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• fumaretue (1815)
• [2007-10-20 15:49]

it's been a long time I didn't comment one of your photo... I like the idea. The door enhances the message.
How about a b&w version maybe?

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• timinstl (70)
• [2007-10-20 16:23]
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I agree with fumaretue, the door does great. I posted a b&w workshop.

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• susanahh (75)
• [2007-10-20 16:56]

Hoi,
nice picture. I have to say that the color picture is better than B&W. Light is more soft and powerfull with nice in tune color than in the B&W version.
The light in her hair captures eyes and it is great.
I like this composition at all.
Thanks
susanahh

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• rewshearer (16048)
• [2007-10-20 21:35]
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• ErikSven (1809)
• [2007-10-31 12:50]

Hello Bettija,
Very suggestive, this one! A sequence of life. You make our imagination work and guess what might happen the next moment.
Colour works good here, no need for B&W in my opinion. Good sharpness and pose as well.
I'm just asking myself whether it wouldn't still be better if you cropped just two millimeters on the right side (in order to wipe out the beginning of your arm). But that's only a detail and I'm even not sure...
Once again a creative photo!
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

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• salil (2080)
• [2008-02-03 10:07]

I like this. This one is better than the WS. Imaginative. Well taken. Good lighting.
Salil