MayGirl#4

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• boonie (6295)
• [2008-05-17 12:44]
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Ahhhhh grandchildren are so much fun. This little girl will be spending a lot of time infront of your lens. My suggestion is to try photographing her from the other side in this lighting situation - bright side closer to the camera. Focus on the eye on the bright side. Really like the colors and frame.

Dan

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• GreenBaron (38635)
• [2008-05-17 12:47]
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Hoi Oma,

Heppie birdsday Ad! Noge vele jaren in gedegezondheid met Henkie (do you pass teh message my dear! :-)

A fine delicate portrait of his wonderful baby :-) Like the soft focus and the large black frame!

Heel fijn deze prachtige opname Henkie. Wees maar heel erg trots!
Hans

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• photophantom (3045)
• [2008-05-17 12:51]

Adorable baby...
Dennis

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• Refugee (24939)
• [2008-05-17 13:11]
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I have to go the other way from Dan Els, I like the backlighting and the lower light. Good colour, nice skin tones and well presented. TFS,
David

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• LuCho-Man (1073)
• [2008-05-17 13:51]

Hi,

Wonderful picture, a very cute baby, I love the soft blue colour on her eyes.

Nice job ;)

Regards

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• Ejtaan (9490)
• [2008-05-17 15:00]
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d'r hangt wel een donkere schaduw over d'r snoetje, maar ik vind dat toch niet echt storend...
mooi portretje hoor Els... en een mooi meidje!!!

:-)
Anneke

P.s.: ben wel wat aan de late kant, maar feliciteer Ad nog even van me!! Dikke knuffel!

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• lilimih33 (13768)
• [2008-05-17 16:16]

Hello Els!
Beautiful baby! Very nice composition!
Perfect light!
Great colours!
Best regards!
Lili

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• copadonat (4134)
• [2008-05-17 17:39]

Els

te felicito hermosisisisimo cuadro

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• boomcat (10945)
• [2008-05-17 18:38]
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first of all congratulation on your new camera :D i have tried this while looking for a camera.. my preference is the DSLR 200. almost want to buy it but my bro bought me the H7.. so im going to use it first and come back later for the 200.

beautiful shot of Myriam again, Els.. love it.. so sweet and tender.. and she grow up more from the last shot.. can't see anything wrong in the eye.. even the bg is beautiful and focus light only to Myriam. the red is stunning.. i guess im one of the few who can't wait to see how your granddaughter look like in the months she grow :) (only open my email just now.. thank you so much for the lovely pictures of Myriam and your family)

regards, terry

*very sunny now.. looks like a good day no sign of raining.. and i hope you have a good sunday with your family too, Els.. Happy birthday to your honey.. :D

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• Mujahid-Awais (3946)
• [2008-05-17 19:21]

More than Beautiful. Cute and lovely.

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• Mirra78 (4491)
• [2008-05-17 20:30]

Hello Els,

Beautiful portrait, I love the lighting here and dark tones.
Very touching :) and effective.
Thanks for showing,
Iza

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• Regiomontana (2229)
• [2008-05-17 21:20]
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She is a doll. I can see her very blonde hair coming out. Perfect color and texture of her skin. Her lips are beautiful. Too bad we can not see clearly her left eye. I can not give you advice on it, but I will be reading what suggestions you receive. Well framed. TFS

Lorena

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• azaf1 (4074)
• [2008-05-17 23:40]

So, Happy Birthday, Els
The capture with the side light and the dark background is just great as it is. As for the eyes they don't disturb the least
Have a great Sunday
Argiris

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• AndroK (7249)
• [2008-05-18 0:31]

Hi...
Lovely baby...
Beautiful portrait...
Best regards...

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• ayse51 (11017)
• [2008-05-18 0:47]

OOOOOOh...Els,
what a lovely baby.Great portrait.I liked it so much.Especiaaly ligt is perfect.Best wishes and healthy days for you and your nice family.TFS.Necla.:)later.

