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scars
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Copyright: matiss markovskis (matissm) (171)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-11-26
Categories: Mood
Exposure: f/6.7, 1/90 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-11-28 8:30
Viewed: 958
Points: 17
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
...in her soul...
it's so cold, so gloomy.
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Moody picture..
Expression is nice and about lighting is also ok.
TFS
Tar

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  • niraj Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 183 W: 3 N: 96] (2042)
  • [2005-11-28 9:17]

Hello Matiss,
You are right about the gloomy part I think. About the scars in her left arm, are those real?? Just a suggestion, what if you cropped off her eyes just above her nose. Just an idea. You've made a good effort anyway.. Cheers.

picture is good. Preatty young leady, difficult life has probably.

A really incredible shot ... you took a great photo and captured an emotion and expression that are remarkable. The lady is extremely striking,, but her expression and posture shout of a sorrow and a depression. If she is just posing, she should get into acting.

Awesome Portrait.
It tells a story.
Although we do not know the story, it makes us aware that there is allot to this girl we do not know, or might see in ourselves
Peace.
Matt

Great picture which expresses a lot of emotions and a dark mood. Well done.

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  • Saiz Gold Star Critiquer [C: 909 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-11-28 13:40]

Mise en scène très forte …
Le corps et l'âme sont mis à nu …
Bon travail, Matiss !!!
Antonio

amazing portrait!!!!!!!!
i would make her all wet but meaning, scars, jewery and tatoo and all rest are so great
i am not sure about compo if it's not too tigh or not enought space on right
but it has got meaning

Nicely put to gether portrait brother. Is interesting that technically tatoo's also are scars, just ones that are intensional with added ink... :)

I very much like the way you included in the note some idea of something less physical... very cool representation. I like this a lot... is there more in the series? Perhaps I should check in Draugeim? You have done the loighting so well... is this in the studio or at your home?

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  • lucbus Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2108 W: 92 N: 1854] (10299)
  • [2005-11-29 5:47]

Hello Matiss,
Very good portrait with a great expression, full of emotion. The hard lighting is increasing the cold mood. Well done.
Luc

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