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thinking~picture


thinking~picture
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Copyright: Charlote Haznere (lote) (268)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-05-25
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/8, 1/500 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-05-25 16:05
Viewed: 600
Points: 8
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To envy-me: mancclaudiu 2 06-21 07:24
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Hello Sharlote,
Well rendered meditative mood, with a subtle sensual touch. Your model performs very well: she really gives the impression of being in thoughts. Besides: I would have called your photo "Thinking" or "In thoughts", thus dropping the word "~picture" (Keep it simple! Saying less often means saying more).
Centered composition works well here. Good depht of field and harmonious colours. If I really wanted to be severe ( but I don't want to ;-) ), I'd say that the horizon is not 100% straight, but it's a detail probably due to the (wide?) angle you used.
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

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  • d0m89 (45)
  • [2007-05-25 17:23]

nice photo, beautiful pov and girl! ;) i like the wood very much. was it really that dark there?

Does she ward the woods?

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  • envy-me (96)
  • [2007-05-26 12:38]
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cclaudiu ||> no.i'm not.:D

man tā liekas,ka šitās bildes pie tiem baļķiem ir labākās manā mūžā...:Dpaldies,ka esi tik laba fotogrāfe!!!:)*

inspiring scenery, calls for a small workshop. hope you like it.

The composition's very good.
I like this carefully organized mess of wood-pieces.
The lady's meditating. At least the wood-pieces make me think so
(sure I can see it from her face, but the wood…).

P.S. Please, don't put her on fire. She's not Joan of Arc :))

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