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• pablominto (27422)
• [2008-05-18 1:06]
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Hello Els,
Do I see a touch of Rembrandt here?
But I for sure see a happy and contended baby, in a wonderful composition...
Greetings,
Pablo -

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• pixelblur (584)
• [2008-05-18 1:49]

Wow!!!! Great lighting and exposure!!! Perfect!!! TFS!

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• Janone (17909)
• [2008-05-18 2:10]
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Goede morgen Els.
Als je dit pracht plaatje ziet gaan je ogen vanzelf wel open, toch ?
Wat een 'droppie' zou Meri zeggen. (Ze roept weer eens voor de koffie, maar ze moet eerst maar eens komen kijken, haha)
Myriam ziet al uit als het zonnetje wat hier zo heerlijk schijnt.
Van Harte Gefeliciteerd, Ad.
Fijne dag jullie, take it easy.
Meri en Jan

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• kiwi_explorer (2657)
• [2008-05-18 2:25]

Hi Els,
She looks like a doll ... beautiful blue eyes. Good use here of spot lighting with dramatic effect. I like the soft effects and diagonal orientation of the baby. Well captured and composed ... excellent work! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

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• andrei (1194)
• [2008-05-18 2:33]
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Els
I like the light from the back giving the photo a very low key definition. The red arround her face gives good definition.
Only way to get both eyes in focus is a smaller aperture (but then you need a longer shutter and how do you keep a baby in the same position for a long time). Alternatively you can move further from her face which will give a greater dof because the object is further from the lens.
TFS
Andrei

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• OWO (2335)
• [2008-05-18 4:48]
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Hoi Els,

Ik denk dat gefeliciteerd wel op z'n plaats is. Met je kleindochter uiteraard maar vooral ook met dit pracht portret. Mooi belicht en fraai van compositie. Haar fonkelende blauwe ogen komen fraai tot hun recht. Mooi gedaan hoor!

Groeten,

Edwin

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• Jan (3965)
• [2008-05-18 5:31]
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Hoi Els, what a good use of light!!
Heb je die zwarte achtergrond er zelf bij gevoegd of had je echt een zwarte achtergrond. Het geeft een mooi effect! Die waterige oogjes zijn zo mooi!!

Janneke

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• Lanbowen (2229)
• [2008-05-18 5:47]

Well this picture is superb and the main reason is your light; that light is perfect.
Well done and happy birthday to husby.

David

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• Yukumizu (601)
• [2008-05-18 5:50]
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Hi Els,

It's difficult for me so say in english how wonderful I think that picture is. You did a good job.It's not a picture of baby as one often sees some but a real picture.
Best regards,
Olivier

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• vandana2923 (22118)
• [2008-05-18 6:03]

Hello Els,
I like this light and side face composition.
Very adorable photo. TFS
Vandana
later

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• sharinawati (558)
• [2008-05-18 6:28]

Hello Els,
Such a beautiful child.
Beautiful portrait and the composition is just brilliant.
Pleasant mood and colors too.
Simply beautiful!

Best regards,
Sharina

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• shelbeesmom (33454)
• [2008-05-18 6:34]
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Ahhh how can it be any better?? Adorable! LOVE the softness here and the lighting is perfect! I assume ambient? Just the best! I have no idea how to make the babies eyes line up! HAHA! maybe a deeper DOF, achieve by pulling back on the zoom and stepping forward more. But there is no way at this angle to make the eyes line up...would be too weird! Our brains make up for that, I SEE that baby as it should be! Good shot Els!
You get an award for this one!
B-)
Linda

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• gnada (13651)
• [2008-05-18 7:06]

Hi Els...

Ohhh, I no, so much fun with a grandchildren...
Wonderful close up shot and very nice shot of a very cute baby.
Well done.
Best wishes,
George

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• harpya (32677)
• [2008-05-18 7:21]

Ohhh Els...

That wonderful vision.
I am amazed with the beauty and sweetness of this picture.
it is beautiful...very beautiful!
Her face is delicate an angel
that beautiful eyes, that soft skin and that beautiful
I work you did here.
Congratulations in double.

