" A Cry For Attention"

Critiques [Translate]

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• cjjc_jules (3742)
• [2008-08-25 4:02]

excellent " emotion". great selective colour treatment. well compose self portrait. tfs-jon

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• leeloo (2696)
• [2008-08-25 4:52]

Dear Annelies Mol!
Original dynamic scene.
Good capture.
Very good frame.
Very interesting picture.
TFS!

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• reach_aadi (19)
• [2008-08-25 6:27]
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Hey anne.. how did u manage to get the focus on your face... or did you do any touch up for your hair to give an out of focus appearance.. Nice work...

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• Janone (0)
• [2008-08-27 8:55]
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Wow, A Number one for me, Annelies.
Specially known now, its made by yourself, as a self portrait.
To 'judge' it, I would say maybe a cutt off from the right side, closes to your hair ?
And, maybe a clone of your teeth to make it white, now it looks your lipstick is on the teeth.
Cheers and Bravo for this result.
Jan

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• joopschotsman (5523)
• [2008-08-28 12:17]

Hoi Annelies,
I also think it is a great contribution to the challenge !!
Maybe, just maybe, the expression doesn't include the eyes. The eyes seems to be too relaxed while the mouth is screeming.
The colored mouth is a very nice detail.
greetings,
Joop!

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• sotiris_k (504)
• [2008-08-31 6:02]

Hi Annelies! This is a very artistic work! It's a pity you didn't won a prize in the contest, but I'm sure you will if you continue to improve... well done!
Have a nice day!

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• Kilted-Arab (9485)
• [2008-09-02 17:22]

Hi Annelies - I think that this is an unusual and effective self portrait. The composition and choice of b/w both work well. I'm not overly keen on the frame, I think the shot is strong enough by itself. Very nice shot.

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• pitzimba (410)
• [2008-09-03 12:47]

Ciao Annelies,
very original work, nice expression and composition.
Good shot!

Silvia

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• Jan (4867)
• [2008-09-06 11:35]

Well done, Annelies!!! Ik heb je critiques even gelezen, maar er staan nuttige dingen bij. Ik vind dat je het goed gedaan hebt!!!

Op naar de volgende challenge!!!

Janneke

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• shelbeesmom (48306)
• [2008-09-08 6:48]

I love this Annelies! Excellent self-portrait, natural pose (if this is natural LOL!) and LOVE the RED lips...really shows a sassy side to you! Very brave to post self portaits, I've done 4 and was dreading each one, but KNEW I had to in order to BUST out and do something different! This is superb!
B-)
Linda

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• lucaq8 (114)
• [2008-09-09 2:40]

Very nice idea for this shot!
I like also the work with the colors in the post process.

Brava
Ciao
Luca

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• Fons (15646)
• [2008-09-17 11:46]

een opmerkelijke schreeuw naar attentie
Mooie uitdrukking !

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• korbee (13695)
• [2008-10-08 11:16]

Hahahahahaha dat heb je heel dubblzinnig en subtiel aangepakt Annelies,want aandacht verdient dit leuke werkje zeker.
jan

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• GreenBaron (49203)
• [2009-06-12 10:50]

Hoi Annelies,
Zo, ben jij ook uit de Janneke-de-With-stal? :-) In ieder geval een Enschedeër zie ik.
Je hebt in deze foto de emotie, al dan niet gespeeld, prachtig vastgelegd. De gedeeltelijke desaturatie is prachtig gelukt. De motion blur werkt hier perfect en creeerd en specifieke uitgelaten stemming. Uitstekende inzending.
Hans

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• Albatros (638)
• [2009-08-14 5:12]

Hey

Congratulations. The emotion shown represents exactly the title given - there is no doubt about that.

TFS
Albatros