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A Tunnel Of Fences


A Tunnel Of Fences
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Copyright: Don Wallensteijn (wallie) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 527 W: 0 N: 485] (2552)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-10-24
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-01-26 8:08
Viewed: 570
Points: 40
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Oké oké oké, by many asked, here a new posting of me.

This picture is also of the course I had in October 2005, with my analogue SLR camera (Canon EOS 300). In this course we had to make pictures in b/w. The film we used was Agfapan 100. We had to make different kind of pictures; portraits, city pictures of Delft, and street furniture like benches et cetera.

This picture I made, are fences were you can put your bike at. I was getting down on my knees so the fences were in a row and created a tunnel effect and depth.

I'm sorry for the noice . It's not in the picture (the picture is very sharp), but the scanner I used is a very bad old scanner at my office.

I hope you like the picture.

Best regards,

Don

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Hi Don...
Interesting perspective, with pleasant repetition effect! If the course teacher had a comment to this I will guess it was "why didn't you move your POV a tad to the right hand side?"... Hehehehe, just joking! However, I think it would work fine if it was a tad offset too...
Regards,
Pablo -

you really get drawn into this, I like your tight comp, thanx, M, (*_*)

Hi Don,
je wordt er inderdad in getrokken.
Je hebt absoluut goed gekeken.
Ik weet niet of er een mogelijkheid was om het verdwijnpunt meer naar een sterk punt to te brenegen?
Heb alleen het gevoel dat hij dan nog iets sterker kan worden.
Leuk je weer te zien
Ruud

Heel mooi Don...heb zelf ook ooit een foto al deze gemaakt...je creeërd hier echt diepte mee en je bent er in geslaagd...mijn compliment.

Jos

I like it Don and the noise is hardly noticeable, INHO it adds to the effect. Great composition, perfect perspective. TFS
David

Prachtige foto van dit fietsenrek ! Heb al hetzelfde geprobeerd, maar niet gelukt wegens te drukke achtergrond.

Blij te zien dat je nog eens iets post !

Groetjes,

Marleen

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  • Viking Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 996 W: 63 N: 782] (4383)
  • [2006-01-26 17:59]

Well hi Don
Good to see you back ! Thios photo is good in dimention/depht! Yes with a scanner we loose quality
but dont worry, you get your points :-)
Tot ziens
Rob

...ja... ok... good composition Don !
Scanners are handy but you always have to give in a little quality ! Compliment
Groet
John

Hi Don.. Repetitive fance looks like a tunnel really. B&W is good choice to make the lines more strong. So nice shot!
Elif

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4257 W: 414 N: 6771] (42534)
  • [2006-01-27 7:47]

Hi Don

Wonderful repetition of the steel arches with superb sharpness & graphism. I also like the strong contrast. Good work!

good perspective shot Don
well composed, good graphism in the shot
i don't mind the noise :)

Hi Don, very nice pov, nice repetitive frames, seems endless :)

Too bad of the noise from the scanner. Can you adjust the dpi to a higher resolution?

Take care, Yan

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3274 W: 268 N: 7771] (33168)
  • [2006-01-28 5:05]

No bikes in town that day Wallie?? I was wondering what these were, I thought maybe croquet hoops, but no! And I bought a scanner that was too cheap and I don't want to use it now.
Good tunnell effect here, well seen. TFS
Janice

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  • maga Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 62 W: 0 N: 12] (528)
  • [2006-01-28 15:44]

mooie foto :)
- Magda

The noise doesn't really bother me. I like the repitition and the depth. Nice idea

The composition is really eye catching! Well done!

Hi Don,

Excellent shot!
I like your POV! Very creative! The B&W version is a good choice. I like the light and DOF.
Well done!
Constantinos

what a grand idea and a grand shot, great perspective , and super bl and white.

bravo,.
Christine.

Excellent DOF Don, looks stunning in B&W
jaco

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  • wck Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 757 W: 37 N: 423] (3843)
  • [2006-02-13 2:23]

Hi Don, Nice perspective have present & well set in BW that well indicate the steel. TFS

Wong

Very original shot, great perspective and low level composition. Very well exposed and very good DOF.
Vassilis

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