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Copyright: Marina Notrima (marinka) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 23 W: 0 N: 33] (884)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-08-30
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon 400D
Exposure: f/10.0, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-09-02 3:25
Viewed: 291
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A portrait of two friends. My uni mates :) I really liked it how the long grass looked around them and then i took the picture from above. I reduced the saturation a bit in photoshop :) I hope youll enjoy it!

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muy buenos tonos..

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  • fayf Silver Star Critiquer [C: 25 W: 0 N: 5] (100)
  • [2008-09-02 4:00]

Nice photo Marina! it has something 'old' in it, due to the tones you used. my only comment is that your subject is exactly in the middle, i wonder how it would look if they were either on the left or on the right side.

Overall, I like it a lot!

Rgrds, Fay

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  • JoMo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 51 W: 0 N: 50] (402)
  • [2008-09-02 5:37]

The high point of view is effective, and tones are harmony.
The difference in expression between the two models detracts a little from the mood...I would have liked to see the image with just the model in white. Lovely image nonetheless.

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  • KrL Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 499 W: 106 N: 405] (6422)
  • [2008-09-02 5:41]

Bonjour Marina,
Agréable portrait, j'aime beaucoup ces 2 regards, l'un te regarde et pas l'autre.
Très bonne idée cette désaturation, cela apporte un côté nostalgique je trouve.
Bonne journée

Karèle

wonderful work
the dark impression works well with expression of the faces
Karl

Well done colours. Composition and sharpness great. Also natural and beautiful (typically dutch?) models. TFS

Greetz Perry

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