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The coming rain


The coming rain
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Copyright: Lucky Alan (lucky-alan) Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 32 N: 10] (1937)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-07-21
Categories: Daily Life, Nature
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/500 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-07-23 22:19
Viewed: 214
Points: 12
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The coming rain,



Lucky
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Hi Lucky, how are you friend?
This is quite a nice shot. Stormy sky and the use of desaturation makes it very dramatic one. I also like the presence of the bathers in the shot. They do add to it. Good exposure, contrast and tone transitions. Nice work.

Lucky
Un ciel et une photo très impressionnants. Il est temps de sortir de l'eau!
Amicalement
JJ

Amazing pic, liked the proportion of the Sky vs Sea. Dramatic clouds and nice warm colors. TFS!

Lucky.

Good work.
I like the sky a lot like this. Did you do any PP on this one ?
I like the compo as weel, people coming out of the water.

I wonder if you wouldn't have gotten an even better result in sharpness and clarity if you would have used a higher f stop number.

At f. 2.8 the scope to cover is too big in my opinion.
But hey ! it is still a great photo !

TFS

Jan

hi lucky
great shot mavelous sky waves coming in and the swimmers not bothered by rain excellent pov.
regards
jimmy

  • Great 
  • kateb Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 514 W: 153 N: 338] (2991)
  • [2009-07-24 13:55]

A very atmospheric, dramatic photo, the people provide interest in contrast to clouds, water and rain. Well captured.

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