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Photo Information
Copyright: Gundega Dege (sundew) (3721)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-06-21
Categories: Mood
Camera: Olympus E300
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-06-29 4:05
Viewed: 580
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 8
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ah, perfect!
I am in awe, beautiful picture :)
I like the facial expression.

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  • SRB Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 106 W: 0 N: 51] (803)
  • [2006-06-29 6:29]

i really like your style, this is again a beautifull picture. compo, light looks great, but aso in this picture i think the jewelry is distractive, it too much there. i rather would see the nakedness with the had, now the model is somehow still a bit a model and doesn't blend in the picture, it hard to explain what i mean, but i hope you understand my point.
TFS
greetz
srb

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  • Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 549 W: 69 N: 53] (5119)
  • [2006-06-29 10:04]

well, not much that Kim has on himself anyway ...

Good control of overall brownie tones, maintaining the matching color and contrast at same time. Somehow though his right hand looks as cutt-oof, i think it would have helped if the tip of his elbow was visible. Good work.

A.

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  • c3101 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 161 W: 0 N: 94] (1246)
  • [2006-06-29 12:46]

Excellent work Gundega ! the background works well with the model. Great tonal range, very interesting subject !
Very well done !

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