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lisanne


lisanne
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Copyright: harry stukker (harry) (20)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-10
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-02-02 10:18
Viewed: 752
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
My granddaughter and I, we both like making bycicletrips. She looks around and her grandfather gives explanations. Sometimes we go realy forward, as you can see on the ground.
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Glad to see you here Harry! Welcome.

And also glad to meet Lisanne. Such a cute toddler! Almost two? My grand-daughter Josephine well be two about two days - See pictures in my portfolio.

I think the unusual point of view is very attractive. And the blur created in the background gives us the feeling that we are the one on the bike! :o) - Well done...

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  • torr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 50 N: 80] (1735)
  • [2005-02-02 13:51]

Pitty it is cropt so "tight".
Still i do love the moovement in the picture.
If it moovs, I like it, as you can know,...
See you on tl,
Keep on Posting
Torr.

How nice to take your grandaughter for a ride on your bike. I love the way you were riding and she was looking up at you when you took the photograph. That is a creative composition.
I did a workshop to improve the colours a bit. I hope you don't mind.

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  • nofer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 847 W: 272 N: 495] (1726)
  • [2005-06-30 14:26]
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Bem vindo ao Trek Site..!!!
Boa foto para começar.
Continue....

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Reynaldo -- nofer


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Welcome to Trek Site..!!!
Good picture to begin.
Continue....

Some clues:
- Put your camera in introduction...
- Always visit the members to give a critic, here it exists a type of retribution among the members! Observing (and criticizing) mistakes and successes of other members bring a lot of learning!
- Make use of the workshop.
- Always put more than 4 lines in NOTES. That enables to give points for the members, or be enables USEFUL!
- Take advantage what is allowed in Site: until 800 pixels in one on the sides of the picture. Until 200 Kbs in the size of the file!
- Don't put names or dates directly in the picture. If you wants puts in a frame!
- Comments, even with two points, they don't punctuate the member, only critic punctuates!
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- Read ABOUT (and FAQ)!
I am sure that will take advantage of your stay in the site!!
Thank you!

Reynaldo -- nofer
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