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Five Men In a Boat


Five Men In a Boat
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Copyright: Marija Gencic (Maria74) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 551 W: 90 N: 630] (5997)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-08
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Sony DSC F828 Cybershot
Exposure: f/8, 1/500 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Fernando (favorites), Frozen moment [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-10-04 17:08
Viewed: 1737
Favorites: 4 [view]
Points: 90
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Something from the lake again. And again, silhouettes.
In PS: cropped, autoleveled, added more blue,framed, resized.
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  • cyiu Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 228 W: 0 N: 47] (1122)
  • [2005-10-04 17:11]
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Hi, Love this photo, very professional excellent POV and well taken. If i could give you 10 points I would very well done

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  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1286 W: 153 N: 729] (8681)
  • [2005-10-04 17:14]
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olá Marija!
o azul que prenche toda a foto é fabuloso. as cinco silhuetas que estăo no interior do barco contrastam lindamente com o azul escuro de fundo.
Bom Trabalho!
Luci.

What an amazing visual treat this is. Its one of those photos where you would wanna keep looking at over and over again.The colours are perfect. This is so well composed and captured.

Oh Maria! This photo would have so much more impact without the patch of sky. I did a ws to show you. But I still love the light, and the way they are positioned in the boat is great. You captured a great moment. TFS!

Hi Marija,
There is some really great lighting here.
The subjects/silhouette's in the boat are captured quite well in their actions or non-actions.
I very much like the more panoramic/widescreen cropping.
I do have to agree with Pierre on the non inclusion of the sky here. I do love this image, but think Pierre's WS really does some justice to the image.
If there is more foreground water in the original it would be great to keep this size and have more of the water foreground so when cutting out the sky the image would not be to thin on the horizontal.
I might have a WS up my sleave...!
Anyway, very nice catch and again the lighting is very nice..

~michael~

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  • redol Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 260 W: 33 N: 12] (2254)
  • [2005-10-04 17:58]
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Pretty backlighting. You have chosen the ideal format. A very
beautiful color. Good work.

Again my favourite blue!! :)) Nice catch Marija though I have to admit it looks even more effective with the sky cropped off! But I like this blue period of yours!! :))
Seeya
ToM

Hi Marija,
Very nice photo. The composition it's perfect. Amazing light and colors. Very nice silhouette.
Well done
Regards, António

very good comp, I also love silhouettes, thanx, (*_*)

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  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2733 W: 263 N: 864] (8653)
  • [2005-10-04 22:04]
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Great shot,Marija! Beautiful silhouettes and wonderfyl blue tones! Very well done! Michel

Hi Marija,

That's a nice shot. Looks like it was taken from a movie.
I always have a soft spot for silouhettes and this one is simply great! Well seen, the guy standing breaks the pattern in a very nice way. Bravo! :)

Hi Marija,
Very nice shot! Good composition; I like how the mountain tops seem to mimic the wave action. The blue is so peaceful and the people are a nice touch.
Well done!
Richard

Hi, Marija! This looks like dangerously too many men in a small boat! Gives it an air of tension - or maybe humor?! ;)

Beautiful blues and the silhouettes are wonderful! I like Pierre's workshop, but he's created a different effect or mood. With the sky, you have more of a sense that this is real! It's not an art poster! These guys are really out in a small fishing boat, and they're surrounded by mountains and a beautiful environment. You did a great job getting the tones so smooth - the mountains look like velvet! I love this!

Hope you're feeling ok.

xoxoxo,
Gayle

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  • fer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 791 W: 131 N: 909] (8073)
  • [2005-10-05 3:26]
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Hi Marija,

Beautiful!I love the blue tone and the silhouettes,great composition too.

Five men on a boat
Yo-ho-ho, and a bottle of rum!
Marija take a photo
Yo-ho-ho, and a bottle of rum! :)
Obrigado
Fernando

Nothing else to say.
Just beautiful...
TFS!

Beautiful Marija - it is so serene and calming with its blue. I like the way you have framed the picture - quite enhancing the structure of your composition. Great work - TFS
Mukesh

Hi Marija,
Well done. Great Shot...
Mitra

Again Marija a beautiful photo on the shore of the beautiful lake...I like the dark silhouettes of the man with the beautiful scenery of the lake...my compliments my friend.

Jos

Wow! this is a cinematic masterpeice! I looks straight out of a movie for some reason! You couldn't have asked for better poses from the people in the boat. You composition and cropping are excellent and the blue colors are perfect for the mood of the photo. Really beautiful photo! JP

"... a o psu da i ne govorimo" :)))
Great shot with nice composition. Framing is excellent, I like that three layers of blue with that boat at breaking point. Colors and light is amazing!
Great shot, congratulations and thanks for sharing!

