I am... sitting & doing nothing

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• dmoniotte (1730)
• [2005-06-15 15:34]
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Hi there.
Very original crop a nice pose. I like the old style of it. It fits very well the idea...
Congrats.
Denis.

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• SylFondacci (14127)
• [2005-06-15 15:48]
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Great shot !
Such a nice idea of this vertical framing, this reflection self-portrait and this sepia colour.
Well done. I love it.
Sylvie

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• Nessuno (0)
• [2005-06-15 16:00]
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Nice view, Onute.
I like the narrow crop of the picture. It is a good thing you kept yourself out of the center, it gives an interesting composition. Well done!

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• Anton1985 (27)
• [2005-06-15 16:13]
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I'am looking and see nothing! Not interesting foto, my opinion.

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• stecotdon (4883)
• [2005-06-15 16:24]
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HI there, nice capture. I like the way you crop the photo and the colours you applied. Nicely done!!

Take care, Stef

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• cloverstar (0)
• [2005-06-15 16:39]
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Great shot of yourself Onute. I like that you are off centre in the composition. A nice and fun shot with good sepia tones. Well done, and pleased to meet you.

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• ciore (2309)
• [2005-06-15 17:14]
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puiki nuotrauka, onute, ta spalvota gali imesti i workshopo wieta.
matysi, ivertins gerai. nes ir kirpimas anos toks geresnis ( ir sitas geras), tikrai anos nenumesk.
iki.
p.s.
faina kad fotografuoji.
v.

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• SRB (803)
• [2005-06-15 17:24]

hi onute, well what's on my mind? nice crop, funny title, with the weights below, but not very intresting. i don't like self-portraits with a camera in front of the face. it's just a see and shoot picture, nothing more, nothing less

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• Arusem (11)
• [2005-06-15 23:45]
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A very classic and fun looking candid. Nicely done.

Framed well and the barbell is a nice touch.

:o)

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• mlopes (196)
• [2005-06-20 15:19]
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ahah i love this portrait... very cool...

Your body position is very inocent... almost fragil, but then... you are in a gym! really contraditorious... but then some of the magic may be there

Mário

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• erdna (5421)
• [2005-06-20 16:55]
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A nice impromptu shot I guess, but properly executed. The weight bar, do you use it? i do not see the muscles in you. Just kidding.

Andre'

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• Dingo (11948)
• [2005-06-23 18:39]
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Ah, after seeing the original in the WS I understand your crop and frame ;o). Nice work, Onute. I would have left out the grain, but the sepia works well. I'd also have cropped more from the bottom to avoid the weight. I'm glad you've kept out of the centre here, that wouldn't have worked. TFS.

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• annagrace (3421)
• [2005-08-25 21:55]

Hi Onute,
Gotta love a girl with curves! This looks straight out of the 60s, very retro feel to it. I actually like the original with all the pretty colors.

TFS,
Alli

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• smoothdude (1330)
• [2005-09-05 18:21]
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Great framing here. I like the shot overall very light and fun. The barbell creates a nice composition with the rest of the picture, it works very well.

Maybe next time hold the camera away from your face so we can see that too. Nice work.