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Jonne


Jonne
Photo Information
Copyright: Merel Jonkheid (Merel) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 10 W: 0 N: 9] (266)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-01-06
Categories: Friends/Family
Exposure: f/5.3, 1/10 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-01-07 11:46
Viewed: 718
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
First photoshoot in 2006
Hope you will enjoy this as much as I do.
More to come from this shoot.
Cheers.

© Merel Jonkheid 2006
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Not a classic model but certainly a "jonkheid" ;)
Well done, but perhaps the light from the left is too strong. Some kind of reflector is used on the right to light the cheek but the cast of the nose is too prominent (IMO)
Proficiat Merel !

Salut Merel

je me suis permis de retoucher ta photo,
qui ne prend en rien de la beautée de cette belle fleur ...

(O_°)

He , Ellen ten Damme !
That was the first thing came up .
A dutch actrice and singer...
Nice portrait, only the shadow of her noise
is in my opinion to long. She could moved her head some to the right to shortened him.
Groetjes, Giuseppe Ruberti.

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  • Viking Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 996 W: 63 N: 782] (4383)
  • [2006-01-07 15:45]

Leuk gedaan Merel alleen jammer dat de deur opening achter links zo sterk te zien is .Al met al niet skecht
Rob

Beautiful portrait Merel...light is perfect, cropp is good and her expresion makes it special.
Ik hoop dat er meer volgen ;-)

Groet,

Jos

so beautiful

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