<< Previous Next >>

Longing II


Longing II
Photo Information
Copyright: Marija Gencic (Maria74) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 551 W: 90 N: 630] (5997)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-08
Categories: Mood, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: Sony DSC F828 Cybershot
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-10-19 5:06
Viewed: 861
Points: 46
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Not very happy with the result, as I originally planned to include the horizon, but it was too blurry and didn't turn out good after PP work.
Again, wanted to achieve the mood.

PP:
cropping, faded levels with 'overlay' as I wanted to keep the forground darker and the right upper corner brighter, applied warming filter, neat-imaged, framed, resized.

I would also like to thank to everyone commenting on my two last posts and apologize for not answering everyone (which I try hard very hard to always do), as my daugter has a bad cold so not enough time right now. Thank you, friends:)

SylFondacci, Talisman, mwebr, Tintin, cstathoulis, btokaz has marked this note useful
Only registered TrekLens members may rate photo notes.
Add Critique [Critiquing Guidelines] 
Only registered TrekLens members may write critiques.
Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To cstathoulis: Thank you!Maria74 1 10-27 08:13
To ropetko: InterpretationMaria74 2 10-20 18:26
To artabb: Hi ArturoMaria74 1 10-19 17:46
To spike1: Hi PeterMaria74 1 10-19 17:43
To reddevil: Dearest JosMaria74 1 10-19 17:36
To wallie: Thanks!Maria74 1 10-19 17:32
To paul_bk: Hi PaoloMaria74 1 10-19 17:25
To edie: Hi EdieMaria74 1 10-19 17:23
You must be logged in to start a discussion.

Critiques [Translate]

  • Great 
  • edie Gold Star Critiquer [C: 659 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-10-19 5:09]
  • [+]

Lovely calm mood,think sepia fits well here and like also the horizontal frame that focused the look on the boat and water.
Edie

  • Great 
  • goc Gold Star Critiquer [C: 321 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-10-19 5:11]

hi,
- good work
- the water looks awesome
- good coloring choice
- the lines on the boat are not very sharp (this comes from perfect water smoothness)

overall great photo
peace,
goran

Hi Marija,
A very pleasing and relaxing capture! The lighting is great, and the ripples add life... Well composed with with a good feeling of depth and details
Regards,
Pablo -

Seems like you are in a very romantic mood off late :D I would have called this dream boat! :)
Lovely simple composition with excellent sepia tone. Very well done
Lakshmi

I like this without the horizont... in this way there are no references..... as to be in a place without dimensions, only the boat is dimensioned...
well done
Paolo

Hi Mare! Nice mood, although I am not sure what you wanted to show us here because of the too bright sun reflections at the upper right corner.
But the composition itself is great. Calm water would produce sufh a lovely warm effect. Wanna tip? Next time arrive there a few hours later, bring a freezer with you (for a drink while you wait for the perfect light and for use it as a tripod!) and set the exposure for more than a second. That will calm the water and create interesting mood. There are few similar shots here lately (inlcude mine), you'll see what I mean.

Great job, congratulations!
Petko

Very nice moody picture. Good pov and the light gives a mystic character. Well done.

Don

Wow! What a perfect color tone. The boat is so perfectly placed. Everything about this shot is so calm and peaceful.

So beautiful and very romantic picture Marija...I'm searching for a nice photo for on the wall and this could be good choice...you a real master of the lake Ohrid...they should be proud at you...like me ;-)
This is a favorite and a big smile for you :-D


Jos

good photo its brings a quiet mood, en a littlebit romance
TFS greets ed-lin

This works really nicely in B&W Marija. The composition is excellent, and the tones in the water on the near side of the boat create a great sense of depth.

Very romantic and moody picture with a touch of loneliness and abandonment.
Lovely PP and great presentation.
Well seen.
Arturo

Great work !
I love the smothness of the water ...
The B&W is enlightened.
Congrats, Marija !
Sylvie

  • Great 
  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1286 W: 153 N: 729] (8681)
  • [2005-10-19 18:14]

olá Marija!
meu deus! linda!linda!linda! a textura, as cores, o enquadramento. excelente! magnifica!
Bom trabalho!
Luci.

  • Great 
  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2735 W: 263 N: 864] (8653)
  • [2005-10-19 20:54]

Another beautiful shot,My light master! Nice composition! Very moody picture full of quietness and peace! Bravo! Michel

I hope ur daughter is getting better now Marija :)

Another stunner photo Marija! The longing feeling is very present in this photo. Too bad the horizon was not in...but the black frame seems to be the horizon anyways....well done! Bravo! :)

I liked the previous one but this one is sooo much better!!! Perfect reflexion and a nice colour tone! :)) I can feel it floating on the water!! Very well done Marija!
cheers
ToM

Nice mood, light and composition. Beautiful image! Regards, B.

  • Great 
  • Mitra Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1254 W: 75 N: 902] (7908)
  • [2005-10-20 19:35]

so lovely
Mitra

  • Great 
  • Tintin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2198 W: 267 N: 345] (1982)
  • [2005-10-24 21:52]

Very beautiful picture, Marija. I like the PP work which achieved an almost sepia look. The overall impression is of calmness and ones almost want to be sitting by the side of the water to look at the view and this boat. Excellent!

P.S. Hope your daughter is feeling better now and I will be back to look at the other pictures you posted while I was away!

D'une douceur remarquable.....Une composition simple mais tellement efficace...
Superbe...
Claude

Hi Marija,
Very peaceful and a beautiful photo! You did and excellent job on the lighting.
Well done :)

ps.Hope you're daughter is doing better :)

Excellent work, Marija!
I like sepia tone and composition.
Regards
Ciao
Gigi

Very nice composition Marija. Good choice with the frame (really this time!)Beautiful tones and mood. I like it very much...
Tomasz

Calibration Check
















0123456789ABCDEF