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Fencing
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Copyright: Frans de Kleijn (Mrlittle) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 894 W: 40 N: 23] (5549)
Genre:
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-09-21
Categories: Event
Camera: Nikon D-70
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/160 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-02-13 14:30
Viewed: 1011
Points: 22
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To crhieatt: The framing!Mrlittle 1 09-23 01:41
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Interesting gadget. It appears to be used to put tension on the top wire. Portrayed well!

Great shot!
Rew

Wonderful green colors and good focus and detail.
very nice shot !
well done.

Haldian

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  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 695 W: 2 N: 126] (3446)
  • [2008-02-14 3:10]

nice capture
clean and neat

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  • NINIX Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 297 W: 128 N: 510] (6612)
  • [2008-02-14 15:50]

He Frans,

Het wordt steeds sterker. Minder is meer!
De foto vind ik sterk door de eenvoudzowel compositie als kleur.
Gewoon een hele goei Frans.

Groet,

Hendrik

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  • Viking Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 996 W: 63 N: 782] (4383)
  • [2008-02-14 23:02]

Frans
Simpel en heel sterk
Rob
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very nice simple composition here frans
good use of the frame's diagonal
the color contrast is beautiful, good sharpness

koh

Hoi Frans,
Een gave abstracte impressie. Perfect contrast een interessante weergave van een simpel gaashek.
Hans

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1372 W: 0 N: 1] (12003)
  • [2008-02-16 3:37]

Hallo Frans
Dit is weer een echte Mrlittle.
Mooi zo.
Gr Jos

Sprak ik net nog de woorden uit bij Jos* Jawa*
over eenvoud en het sucses daarvan Frans, hoor jij zeker ook
in dat rijtje.
Heel sterk deze opname
Compliment
John
* pl

Hi Frans,

Lekker strak en abstract. Mooie compositie tegen die groene achtergrond - maakt het bijzonder aantrekkelijk.

TFS
Els

Hello Frans,

Wonderful green BG and a very good image!
Congratulations! TFS

Sergio
on saturday

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  • drymd29 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1447 W: 248 N: 654] (7621)
  • [2008-03-08 5:46]

Heeft veel we van Iso's handschoen foto van vandaag. Het venijn zit bovenin. Mooi werk Frans.
Huub

Frans,

Thanks to "no parking" I've discovered your gallery for the first time - and I've ended up here "fencing".

Lots of wonderful "simple" images which show a keen eye for extracting graphical visions from the everyday world. Marvellous.

But here's my critisism!!! The framing! Somewhere doen the line you've clearly leant to "colour pick" two tones from the image and make these into a border. I know, I know, I've heard the theory loads of times "picking colours directly from the image means the border will directly compliment the image". And, yes, sounds like a great theory, BUT, it just doesn't work. It's framing with a theoretical HEAD - rather than an eye - an what my eye says, what my heart says, is "forget it" - just go simple white, simple black, just a small simple clear distinction of the image's borders. All these colours, too complicated, too confusing - drowing the images not assisting them.

Well, that's my view - one example attached as a workshop - don't think I'm going to convince you - but I think it's worth a try!

Apart from which - really nice set of images!! ;)

Regards
Colin

Hi Frans

Voortreffelijk handschrift.
Really clever work and the green bg is strong.
Attractive shot.

Greetings

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