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can you see me?
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Copyright: Cynthia Beijeman (c-ynthia) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 235 W: 5 N: 297] (1757)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-04-15
Categories: Nature
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-04-17 12:58
Viewed: 615
Points: 36
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Didn't have much time lately to add or comment photo's, but here I have a new try.
Yesterday I was walking in front of our house and saw on the roof a little bird (kwikstaartje called in dutch) I had to zoom in a lot to catch him, but the background was only brown trees, so I hardly could see him. I tried a new way to paste two photo's in each other one of the bird on the roof and one of a cloudy sky.
Please comment me in this one to change or improove the photo.

In the workshop I added the original with only the bird.
I still don't manage to keep the photo just below the limit of 200 p so this one is again a small one.

- cropped
- pasted on the sky background
- erased the trees away
- brightened a little

Thanks for watching
Cynthia

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That a nice creative approach. I do like what you've done with this image...and frankly, the original ain't that bad either...This one here as a good visual impact...i like the angles created by the roof...and the dark trees...at the buttom right corner..well done..

Hello Cynthia!
Very good your PP work! The original picture is good, too!
Excellent combination!
Lovely sky!
Best regards!
Lili

...I return... :)

Hi Cynthia,
Ja hoor, dit is goed gezien, een bijzondere opname dar een mees op het dak en die gigantische wolken als achtergrond te combineren. Pracht foto Cynthia!
Hans

Hello Cynthia
Beautiful sky high lighted well by the relief of
the clouds.Original Shot.Well done.TFS.
greetings
H.Ayhan

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  • Adri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 524 W: 23 N: 1853] (11208)
  • [2008-04-18 9:50]

Hoi Cynthia,
Heel mooi, zoals je deze kwikstaart 'gevangen' hebt! E.e.a. in een fraaie compositie en met deze wolkenlucht als prachtige achtergrond.
Groet uit Schouwen,
Adri

Hi Cynthia
I love the clouds very much, the small bird adds interest.
Nice natural colours.

Thanks
Gil

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1368 W: 0 N: 1670] (13545)
  • [2008-04-19 3:30]

Werkelijk prachtig gezien cyn.
jan

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  • S-moon Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 364 W: 80 N: 365] (2279)
  • [2008-04-19 11:51]

Hey Cynthia,

Echt prachtige foto! Ik had ook helemaal niet door dat het niet het origineel was. Echt heel mooi gedaan!

Groetjes Simone

Hi Cynthia,

Excellent result of the PP, I like the final composition. Also very good POV and colors, and the addition of the beautiful sky is very well done. TFS

Best regards,
Sorina

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  • ttreen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1407 W: 130 N: 3826] (15900)
  • [2008-04-20 5:31]

Hello Cynthia
Your pp work really paid off on this one.. No issues with borrowing a better BG! I love the look of the roof as well!!!


Tricia
PT:)

Hi Cynthia,

Je hebt zo een uitstekende compositie gemaakt en ik had er geen idee van dat het hier 2-in-1 was. Werkt dus uitstekend. Ik denk dat ik met mijn clonestempel zelfs de bomen rechtsonderaan helemaal had weggewerkt, of indien mogelijk het dakje wat hoger in de lucht geplaatst.
Het origineel is trouwens helemaal niet verkeerd, alleen dan zou je liever de vogel wat dichterbij hebben willen halen - ik snap het.
Genieten zo,

TFS
Els

Hi Cynthia,
nice shot,
lovely bird,
Good composition,
TFS...
Vaibhav..

Hi Cynthia, great diagonal composition with fascinating sky, very well done, ciao Silvio

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1397 W: 31 N: 3045] (12300)
  • [2008-04-24 6:33]

Hi Cynthia
Those clouds look like their is a storm approching.
Very clear, well composed and good pp work.
The result being the bird takes the spotlight.
Nice work
Dot

Cynthia, awesome photo. amazing workshop - i wish i could do 1/2 of what you do! I played in my humble way and listed another workshop - nothing that compared to your work!!!

Hi Cyntia
Beautiful clouds and bird in front of this image
Great sharp shot
TFS
All best to Holland
Cheers,Braca

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2235 W: 172 N: 0] (28820)
  • [2008-04-30 2:26]

Hi Cynthia ;)
great diagonale shot...nice atmosphere, TFS
Best regards,
J ;)

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  • A-lex Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 132 W: 54 N: 255] (2140)
  • [2008-04-30 10:24]

Voor het fantastisch werk dat je in de lucht hebt gestoken!!
Petje af!!
De vogel is heel mooi maar valt een beetje weg door het drukke rietendak. Volgende keer gewoon de boom in jagen!

Alex

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