Hmmm...that smile!

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• Sharpshooter (6920)
• [2009-08-30 13:17]

Hi Jan,
Fantastic portrait! Very photogenic daughter you have, I can see why they come to you to have their profile photos taken :). The composition and clarity looks excellent. To be picky, the exposure on her face doesn't seem completely balanced in places - But I assume this was taken outside so it's understandable. Glad you got her smiling for this one, well done.

TFS,
Scott.

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• GreenBaron (48794)
• [2009-08-30 13:17]
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Hoi Janneke,
Prachtig portret van Vivianne! Perfect scherp heerlijke kleuren. Het hoge POV gheft een speciaal gevoel bij het bekijken. Haar glimlach is "priceless".
Pracht foto Jan!
Hans

P.S. Ben komend weekend in Enschede.

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• rminkow (15239)
• [2009-08-30 13:33]

Hi Janneke..your daughter is fantastic and you did a great job on this shot....

Roger

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• Beger (19894)
• [2009-08-30 13:50]

Hi Janneke,
You have a beautiful daughter!
She ressembles much at you, too!!
This portrait is well composed with a very good placement of her beautiful eyes in the superior third. The light enhances the really the tint of her skin and her smile makes the rest of her charm! Annie

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• samansarraf (2167)
• [2009-08-30 13:57]

Hi Janneke
I have to say this is one of the best photos which I have already seen on Treklens. You did the best. The composition, cadre and light are completely acceptable. I read your note about it and I found it perfect. I give it useful mark.
Have a good continuation and thanks for sharing
Saman

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• Mrlittle (5539)
• [2009-08-30 15:00]

Hallo Janneke.
Erg mooie compositie met die strepen er zo achter. Een super portret en dus een zeer geslaagde opname. klasse.
Gr Frans

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• john1 (1477)
• [2009-08-30 15:08]

Hello Janneke,

Beautifull portrait, very nice smile.
Sharp and details are great.
Fantastic shot.
Have a good day.
John

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• tjutjut (15946)
• [2009-08-30 17:05]

Hi Jan,

Beautiful portrait of Vivianne . . Very well composed with textured wood as BG . . with diagonal stripe of the frame . .
Lovely expression of her . .

Tfs,
Tjutjut

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• Urfaust (13103)
• [2009-08-30 17:43]

as you promised.. ;)
well Janneke.. a wonderful smiling portrait..
nice the expression.. so natural.. with a beautiful smile.. and fresh and intense the entire show of your daughter.. also good the choise for the BG.. the wooden matter is the perfect framing for your alive model..
great job! my compliments
ciao Marco

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• sanjibbehera (1347)
• [2009-08-30 19:59]

Hi Jan,

a good portrait here. what I liked about this photo is the composition and the angled shot. she is photogenic and having a good smile. good exposure and good clarity over here.

Tfs,
Sanjib.

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• rewshearer (20799)
• [2009-08-30 21:30]

A lovely natural looking shot - the smile is beautiful, her eyes are beautiful. I like your composition and POV.

Possibly a slightly quicker shutter, the light on her face is stronger than it needs to be, and the highlights, on her teeth especially, are almost overdone.

A great shot though, beautiful!

Rew

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• Ejtaan (11339)
• [2009-08-30 21:52]

Just like her mom!!!! hahahah
wow.. she sure is a pretty looking lady.
And I think you have done a wonderful job on this portrait.
Lovely colors and a well chosen background.

Cheers,
Anneke

P.s.: it's good to see you back here again and to know that you are doing better now....

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• S-moon (2279)
• [2009-08-31 7:34]

Heel gaaf!! Je profielfoto ook ;-)

Groetjes Simone

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• Margy (2512)
• [2009-08-31 13:44]

Hi Janneke,

Een prachtportret, heel mooi dat je hem vanuit dit standpunt genomen hebt.
Prachtige heldere kleuren en een prima scherpte.
De BG is mooi en neutraal waardoor het accent goed op je dochter valt.
Heel mooi gedaan!
groetjes, Marga

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• Arif2006 (218)
• [2009-09-01 0:59]

wonderful smile .

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• korbee (13545)
• [2009-09-01 10:16]

I wish my daughter was so willing to pose for my lens;],you can be proud of yourself and your daughter Jan.

jan

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• hay_kes (56502)
• [2009-09-02 0:19]

Hi Janneke,
A wonderful portrait vith execellent pose and smile.TFS.
Cheers,

hAyAti

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• Matthanja (178)
• [2009-09-03 6:57]

Hello Jan
A very sharp photo
Thanks for sharing this Photo
A beautiful shot
Well done!

matthias

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• KBE (2707)
• [2009-09-03 10:39]

Very nice Portrait of ur charming daughter Janneke

She has beautiful smile and pretty eyes :)
Nice composition and very good focus.
A good contribution for the Friday's theme

Good job
TFS
Cheers
JZM

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• jone (28820)
• [2009-09-04 0:43]

Hi Janneke ;)
Wondarful happy positive portrait...TFS
Beautiful model...
Best wishes,
J ;)

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• Juliet (13538)
• [2009-09-04 6:14]

Hi Janneke,
I was just reviewing your gallery and you have some really impressive photos. Your daughter is beautiful and you're portrait work is great. I love the POV, the award winning smile and the overall fine job on this. Lighting/details/ natural colors. Really a fine portrait. Good luck with the wedding. Will look for more posts. Thanks Julie

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• teamill (5154)
• [2009-09-04 11:19]

Wow, she's a beautiful girl! You've composed this shot so nicely ... love the perspective from slightly above her - the worn wooden wall as a backdrop is perfect also. Great colors, and nice and sharp.
very nice Janneke!
Trudy

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• boomcat (16869)
• [2009-09-06 0:12]

hello Jan,

your daughter is beautiful with bright eyes and smile.. im sure she take it from you :) lovely potrait shot you made here.. beautiful composition.. good backdrop where she pose for you.. good work you done..

regards, terry

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• moli (11992)
• [2009-10-03 2:21]

Hello Janneke.
Beautiful portrait of your daughter.
Well captured and well composed.
Good point of view.
Photogenic girl.
Nice to see her portraits.
Best Regards.
Janek Kloss

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• ramon (3311)
• [2009-10-13 23:53]

Hi Janneke,

Very nice candid shot.
Excellent details.

TFS
Ramon

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• ed_galagan (2333)
• [2009-10-21 9:45]

Hello Janneke!

Beautiful expression, eyes and smile! :-) Nice girl!

Regards,
Edward

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• mvdisco (35177)
• [2009-10-24 12:39]

Hi Janneke,
Beautiful girl your daughther!! lovely hair and smile,
lovely portrait and great colors and light,
Lovely eyes too...
congradulations..
Michel

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• urs0114 (4585)
• [2009-11-15 10:56]

Bonjour Janneke.
Avec un sourire aussi resplendissant on peut faire que de belles photos.
Félicitations pour cette composition.
Bonne soirée.
Urs