Seagulls

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• luckybry (6664)
• [2009-08-13 3:12]

hi FRANCIS like how you have focused on the seagull in the centre and blurred out the other 2 in the presentation it makes a very nice shot good pp work and framing tfs
regards bryan

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• sanjibbehera (1347)
• [2009-08-13 4:09]

Hi Francis,

A good day to you also. Nicely done. I loved the angle you have played with the gulls over here. Nice sharp pic of the middle one and the rest fading away as if it is on the move.
thanks for sharing.

Regards,
Sanjib

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• cunejo200 (17259)
• [2009-08-13 4:38]

Hello Francis,
The diagonal formation of the seagulls against the azure sky is the highlight. The image is relatively noise free but a bit soft, there appears to be some haloing effect on the middle and right birds presumably from over-sharpening. Best regards.
Danilo

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• Dyerco (533)
• [2009-08-13 7:25]

I like this creative presentation. The gull is repeated on an angle inside a square.
Phil

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• nicou (20364)
• [2009-08-13 7:44]

Hello,

génail ce captage de mouettes, une merveille, le tois bein sposiitonnée dna sl'image, avec un effet de flou puis netteté, superb ein réalisé.

braovo et maitié

Nicou

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• tanburi (37010)
• [2009-08-13 10:58]

Hello Francis,
Well planned and done ppğ work. Blurred sea gull gives a depthness sense
TFS
Selahattin E

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• chendis (5000)
• [2009-08-14 0:38]

Hi Francis
nice repetition and focus on the middle one
original frame and dreamy atmosphere
nice light and colors
have a grate day too!

Oana

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• mikolaj_cava (29486)
• [2009-08-14 0:45]

Hello Francis Xavier! Original idea and very original composition. Very sophisticated art work. Fantastic seagull! Well done!

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• Royaldevon (16422)
• [2009-08-14 0:51]

Hello Francis,

An interesting experiment with an image and PS.
I like the composition and the colours very much.

However, for me, the sense of perspective would have been improved if the r/h bird had been in sharper focus and the l/h bird had been disappearing behind the frame.

Have good day,
Bev :-)

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• Fons (15594)
• [2009-08-14 1:58]

original photograph with one picture sharp good diagonal

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• chrisJ (42081)
• [2009-08-14 4:49]

Hi Francis

Good use of the principle of three, with the 3 birds, & the diagonal axis they form, adds good dynamism. Although mood is good here, there are a couple of minor tech issues. The halo around the birds, (I'd suggest that you use a much bigger feather), & the noise in the sky. Both are easily rectified in a workshop. Tfs!

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• mesquens1 (17095)
• [2009-08-14 4:57]

Bonjour Francis,
Bonne idée et très interessant travail d'édition.
Amitiés,
Raimundo

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• harpya (9643)
• [2009-08-14 6:05]

Ciao Francis


A beautiful angle of beautiful
colors and the action of the seagull!
I like the sequence of flight,
Nice picture and lovely sharpness and clarity.
Very well composition and good presentation, TFS.

Have a nice weekend,

Sergio

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• Alexia (2450)
• [2009-08-14 7:30]

Ciao..magnifica composizione
mi piace molto
Complimenti

Alessia

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• urs0114 (4597)
• [2009-08-15 1:08]

Salut Francis.
Dommage qu’il manque un peu de netteté sur la mouette du centre car le clonage est parfaite et l’image est très plaisante.
Les couleurs sont aussi superbes.
Bonne journée.
Urs

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• Niva (10447)
• [2009-08-28 1:27]

Hi Francis
An artistical presentation. There is some noise but I liked it anyway.
That´s "experimental" , you can do it !
TFS.
Nivaldo