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My first TL photo!


My first TL photo!
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Copyright: Matthias de With (Matthanja) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 20 W: 12 N: 30] (178)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-03-10
Categories: Artwork
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-03-10 10:46
Viewed: 427
Points: 56
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hello everybody,

Here am I with my first photo. I tried someting with big marbles, a golden cloth and a desk light.

I hope you like my first try!!

Matthias
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Hi,Matthias,
In terms of colours I guess you've done well,
by the way, welcome to TL where, no doubts,you'll have wonderful moments!
TFS
Valerka:)

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  • S-moon Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 336 W: 72 N: 340] (2125)
  • [2009-03-10 10:55]

Heee Matthias,

Mooie eerste foto hoor. Heel veel plezier hier op TL!

Groetjes Simone

Hello, Matthias!

Welcome to TL!
Congratulations for this good start, mate. Beautiful picture!
I hope you will enjoy this site. All we can learn a lot here.

Greetings from Brazil,
Bruno

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  • Ejtaan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 956 W: 100 N: 2206] (11094)
  • [2009-03-10 11:08]

:-) I like this kind of experimenting Matthias.
Sometimes it gives you the most rewarding results.
Lovely soft tones and an intreguing background.

Cheers,
Anneke

P.s.: welkom op TL. Ik hoop dat je het hier naar je zin krijgt en dat het je mag brengen wat je zoekt.

Welcome to TL Matthias. I like this experimental shot - very imaginative. Maybe I would have cropped down a little further from the top though - the V shaped lit area in the center looks a bit like a mini-tornado, and is a little distracting. Still a great shot.
Trudy

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  • Margy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 111 W: 6 N: 227] (2512)
  • [2009-03-10 11:52]

Hi Matthias,

Een mooie binnenkomer, een bijzondere foto, mooi van kleur en veel details om te bekijken.
Veel plezier op TL,
groetjes, Marga

Hi Matthias.

This is very nice capture of light. Good composition and use of DOF. Anyway, welcome to TL : enjoy !

Kind Regards

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  • Jan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 426 W: 123 N: 721] (4817)
  • [2009-03-10 12:33]

Hi Matthias, I know for a long time that you wanted to join TL.
And now you did! Your first photo! I saw you laying on the grond with some lights and my camera. And I didn't want to disturb you....
But I love the result! Great sharpness, good composition and very sharp focus!

Well done, my boy!!! I am proud of you!

Janneke

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  • Hitbit Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 440 W: 163 N: 451] (5870)
  • [2009-03-10 12:55]

Hoi Matthias welkom op TL.

Gelijk een hele mooie plaat met een mooie dof, prachtige kleuren en scherpte. Prima begin ik kijk uit naar de volgende.

Tfs
Grtz Pim

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  • vbnv Silver Star Critiquer [C: 36 W: 0 N: 1] (386)
  • [2009-03-10 13:31]

Hi Matthias,
Very impressive one for the first one. Welcome on TL! Continue like that. Regards,
Valérie

Welcome to TL.
An interesting composition, good use of the light to create the reflections close to the camera and a nice mix of colours and textures. Hope you have fun posting more pictures.
Thanks for sharing
Mark

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  • A-lex Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 132 W: 54 N: 255] (2140)
  • [2009-03-10 14:04]

He Mat,

Wat een gave gelijk de eerste keer! Goed man!
Ben helemaal trots op je!
Ik vind de kleuren heel mooi en ze geven een lekker warm gevoel. Knap dat je hem ook zo scherp hebt gekregen!
Heel veel succes met al je andere foto's!

Oompje Alex

ps. Hoe kom je aan de fotoviewer onderin?? Die wil ik ook!!

Good evening Matthias

and welcome to TL. This is excellent first posting. The shot, composition, colurs and sharpness are wonderful. Keep on doing the good work.

I wish you many great moments here on TL.

Stasa

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  • wieyos Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1114 W: 43 N: 2142] (8957)
  • [2009-03-10 18:10]

nice colours and clarity here for a debut posting, Matthias.
welcome to TL.

Thanks for sharing
regards
Agoes

Hi Matthias.....
The colors and tones are like candy for the eyes....
Bravo
Welcome on TL.....
Claude

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3535 W: 724 N: 2379] (18894)
  • [2009-03-11 2:40]

Welcome to TL !

Superb lighting and colors.


thanks,
v

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  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1388 W: 275 N: 1876] (11642)
  • [2009-03-11 11:37]

Hello Matthias.
Welcome on TL.
Good looking marble presentation on the first time.
I like idea here.
Regards
Janek Kloss

Hi Matthias, welcome to TL! You started with an awesome-esthetic macro shot of these two different coloured marbles from effective POV with great DOF.
Well done!
TFS and cheers,
Bayram

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4183 W: 407 N: 6474] (41355)
  • [2009-03-13 0:45]

Hallo Matthias & welcome to Trek Lens!

Good backlight on the translucent marbles with wonderful reflections & good dof & sharpness. A very good first post to TL. Thank you for sharing!

Heey Matthias,

Nou, dat is al meteen een goede binnenkomer ! Origineel hoor !
Welkom bij TL, ik hoop dat je hier veel kunt leren en vooral veel plezier zult hebben.

groetjes, willemien

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2211 W: 171 N: 0] (28378)
  • [2009-03-13 1:20]

Hi Matthias ;)
Welcome to TL...
Wonderful light, reflection, composition...
Best wishes,
J ;)

Hello Matthias,
woooooooooooow! What great first photo!
This is a magnificent effect, you are really good. Well done.
A dear hug
Giorgio

Hallo Matthias.
Prachtige opname kunstzinnig en erg creatief. Ik geniet er van. Ook de kleuren zijn erg goed gekozen.
Topper waarmee je start.
Gr Frans

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  • MLINES Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1305 W: 95 N: 1020] (8454)
  • [2009-03-13 23:48]

Hi Matthias, Welcome to TL. This is a fine creative image which you display well. The two marbles are nicely off-set which balances the photograph. Keep up the good creations. Murray.

Hi Matthias
great first to start!!
wonderful work and perfect effect of light
welcome on TL
ciao
Lucio

Hello Matthias!
You first picture in TL is really beautiful!
You played excellent with light!
So small and so talented!
Best regards!
Lili

Hi Matthias,

An excellent first photo in TL! Wonderful composition, beautiful colors and light, I like very much this capture. Congratulations!
Sorina

Welcome to TL Matthias, with excellent art work.
I like this composition, dual-color, nice reflection...
Good work.

Best regards,
Alex

hi .. this is your 1st here .. but its great .. i always as attracted to those glass drops .. remind me whit my childhood :D and specially this kind i mean with no colorful things inside it .. was so specially for kids here :D ..thanks for this great shot .. excellent idea .. and well done .. Harout.

Ciao Matthias, a great welcome on TL, splendid composition with fantistic colors, fascinating reflections, bravo, ciao Silvio

Hello

Welcome to you on TL with a first and very fantastic photo.
Excellent work, the pov and colors are so good.
I like the reflections here.
My compliments for your minimalist composition.
Effective result.

Welkom

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