Regards
Robert

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  • Lisar Gold Star Critiquer [C: 319 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-10-05 12:44]
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From the lake again, maybe, but surely never the same. Except for the wonderful feelings of water and mood. And i prefer your version after all, though both Michael and Pierre did a really good job. But i do prefer to see the sky. OK, the only thing that a bit bothers me is that 'touch' of blue hill and the black frame on the top.

It has some Italian cinema feeling in it [Mediteraneo], relaxed, carelles.

Great work!

ComplimentS!

Beautiful shot, nice format, good choice of title, Marija !
Congrats.
Sylvie

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  • erdna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 629 W: 68 N: 746] (5421)
  • [2005-10-05 17:23]
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Your composition is good but it could have bee better if you did notcrop closely the top or the sky. you should have the area of the sky flow on top of the mountain.

Andre'

Maria, Maria, Maria, Maria...
All the beautiful sounds of the world in a single word...


Now guess, where it's from?

Nice shot Marija, love the sillhoutte and the darkness that surrounds the boat. It looks mysterious, whast are these people upto? Theirs five of them, one is standing while the rest are sitting...

Love the crop
Good job as always
-Bart

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  • padre Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1419 W: 90 N: 263] (4035)
  • [2005-10-05 19:36]
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Nice arrangement and color. B

wauuuw maria! this is a great shot! this is not a simle photo. this is a cinematic shot! you have got this eye! hvala lepa for your sharing
K.

Beautiful capture, Marija, with all of this peaceful blue for these peaceful fishermen and I like that one of them is standing as it adds dimension to it. I must admit that I prefer the WS version both of Micheal & Pierre that takes the sky away to focus on the water & the boat but the rest of your picture is very moody and well done!

Hi Marija

I like the graphism & silhouettes, of the fishing boat, & the blue, monochromatic color. Good work!

Hello Marija... I am a fan of blue... I do like the balance between detailed surface of sea and smooth background... The composition is very-well balanced... Tones are magnificent...

Can

Excelent Marija! so smooth... so cool! you're on fire :P

Mario

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  • amm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 227 W: 29 N: 86] (634)
  • [2005-10-08 7:46]

Pureté et évasion sont les expressions que me suggčre cette superbe photo. TFS!
amm

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  • spike1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 507 W: 0 N: 464] (4321)
  • [2005-10-08 10:44]

Fantastic atmosphere Maria. Very calm, restful mood created in this excellent photo.

Hi Marija,
Gorgeous scene!!! I absolutely love the blue tones and the sillhouettes are great! Everything looks so peacefull, so serene... And the way you framed the photo reminds me of the movies, at the end, just before the credits come ;)

Great job!

Take care,Stef :))

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  • Gand Gold Star Critiquer [C: 355 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-10-09 16:03]
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IZVRSNO!!!!

What a fabulous picture Maria. your framing is an excellent idea. It gives a panoramic effect to the picture. Silhoutte of the men is very well captured

Lovely shade of blue and excellent silhouettes of 5 men. I like the title too borrowed from an all time fav(book) of mine. Great job Marija!! :)

I just have one thing to say... WOW...

Good job...

You are doing amazingly well with colors.
How do you do? Is it post processing or a great ability in choosing the moment?

A hug

Guido

Hi Maria...

C'est Magnifique ! I can only admire the colors that you have captured.. Speaks volumes about the eye you have for shots :-)

One thing that you cud have done is reduce the size of the top & bottom border frames and either got in more sky towards the right or as you have done in a workshop remove the sky totally..

Thanks a lot for sharing this :)
Great Photo!!!

Cheers
~Karthik

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  • niner Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 222 W: 11 N: 0] (2068)
  • [2005-11-30 17:30]

wow, great atmosphere in this photo, composition and colours are perfect. one thing is destracting me do, thing on the top of the mountain, if you cloned it out it would be just right image for my livingroom wall

this is an amazing view, very well realised and framed, TFS
sorry my smile are out!

So simple and beautiful. Graphical look.
BR
stenia

It just so "clean, clear and under control."
ZS

Hello Marija,
It's a stunning image and one that particularly speaks to me because I love mountains, sailing and the colour blue. I had a look at the other workshops and although all of them are great, they created a different image altogether and missed somewhat on the scale of things which you captured so well.

The horizontal black frame is testfully chosen and what more can I add than my compliments.

Shelly.

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  • OWO Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 169 W: 68 N: 327] (2335)
  • [2005-12-27 11:12]

Striking good picture! Well seen and shot.

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  • Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 549 W: 69 N: 53] (5119)
  • [2006-01-31 10:03]

Like a scene from a movie. Ohrid in blue, never seen it this way. I like the figure standing, living up the line dividing lake and mountain. Excellent.

Alban

Lovely image Manja! The image being mostly blue and black produces a calming effect. Excellent DOF and POV! I didn't know our camera could do that ;)!

Beautiful composition marija. Great scene, tones and atmosphere. Very well done...
Tomasz

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