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Copyright: Simone Beijeman (S-moon) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 376 W: 90 N: 380] (2361)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-01-26
Categories: Daily Life, Pets
Camera: Canon Powershot SD450
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/320 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-08-14 11:19
Viewed: 440
Points: 90
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi everybody!


My dog was cleaning herself after a long afternoon running through pools of water.

PP work:
I added some contrast and the filter lively colours and framed it.

I've chosen a POV from below to get the right division of sky and gras.
I know, the composition isn't very good (too much centre) but I hope you like the rest.

Let me know what you think!

Greetings Simone

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Simone this is excellent the details are realy sharp and you have got the dof spot on great pp work excellent pet portrait
tfs regards bryan

Hi Simone:
that shot is beautiful.
very good POV.
well done

regards

Hi Simone,

I love your shot! The attitude of the dog is very well captured. You've got vivid colors as well as perfect focus and lighting. It looks like you used a reflector on the right to attenuate the shade.

The result is very joyful and attractive!

Well done! TFS!

Mireille

Bonjour Simone.
Je viens de découvrir ce dossier et j’en profite pour admirer cette superbe image de toutou.
Félicitation pour cette présentation.
Bonne journée.
Urs

Hoi Moon,
Hebben we Puck ook weer. Ik blijf het een grappig hondje vinden. Alleen wel jammer dat tie hier omkijkt. POV is prachtig, zo lekker laag, zat Puck op een dijkje of lag jij op je buik? In ieder geval een mooie "actie foto" fijne heldere kleuren en perfect scherp!
Hans

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 383 W: 0 N: 456] (2437)
  • [2009-08-17 4:09]
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Hi Simone,
Beautiful pet portrait, the point of view is great....were you lying down for this? it works brilliantly. The detail and colours is outstanding as is the DoF. It is really well presented also. Cheers
Bri

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3574 W: 737 N: 2406] (19100)
  • [2009-08-17 7:24]

Hi Simone !

Haven't seen you for ages.
Love the colors of this great capture


best regards,
v

Hi Simone,
This is a fantastic shot. I like the low POV and vivid colors in this pictures. The detail in the dogs coat is wonderful. The green and yellow grass contrast nicely with the blue sky. Great shot Simone.
Regards,
Kevin

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1397 W: 0 N: 1693] (13689)
  • [2009-08-17 8:15]

Normaal gesproken ben ik niet zon huisdierenfoto liefhebber ,maar dit is heel sterke kwaliteit waar ik niet om heen kan.
Mooi Simoon.

jan

Als Puck eens zou beseffen hoe beroemd hij was............ Misschien zou hij zich dan niet elke keer zo vies maken!!!
TFS
Cynthia

Hi Simone.

This is one beautiful low pov shot. The details are brilliantly registered with such a beautiful backdrop.
TFS and best regards,
Jusni

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1329 W: 0 N: 2633] (21083)
  • [2009-08-20 10:04]

Hello

Merveilleus iamge de ce cien, il a une position superbe, la patte en l'aire, la tête tournée, un très beau poil, superbe image.

Bravo et amitié

Nicou

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  • Jan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 434 W: 123 N: 728] (4867)
  • [2009-08-21 4:14]

De kleuren zijn prachtig!! Ook je POV is goed gekozen!!
Prachtig scherp waar hij scherp moet zijn. Mooi hoor!!
Beetje jammer dat hij zo open en bloot ligt.... dat is niet mijn favoriete uitzichtspunt...:)

Liefs Jan

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  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2498 W: 56 N: 3862] (17484)
  • [2009-08-21 13:04]
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Hoi Simone,
wat je hebt ons hier, is dat je de man erin geslaagd bewonderenswaardige bekeken erg blij, want dit is zeer interessant. Uw terriër is zo schattig.
Groeten.
Janusz

High quality picture, Simone. Sharpness is amazing! Great details and lovely colors. Congratulations and TFS, my friend!

Greetings from Brazil,
Bruno

hi simone, hello from vancouver! yes i suppose the dog could be a bit more to the left perhaps but still the composition is not bad at all, the colors and details are wonderful, the low point of view is great too, its a very nice shot!
take care,
scott

Hi Simone,
Very nice photo of your dog! I actually think the central composition works well here. Fantastic exposure, the lighting looks balanced throughout her fur and the FG. Good low POV too. Nothing I would change about this - Bravo.

TFS,
Scott.

Bonjour Simone,
Beautiful presentation of your dog,
Excellent POV. and details,
picture very sharp and clear,
great caught of view .
good colors too.
Michel

hi Simone,

i like your POV a lot! close and personal haha.
cute moment!

tfs

i a n

this shot make me smile, Simone.. i like the bg/fg.. so beautiful and of course your lovely dog that facing the other way.. :) again nice work you did.. good job..

regards, terry

Hi Simone...
I am happy to read and see you again....
Simple and exactly in your style....
Bye until next time...
Soundsangels

Hi Simone,
A shot of beautiful and very funny moment...
Good focus and details.
Excellent clarity.tfs.
Dr.Seyfettin Güner

