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Copyright: Merel Jonkheid (Merel) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 10 W: 0 N: 9] (266)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-01-06
Exposure: f/5.3, 1/8 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-01-28 16:19
Viewed: 1325
Points: 26
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Third, and I hope final upload for this photo.
The other two times it was removed because you were able to see half a nipple.
I haven't got anymore to say about that, still I am not satisfied with how TL handled it.
..Oh well I will just stop my babble :)
I hope you will enjoy.
the model is Jonne.. again.
Regards,

© Merel Jonkheid 2006


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  • mrcrow Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 384 W: 196 N: 79] (2712)
  • [2006-01-28 16:28]

well you certainly tried your hardest...half a nipple is not as good as a whole one ...so dont feel too bad...
you got the girls look which is worth a barrel of nipples...am i getting excited here...:)
i did a w/s to take out...the over pink skin tones in the not necessary right arm...
you have no workshop flag up so you will get it anyway...i am not spending all that time and not getting it to you...
here it is
cheers
geof

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  • HIMself Gold Star Critiquer [C: 375 W: 6 N: 9] (3574)
  • [2006-01-28 17:18]

hi
naturals photo good pleasure and light regards

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  • paulw Silver Star Critiquer [C: 25 W: 3 N: 5] (64)
  • [2006-01-28 17:28]

Beautiful image. Lovely soft tones. Beautiful model too, in a lovely pose. Well captured image.

Good to have you back with this pic, Merel! :) I think the shot hasn't really lost any of its merit, and you still have the original. Just think of the famous oil paintings that have been cut out of their frames so many times... ;)

See you around,

Attila

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  • tty007 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 209 W: 63 N: 184] (2585)
  • [2006-01-28 21:55]

Because the USA don't want to see a nipple if it's not in a movie or on FOX :-)

Great picture, good eye lash.

Sensual, good lightning, tenderness is felt when you look at this photo! Great job!

Once again, I like it for a third time.
I dont know what the big deal is TL has no prob posting other nude shots like the one right here
www.treklens.com/gallery/North_America/Canada/photo77387.htm

great model and great shot, i find it very intimate, to much light on left
emanuela

Great picture. With or without nipples a warm and tender shot. Thanks for sharing !!!!

Hoi Merel,

Het verbaast me dat te horen. Ik heb wel vaker "onthullende" fotos op TL gezien. Sommige mensen (uit sommige landen)zijn nu eenmaal veel minder gewend als anderen zullen we maar zeggen. Een mooie foto!

Hello Merel... The perspective used here is really good choive... I do like the pose of your model... The balance between dark and light areas are very well balanced... I have also prepare a workshop; if you want to see it, I can mailed it to your email address...

Can

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  • nrae Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 24 W: 11 N: 30] (614)
  • [2006-01-29 22:17]

Saw the first one and I must say I found it was just great! Even with the unfortunate cropping that TL seems to have forced you into, this is truly a wonderful portrait! The composition, lighting is simply right and the model is extremely attractive - it all fittted very well in the original version!
Good eye, good artistry! If I could give you more points I would.
Cheers
Norman

Hoi Merel...ik snap het niet waarom je foto is gedelete...maar er zijn hier personen die vinden het schokkend terwijl deze personen bij wijze wel foto's plaatsen of waarderen met kinderen met geweren...je weet wel die cowboys ;-) Ik erger me een beetje aan het Roomse zijn als de Paus gedoe hier...echte kunst wordt soms niet gerespecteerd...jammer.
Nu over je foto...hele mooi portret met heldere natuurlijke kleuren...mijn compliment en laat je niet weerhouden van de kritieken.

Groet,

Jos

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  • salil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 581 W: 18 N: 295] (2106)
  • [2007-04-07 6:55]

Good pose, good model, usual prudery.
Salil

pitty on how TL handled it.
however the photo feeling, the model and the shot are amazing.

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