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Sunflower III


Sunflower III
Photo Information
Copyright: Francis Xavier Camilleri (fransx) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 756 W: 58 N: 1111] (8915)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-06-18
Categories: Nature, Artwork, Experimental, Macro, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: Nikon D90, Tamron 18-250mm f/3.5-6.3 DiII
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/160 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-08-25 7:00
Viewed: 231
Points: 62
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Some PP work on this sunflower_blackened BG, increased color saturation, sharpened and add yellow and orange lines by Photoscape!
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Bonjour Francis,

What a terrific macro of the beautiful Sunflower...Amazing clarity! The positioning of the sunflower is one of teh attractive parts of the picture. The central part is glowing like the Sun and the petals of the flower being sunrays. A lot of energy is reflected in this shot. I also like teh framing done for this capture, very eye-catching and innovative. Well, I am not that good in PP work.
The sharpness and POV are great and the shallow DOF works very well here. The leaf adds aditional charm into the shot.
An original work!

Thanks and regards,
Paras Bhalla

PS: Sorry, Francis! as I have crossed my daily point-limit, so unable to award any point for this wonderful work. Pardon me for that!

Hi Francis,
What a superb sunflower vith great colours, light and crop.Well presented.TFS.
Cheers,

hAyAti

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  • subs Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 252 W: 0 N: 222] (2080)
  • [2009-08-25 7:35]

Hi Francis,
A vibrant macro, with good sharpness. Well composed. Love the light hitting the petals from behind.
Rgs
Subashini

Hi Francis

stunning color looks like all sun is concern in those petals
excellent crop and frame
perfect sharpness and details
Beautiful work
All my best wishes
Oana

Hi Francis,

lovely macro shot. good colors and sharp details. well composed and good use of lights here.

Tfs,
Sanjib.

grt details Francis excellentley presented suprb framing tfs
regards bryan

Hi Francis

Like your positioning of the flower in this shot.
The lighting from behind looks very good but the PP work is quite noticeable around the leave and stem.
TFS

Regards Derek

I like the composition and bright colour of the sunflower.
Well done
Andrei

hey Francis
lovely composition my friend
very nice colors
TFS
T

Francis,
Lovely colored capture.
Wonderful sharp , good BG.
Mariana

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  • Lolo54 Gold Star Critiquer [C: 172 W: 0 N: 2] (1278)
  • [2009-08-25 10:09]

escelente macro, buena composicio, bello ejemplar de girasol, felicidades, abrazos.

excellent macro, good composicio, a beautiful example of sunflower, congratulations, hugs.

Hello Francis,
Eye cathing art work and nice cropping.
I loved how do you use light
TFS
Selahattin E

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  • Margy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 111 W: 6 N: 227] (2512)
  • [2009-08-25 13:16]

Hello Francis,

A very nice composition of this beautiful sunflower.
The colors are beautiful and the light from behind is amazing.
Good presentation too! I like the way it is framed.
Regards, Marga

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5763 W: 198 N: 2582] (10130)
  • [2009-08-25 13:24]

Ciao Francis



Beautiful visual
amazed with the beauty of colors
these petals, and in your background
black highlights even more the beauty of the flower and colors!
Exceelnte work my friend ...

Sergio

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 393 W: 1 N: 468] (2489)
  • [2009-08-25 16:07]

Hi Francis,
Beautiful PP work you have done on this sunflower, the detail is stunning with a nice artistic crop, the colours are eye catching with the two frame lines matching on the side is a nice thoughtful touch. Cheers
Bri

hello Francis .. what a beautiful shot with great composition .. well done with your pp .. bravo .. best regards Harout.

Olá Francis,
Bela edição de imagem!
Muitos parabéns por este Girassol.

Very nice effect, and very nice composition Francis ... love this.
Trudy

Hello, Francis -
Excellent! Great composition with this crop of the flower. The backlighting of the petals looks superb and works well against the dark background. Sharp details of the flower's center. Very nice!

Francis, wonderful crop excellent composition. Very good taste in presentations
Congratulations

María José

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1057 W: 81 N: 66] (12645)
  • [2009-08-25 21:07]

dear Francis,
this sunflower looks being not real but in your illusionary visual space,
light and colors are unusual and 1/4 composition is almost surrealistic,
in it, petals and leaves are shining by themselves,
whole artistic feeling is very nice, thank you,
Akihisa

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  • skot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 75 W: 10 N: 74] (417)
  • [2009-08-25 22:43]

Hey Francis,

Just thought I'd comment on this photo so I don't come off too cruel.

I truly think this is a wonderful photo. I'm not a fan of the lines on the right, but the actual photo is stunning.

You captured some great backlighting that has added tons of drama to an already interesting composition. I like that your didn't attempt to get the whole flower in the frame - it isn't necessary. We know what kind of flower this is jsut from the quadrant you have shown.

I would have been tempted to crop out the leaf when I shot this, but I think that keeping it in has made this image better. It gives a small frame to the flower, grounding it in the image rather than leaving it floating in space.

Wonderful stuff - much like most of your other work.

skot

Hello Francis Xavier! Very sophisticated composition, original capture. Good colours, very good saturation. Fantastic effect. Well done!

Hi Francis!
Wonderful presentation!
great colours,perfect crop,
good use of lighting!!
Regards and tfs
Kostas

Bonjour Francis.
Un splendide soleil qui illumine mon écran.
Les couleurs et la mise en page sont parfaits.
Bonne journée.
Urs

Hi Francis
The light playing nice game on this colorful flower
Specially with its dark back, you've reached an eyecatching result
Best wishes
Alireza

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  • Juliet Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 883 W: 64 N: 1986] (13678)
  • [2009-08-26 4:01]

Hi Francis,
Wow- look at that bg lighting. Well composed and well seen-- nicely done. TFS Julie

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  • ose Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 508 W: 0 N: 18] (5420)
  • [2009-08-28 8:16]

Hi Francis
Nice backligt shor. I like your composition. Great colours and light.
Well done

osse

Hi Francis - a fantastic image beautifully composed and presented.
TFS
Will

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  • vanda Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 282 W: 0 N: 287] (1866)
  • [2009-08-28 14:30]

Hello Francis,
Beautiful composition with original presentation.
Fabulous macro shot with amazing sharpness and details.
The central part seems cells of honeycomb :-)
Excellent lighting.
Regards.
Vanda

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4267 W: 414 N: 6826] (42710)
  • [2009-08-30 1:24]

Hi Francis

Missed this one. Incredible detail of the sunflower, with every individual seedpod in the flower clearly visible. Excellent framing, sharpness & dof, with vibrant colour & good graphism. Tfs!

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  • ChuFer Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 141 W: 15 N: 1] (2441)
  • [2009-09-09 22:53]

Magnífica idea y excelentes colores...saludos

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