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Big head


Big head
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Copyright: Babeth Vink (Ephona) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 12 W: 0 N: 22] (359)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-06-08
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Nikon D60, 18-55mm Nikkor
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/500 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-06-08 13:53
Viewed: 167
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Made this one today of my best friend. He is always my model when I want to practice some new things.
I wanted to practice with some unusual compositions. I really liked this one.
I wanted him to put his hand down like this so that it looks like his head is way too big for his body.
I really like it.
Hope you all like it too!!
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Well that's what happen when you use wide lens while shooting portrait...)))It distords reality...))

As for the photo itself, well it's not a bad one, nore a good one either.

The exposure and tones seems rights maybe a touch too magenta, adding a little red and yellow would take care of it. You should be paying more attention about the details..such as we can see the inside of the jacket, and the hood could have been rearrange, to compliment the face and overall framing.

All photo are snap shots.....paying attention to minors details, makes then better. Every part of your frame is IMPORTANT to produce a good shot.

Zoals je zegt, Babeth, ongewoon qua compositie en normaal ziet zo'n groot hoofd er niet uit, maar dat is anders hier... Precies omdat je voor iets ongewoons koos, lijkt alles hier te kloppen - oogt alles coherent.
Ik hou wel van het kleurenpalet, maar zou wel onderaan een goeie centimeter hebben weggeknipt: dat stukje hand hoeven we niet te zien, we denken dat er wel bij. Om alles in proportie te houden zou je dan wellicht ook bovenaan wat moeten "bijknippen".
Interessant experiment.
TFS & groetjes,
Erik

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