Hi Simone,
So beautiful portrait vith good POV, light and moment.TFS.
Groeten,

hAyAti

Certainly an effective low pov Simone. Your dog appears to be ready for a scratch. A handsome composition, the blurred grass on the bg provides good focus and contrast to your beloved dog. Best regards...
Danilo

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  • Lolo54 Gold Star Critiquer [C: 172 W: 0 N: 2] (1278)
  • [2009-09-06 14:51]

Good shot, excellent posing, the model well, congratulations, hugs

Hello Simone,
Perfect portrait and well taken BG with grasses
Good using of light...
Great ...
TFS
Selahattin E

Ciao Simone


Ah .. this is a beautiful sight,
I remember him since your last
photo - - Uncomplicated -. he is very cute!
The shot showing the shallow grass and small grass
is fantastic, and it all charming!
Sharpness and clarity are superb.
Composition and presentation are superb.
Very well done,

Have a nice week,

Sergio

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  • suzy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 426 W: 38 N: 1263] (4340)
  • [2009-09-08 11:10]
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Hi Simone

this is such a lovely shot.. is this a jack russel? beautiful dog indeed and a superb capture, sharp details on the fur and grass and the low POV works perfectly here, nevermind it's centered, it's actually great from all aspects..

cheers
suzy

Haha:) what a beauty Simone! Perfect moment to take a shot.
Wonderful POV and nice pose with excelent clarity and composition.
TFS and have a nice night!
Cheers,

Bayram

Hi Simone!
you have beautiful photos!
That shot is beautiful.
Regards.
A.

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  • akg Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 178 W: 0 N: 87] (1094)
  • [2009-09-12 10:25]

Hello Simone,
this is a great composition! Very well focussed, perfect placing of the dog against the sky and the right use of light. You have captured him in a very active moment.
I like this.

TFS, abhijit.

Hola Simone


agradable la luz y colores y nitidez buen trabajo

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  • jim-g Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 13 W: 0 N: 20] (2021)
  • [2009-09-19 13:57]

hi Simone, i love it pin sharp , excellent dof and as for composition well it works for me , incredible light also , very well done indeed :)

James

Hallo Simone,
Nu ben ik niet meteen een groot hondenliefhebber (wat wil je, met een trotse kat die bij mij thuis de scepter zwaait ;o)), maar ik vind je foto desalniettemin bijzonder geslaagd. Het bijzonder lage standpunt doet ons als kijker bijna in de huid van de hond kruipen. Leuk ook dat je hem hier in zijn dagelijkse bezigheden toont - "daily life", zoals je zelf aangeeft ;o).
In dit specifieke geval vind ik de gecentreerde compositie helemaal niet storend. Integendeel. Alle aandacht komt zo te liggen waar hij moet liggen: bij je hondje.
Kortom, een aandoenlijk, spontaan "portret", dat nog versterkt wordt door de frisse kleuren en mooie scherptediepte (grasstroken op de achtergrond).
TFS & groetjes,
Erik

hi simone
great shot of your terrier,good strong colours and,nice pose looking the other way maybe shy, love the grasses being blown in the b/g great detail.
regards
jimmy

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  • linus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1477 W: 10 N: 738] (10767)
  • [2009-10-04 8:51]

Hi Simone,
A very nice "action" shot. I like the low POV and very good the details are.
Sunil

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3312 W: 788 N: 4424] (19918)
  • [2009-10-10 20:35]

Hi Simone,
Delightful photo! Excellent capture! The pose is priceless!
very natural colors, sharp details and nice background. I like the contrast of the freeze motion of your dog and with the movement of grasses.
Beautifully done! Annie

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  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1446 W: 275 N: 2026] (12440)
  • [2009-10-13 12:54]

Hello Simone.
Good moment captured. Interesting point of view as well and managed focus.
Best Regards.
Janek Kloss

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  • glint Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 620 W: 3 N: 531] (3606)
  • [2009-10-20 0:57]

Hello Simone,
perfectly sharp and a great pov (goodness, you really must have had to get very low!).Cute wee doggie!!
Bev

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2276 W: 177 N: 0] (29292)
  • [2009-10-30 1:26]

Greetings Simone ;)))
Great moment...impressive POV. nice colors...TFS
Best wishes,
J ;)

Hello Simone,

Excellent shot of this very good moment.
Great POV, clarity, light, sharpness and colors.

Best regards,
Tatjana

P. S. You have lovely dog :)

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1434 W: 31 N: 3091] (12584)
  • [2009-11-07 8:00]

Hi Simone
I like the placement of the dog, he fills the whole frame showing us great details from his collar down to its claws, its has good sharpness and colors, and I like the pose of the dog whose action seems to be suspended in time.
Dot

Hallo Simone,

Je POF is perfect, evenals je compositie.de ogen van de hond zitten ver uit het midden.

Enig puntje wat ik zou kunnen noemen is dat het rechter voorpootje te strak gekaderd is.
Wat trouwens ook erg mooi is , de blauwe halsband vd hond samen met de blauwe lucht.

Groet Mark

Wat een lief plaatje is dit simoon,

Hi Simone..nice shot...great sharpness and tones...nice work.

Roger

Buen momento y original postura en este retrato del perro ,en ina impecable presentacion color y detalle
felicidades
Buen trabajo
un saludo

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