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The man with the Sword


The man with the Sword
Photo Information
Copyright: Babeth Vink (Ephona) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 12 W: 0 N: 22] (359)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-08-04
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Nikon D300, 18-55mm Nikkor
Exposure: f/8, 1/80 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-08-04 7:39
Viewed: 189
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I went down to the studio today with a good friend of mine to shoot some pictures of him.
This was the first time I worked in a studio. It was a really great experience.
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To Leica: Thanks!Ephona 1 08-04 12:59
To bri: Hey!Ephona 1 08-04 09:29
To nova: Thanks!Ephona 1 08-04 09:28
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  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2734 W: 263 N: 864] (8651)
  • [2009-08-04 8:28]
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Hello Babeth.This is your first experience in a studio? Very well done.Nice colors and good lighting.Only one detail though,we can feel the texture of the black paper in the background.That should be less exposed.There ia also some space lost above the head but that is not easy when someone is manipulating a sword like this one.Good shot.Thanks for sharing.
Michel

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 340 W: 0 N: 405] (2178)
  • [2009-08-04 8:37]
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Hi Babeth,
Great shot, in lovely focus and great colours. I have never done any studio work so cant comment - to the untrained eye this is brilliant. What kind of sword play was your friend practicing?
Cheers
Bri

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  • Leica Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 82 W: 41 N: 60] (2107)
  • [2009-08-04 10:32]
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You managed your light very well especially for your first experience.
However, I would like to see the subject in a less modern, more traditional outfit.

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  • Chang Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 49 W: 11 N: 30] (437)
  • [2009-08-04 23:10]

Hi Babeth!!

Excellent composition! well balanced exposure... but as mention by Leica, ur fiend should have been in less modern, more traditional outfit, and the outcome would have been amazing!!

TC
Regards
Muhammad Hasnain

hi babeth
excellent image ,great detail and lighting good strong colours.
regards
jimmy

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