Sérgio

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• Dpbours (2066)
• [2008-05-18 9:37]
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Hoi Els,

Heel mooi met het silouette van de moeder(?), of in ieder geval iemand's silouette. Lekker zware donkere partijen zorgen voor een mooie balans met het kindje. En een mooi kindje is het!!
Ben je trouwens tevreden over je Alpha 350? Een vriend van me wil er eentje kopen, of anders een Nikon D80 - of de D90 die misschien in Juni uit gaat komen... Dus ik vroeg me af wat jouw ervaringen zijn over de Alpha 350!

Groetjes!
Dennis

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• vsinopoulos (13071)
• [2008-05-18 11:04]

Hi Els,

First of all best wishes for Ads Birthday, and give him our greeting.
This atmospheric portrait is really excellent, the lighting, composition and presentation top notch! Of course the model is a very pretty!
TFS,
Take care Tanya-Vassilis

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• Royaldevon (8151)
• [2008-05-18 11:35]

Hello Els,

What a wonderful shot!
Your little grand-daughter has skin like porcelain! There is just enough light to reflect in her eyes and show the lovely contours of her face.
Your framing is perfect! Well done, my friend!

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

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• glint (2555)
• [2008-05-18 12:22]

Hello Els,
a nic ecomposition with black and red. of course only made wonderful by Myriam.
regards
Bev

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• NellyD (2741)
• [2008-05-18 14:03]
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Hoi Els,

Ben wat laat, maar toch nog van harte gefeliciteerd met je man's verjaardag :-)
En over deze foto, wat een prachtportret en je "mei-meisje" is echt een plaatje hoor. Mooi licht ook en het brede frame vind ik er goed bij passen.
Mooi gedaan!

Groetjes, Nel

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• Dingo (11620)
• [2008-05-18 14:41]
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Prachtlicht, Els... en ik vind de scherpte op het verste oog helemaal niet storend. Als je een grotere scherptediepte wilt zul je helaas je ISO moeten verhogen en een kleiner diafragma nemen, zoals f/8 of zo...
Een mooi kindje, ook. Als die kijkers zo blauw blijven zal binnen een jaartje of 15, 16, menig jongenshart wat sneller gaan slaan ;o))
Hé, heb je de Minolta ingeruild voor een α ? Niet slecht ;o)
Groetjes & TFS

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• inunguak (2735)
• [2008-05-18 15:17]
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Hi Els:
Little Red Riding Hood already... beautiful light on your grand daughters face and the colours are very natural,You are using your new Carl Zeiss well... thanks for another beauty Els...Roman:0)

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• Patricia (3462)
• [2008-05-18 17:52]

Hi Els, What a little darling. She looks a very contented little one. Your lighting is perfect for this shot and I like your dark background. Well done! TFS. Cheers, Pat.

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• wilth (1434)
• [2008-05-18 21:31]
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Adorable. I agree with all the grandchildren statements, they're precious and special and a whole new world and experience.
As to suggestions, I don't know what You were going for here but this photo, as presented, has such a feeling of warmth and love that I wouldn't change a thing, if it were me.
Nicely visualized and presented.
The softness adds to the warmth and the lighting contributes, especially the red tones, to the displayed, and suggested, love.
Great work, TFS,
Wilt

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• jagroopsingh (1264)
• [2008-05-18 21:40]

hello dear els

how r u dear!

this is amazing.....
very lovely child and very well composed with one side lighting
great contrast and very lovely compo

best regards
jagroopsingh

*thanks a lot for your kind words about ºTwisted Treeºº

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• Urfaust (10421)
• [2008-05-18 23:47]
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wonderful.. excellent capture!!
ciao Marco

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• devylla (2507)
• [2008-05-19 1:01]

This is lovely.
You grand dauther is beautiful and sweet.
Thanks for sharing with us this picutre

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• Silvio2006 (26365)
• [2008-05-19 1:22]

Hi Els, lovely portrait of cute baby with splendid eyes, very well done, best wishes to your husband, ciao Silvio

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• Fortuna (14377)
• [2008-05-19 2:48]

Olá Els,

Lovely portrait of your angel! Fantastic light, bright and contrast!
Congratualtions and TFS,

Sergio
on monday

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• jawa (10965)
• [2008-05-19 3:08]
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Hallo Els
Wat is ze toch lief.
Prachtige compositie.
Gr Jos

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• chrisJ (28073)
• [2008-05-19 6:02]

Hi Els

Good softness, with the tilt adding superb dynamism. I like the dark bg & high contrast. Tfs!

