Maybe I'll be a ballerine

Critiques [Translate]

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• leeloo (2687)
• [2008-10-21 2:26]

Dear Elena Jurshina!
Nice girl.
Amazing scene.
Wonderful light and shadow.
Good composition.
TFS!

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• Black_Dog (3571)
• [2008-10-21 2:41]

Howdy Elenka!
Very nice picture. Original lightness and shadows. Very good perspective. Excellent princess.
Regards!

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• adoski21 (33)
• [2008-10-21 2:46]

Hi Elena,

A wonderful capture. Lighting and shadow works very well.

I like the part where she tip-toe.. =)

TFS

{:o)

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• HeadlessGuy (1595)
• [2008-10-21 2:49]

Nice photo.

A lot of atmosphere and mood in this one.

I think the composition is too tight especially over her head. I think more room over her would make her look small in the frame and add more to the atmosphere and mood. Showing the little girl in the big world dreaming about her future

I like the lines in the floor, wall and shadows and think a wider framing would enhance these as well and add interest.

Nice shot!
Jens

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• teamill (1342)
• [2008-10-21 4:50]

Hi Elena; love this B&W of the little girl possilby contemplating her future! Great light and shadows. But I do agree with Jens - a little more space about her head might have been better. I almost feel as though I have to duck my head down - almost like the ceiling is right there, above her head. Overall, Very nice though.
Trudy

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• MickoAna (1224)
• [2008-10-21 8:13]

Hi, Elena, amazing photo... the scene, the capture, the girl and her pose, everything is great...