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Copyright: FOTO SHOOT (fotoshoot_nl) (66)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-04-07
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 5D Mark II, 85 mm 1.8
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-06-19 0:55
Viewed: 255
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 14
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I decided to make it black and white because then you really mostly focus on the eyes, no color draws your attention away. And I also realy found the pearls nice, matched the eyes well ad the whole picture got some kind of an attitude or so. Shot on the white background with one softbox and with a lamp from left. Canon 5D, 85mm lens. Hope you like!
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Oh I Love this one in black and white, beautiful eyes and nice light!!!
Marina

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1435 W: 22 N: 0] (11542)
  • [2009-06-19 0:58]

Hi...
Beautiful b@w shot...
Nice portrait...
Have a nice weekend...
Regards...
Andro

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 310 W: 0 N: 361] (1972)
  • [2009-06-19 0:59]

Beautiful portrait shot, the focus on the eyes is brilliant and the B&W works great. TFS
Bri

Hello Miss 'shoot'.
Welcome on treklens.
Pretty looking close up portrait of this beautiful lady.
Sure the eyes take all the attention, but I see also that you have uploaded it, in too little format with too little kilobites.
Please make me more happy with 800 pixels and close to 300 kilobites.
Will have a look at your other uploads
Groeten van Jan

A very striking mono portrait - the eyes are haunting - However I do feel that the models hand does pull the eye away from her face. I would suggest a tighter crop to remove it. Still a nice image though.
TFS
Will

Nice. I like the b&w treatment of this. Strong composition, great placement of her eyes within the frame, and I like the slightly grainy texture on the shaded side of her face.
Not sure what the white object is in the lower-left corner, but it is slightly distracting. Also not so sure about the half-cropped hand at the bottom of the frame. Otherwise, nice work!
Rew

beautiful shot nice eyes good portrait, I think you could have cropped the hand just as Rew said.

tfs
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