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Copyright: Raimonda Augunaite (rhymea) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 178 W: 9 N: 6] (261)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-12-15
Categories: Daily Life, Mood
Exposure: f/2.8
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Potraits, My favorite Members Auto-portraits - Ladies [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-12-16 2:05
Viewed: 719
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 32
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beautiful girl and picture :-)
jazmin

Czesc Raimonda,

Beautiful portrait. Lovely play's with lighting and shadows, nice eye's contact and overall composition. Well done & TFS :]

Pozdrowienia z Polski,
Pawel

Hi Raimonda this is a very dramatic portrait,I like it.
jan

Hello raimonda

nice light compositon and PP

TFS

Olivier

Good composition
Rew

Hi Rai ! Another great moody portrait. Great tones. Lovely pose. Love the way you plays with the light and shadows. well done again. Cheers. Dany :-)

hi raimonda,

nice "double" portrait, good composition and the "brownish" colour. witching .... just a bit may be.

best regards frans

Hello (once again) Raimonda,
Strong pose, strong look, strong composition. The shadows on your face and body enhance the mood of your photo, as does the general lighting.
I just would have cleaned some spots on the photo (especially the spot on your left side, near to your breast). Anyway, nice work again!
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

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  • Faros Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 143 W: 13 N: 57] (24)
  • [2007-12-22 9:10]

Hi Raima,
As always, you're a beautiful girl and a good photographer !
;-)

Phil.

Hello Raimonda!

I love your look , and the mood here. Despite we see only half of your visage, I love the way we see both eyes. Great light set up, and eye-contact.

Personnally , I would have opted to see you a bit more at the bottom , therefore a slightly lower POV , to crop a bit the top. But it is only my humble opinion.

Season's Greetings !
Robert

PS. You look terrific ! I am adding yours to member's auto-portrait ( ladies ).

This is beautiful, and a great lesson for me. I love faces and my natural tendency is to get in close and fill the frame with face and very little else. I'd normally cringe at the idea of so much space to the top of your head, but you've made it work well here. Nice trick getting some light on the eye on the shadow side of your face. Right on.

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  • gnc Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 768 W: 10 N: 106] (1500)
  • [2008-02-28 20:02]

Exquisite portrait, excellent light and shadow play.
cheers,
Cristian

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  • jorcar (224)
  • [2008-04-15 8:54]

Good portrait, whit a little bit too much contrast, maybe.

Hi Rai...excellent, excellent. Beautiful pose and light. Perfect sharpness on the facial features...

Roger

later

Looking great. Witchypo!

Am feeling a bit lonely, have finally uploaded a couple of pictures but no comments have come... would you plz check them out... best wishes for the second half of summer! :)

Happy hugs
Francis

hi raimonda
all of your shots are nice
but i like this one more than others
well done
tfs
joopiter

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  • jacko Silver Star Critiquer [C: 11 W: 0 N: 1] (109)
  • [2008-10-19 12:59]

wow!! nice facial expression!! i love also the way you used the lights here. TFS

jacko

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