PoV...

Since it's a miniature, maybe you should have added some additional light source to create stronger shadows (and contrast)...

...anyways, it's a great shot this way, if you haven't said that it's a miniature, I would never guess... :)

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• Paky (0)
• [2005-11-25 11:40]

Beautiful zen garden! congratulations

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• persimon (2406)
• [2005-11-26 2:28]

Wonderful capture. I like your centered view from above. It really accentuates the movement of line throughout the little garden. I really like the B&W too.

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• LuciG (8681)
• [2005-11-29 11:48]

HELLO FRANCESCO!
I was quite surprised agter reading your note. I thought of a picture taken from a plane!
Great Job and very, very interesting point of view!
Congratulations.
Luci

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• letr (6780)
• [2005-12-02 12:54]

I like the pov here and all those curves in combination with the rocks .nice shot !!

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• OtObOx (508)
• [2005-12-11 18:30]

Hello Francesco !

Nice home made garden :)
The idea to take the garden at the vertical is a good one because unusual (and I like things unusual). You loose the deeph but the lines and curves are now on the first plan :)
Good composition too and the B&W is well done :)

Jean-Marc

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• jafsc (4621)
• [2005-12-20 6:22]

Simplement formidable Francesco. Les tons de gris, la netteté, un très bon POV :)
José

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• mr_pedro (4644)
• [2006-01-02 6:18]

Hi Francesco,

Very nice shapes and shades. A picture to think about what it is. B&W works well.

Cheers,
Pedro

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• jacojvr (4032)
• [2006-01-02 23:36]

Really good photo Francesco. Looks great in B&W.
love the lines.
jaco

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• lollie (62)
• [2006-01-13 23:18]
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Superb composition Francesco, very graphical and beautyful lines and shadow.

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• tropicalrips (0)
• [2006-01-14 9:56]

well seen photo francesco :)
the POV is excellent, well composed