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Photo Information
Copyright: aksana cojocaru (abranda) (45)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-03
Categories: Portrait
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-11-29 4:55
Viewed: 515
Points: 6
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  • fap77 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 51 W: 28 N: 16] (2877)
  • [2006-11-29 10:07]

Very nice portrait of a most beautiful model. Your sister's eyes expression is delicious.

You could improve the sharpness.

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  • glint Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 573 W: 2 N: 468] (2961)
  • [2006-11-29 10:39]

hello Aksana,
this is an attracrive portrait. I like the colours and the softness.Perhaps it could be a little sharper but I still like it as it is.I like the way your sister's eyes, hair and lipstick all compiment each other.
welcome to treklens
best wishes
Bev

Nice shot, Aksana! The placement of the subject is superb as is the slight blurring of the skin. She is very well made up, too. I think the lighting is a bit off with some overexposure and you might try to used subdued flash or gold-light flash mask or even indirect flashing.

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