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Max and his kite


Max and his kite
Photo Information
Copyright: Willem Stolk (PeteShips) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 47 W: 13 N: 16] (235)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2003-07-11
Categories: Daily Life, Friends/Family, Portrait
Camera: HP Photosmart C812
Exposure: f/1.2
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-02-14 15:03
Viewed: 556
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Max his kite is flying!! For the first time. Looking to the camera is difficult.
I tried to make his face more sharp, but did not succeed. Anyone?
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Hello. Nice angle you use here. That sky is almost magic. Strange mix of white and blue...
Great work!! :O)

Willem,
Great colors in the picture. Not sure how to get the face and kite in focus without being further away from both. Did you lay on the ground to get the shot? Also, what if you focused on Max and not the kite?
Keep shooting,
Aaron

Original angle! The wire remain me a lesson at school...
The shorter way between two points, is a line :)

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