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• jone (17433)
• [2008-05-19 6:29]

Hi Els ;)))
what a beautiful angel...
Best wishes to you and your husbuand...
J ;)

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• budgun (1753)
• [2008-05-19 7:13]

Hi Els,
Wonderful portrait of your beautiful young granddaughter. Those beautiful big blue eyes are very well seen against the dark background. Beautiful framed picture of this little charmer.
Regards, Tom

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• CallMeMaria (13929)
• [2008-05-19 8:18]
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Hi Els,
Lovely presentation of your beautiful granddaughter. The texture, DOF and colors are marvellous!
Happy Birthday to your husband and a nice week to all.
Regards,
Lurdes

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• TripleT (2982)
• [2008-05-19 9:58]
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What a wonderful portrait, I love it! Congratulations on the new baby girl!
Tracy

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• Helkoryo (21672)
• [2008-05-19 15:08]
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Hello Els

Well I am pleased and honoured to be the person to give this beautiful image its 100th points. What an absolutely adorable capture, wonderful soft light and tones gives such a radiant innocence. Wonderful work my friend

TFS regards Helen

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• brianna1 (1071)
• [2008-05-19 20:05]

Magnifique portrait!
J'aime particulièrement la netteté et le réalisme de cette scène.Très beau jeu d'ombre et lumière.
Félicitations!
France

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• tjutjut (15049)
• [2008-05-20 17:47]

Hi Els,

Wow! . . This is a beautiful portrait . . I like the ambient light . . so natural and lovely composition . .
Wonderful shot my dear friend . .
Happy belated birthday to your husband . .

Tfs,
Tjutjut

Many thanks for your kind words on National Awakening .

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• puffy (16565)
• [2008-05-20 23:59]
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Oh my my... what a beautiful Myriam, she grow so fast, look at her beautiful eyes...:D Well captured Els... and happy belated birthday to your husband. :D


Have a nice day,

Cheers,
Sweety

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• korbee (8425)
• [2008-05-21 8:27]
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Eigenlijk is dit een beetje oude-meester achtig schaduw gebruikiets wat zoveel mooier is dan de gewone vlakke heldere lichte foto.
Ik vind zelfs dat de linker kant van het gezichtje nog ietsje donkerdr had gemogen....
Dank je Els.
jan

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• moli (7065)
• [2008-05-21 9:12]

Hello Els.
Great and well presented. Beautiful portrait, so natural so soft.
Well presented on the black background.
My compliments.
Janek Kloss

:) be back

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• JohnTulip (36194)
• [2008-05-23 23:20]

Els:
Fabulous !!!
Also compliments for PP

Groetjes
John

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• izmirli (15399)
• [2008-05-24 3:44]

merhaba dear els
excellent portrait picture.mgnificent lovely baby and composition.well done.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

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• nishantdavid (1248)
• [2008-05-26 22:27]
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Hello Els
Marvellous Capture.
The light is superb.
Excellent Photoshop work.
Great Job

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• ttreen (14411)
• [2008-06-04 8:26]
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Oh Els
Myriam looks so nice with the reds and blacks! She is really beautiful.. and those perfect lips!!!!

Tricia

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• pozaru (16099)
• [2008-06-10 4:11]
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Where was I when you've posted this jewel !?

thanks,
v

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• Redrubin (8261)
• [2008-06-22 21:58]

its really a nice portrait
great light effect and shadow
very nice
ciao
Lucio