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Look in water
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Copyright: Boshko Slavevsky (starky) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 322 W: 2 N: 43] (2857)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-05-31
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Fuji FinePix S 5600
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/340 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-06-03 1:45
Viewed: 388
Points: 17
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Dear Boshko Slavevsky!
Nice scene.
Very good perspective.
Beautiful colors.
Original take.
TFS!

Good morning Boshko

I love the light and natural mood.Great rock texture and beautiful posture of model. Superb your look.

My regards

Teresat

:) Nice model! You captured her at the right moment, without her being aware of it...Well done, Bosko!
Best regards,
Diana

Zdravo Bosko!
Lepo devojce i jos lepsa scena sa jezra!
Pozdrav, Zorica

A cute shot here Boshko.

I love the sense of freedom and freshness, although there are a few things I wish were different.

I would like to see different composition - if she was more to the left, following the Rule Of Thirds (see these useful links on composition) it would be much more powerful. With more space in front of her, there would be a better sense of freedom.

I would like to see a different pose. The position of her legs, and particularly the breezy movement of her dress' hem, is fantastic; but the upper body pose, obviously checking her shoe, is a little awkward. So much better if we could see her looking out to sea.

Finally the exposure - it's a little overexposed, giving her thigh and arm a yellow tint. A faster shutter speed would have delivered a more realistic tone.

Beautifully observed and a wonderful scene, but I think more attention from you, the photographer, to the construction, technicalities, and timing of the shot would have made a big difference.

Rew

  • Great 
  • Romeu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 308 W: 0 N: 178] (1635)
  • [2008-06-03 14:01]

Hi Boshko,

Great up shot. Beautiful colors, light and composition!

TLS,
Romeu

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  • emka Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 124 W: 0 N: 67] (1083)
  • [2008-06-03 23:27]

Hi Bosko, Nice vacation photo. I would like also to stand on the rocks and look at the splendid landscape of Ohrid lake. Very creative frame.

Regards
Malgorzata

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2078 W: 60 N: 3015] (15757)
  • [2008-06-04 6:26]

Hi Boshko...
Mnogo dobar snimak sa jezera - lepa poza i curica...
Dobre boje i ostrina,
poz. George

Zdravo Bosko
E eto je i Biljana konacno
Bas je zgodna a i platno beljase ubavo ona
Pozdrav,Braca

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