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Denhaag


Denhaag
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Copyright: Mark Vogel (MarkVogel) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 19 W: 0 N: 1] (273)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-10-24
Categories: Mood
Camera: Ricoh GR Digital
Exposure: f/3.2, 1/64 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-10-25 4:20
Viewed: 86
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The ricoh grd has special colors, this picture has been taken just before it gets dark.

Denhaag near the Boekhorststraat
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Hello, Mark,

The thumbnail on this is engaging. I really like the light in the windows and the leaf-stripped tree topping the building. You chose an excellent time to take this photograph. Good sharpness and detail with your subject, too. On the improvement side, the artifact beneath the truck and the utility wires are distracting. I wonder whether a change of perspective might help? Perhaps you could shoot find a low shooting angle that gets beneath the wires without showing them? That might require getting closer and widening the angle.

Regards,
Jim

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  • akg Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 163 W: 0 N: 83] (964)
  • [2009-10-25 5:53]

Hello Mark,
wonderful atmosphere created by the colour and control of light in this composition. Great pov! I wished the wires would not be there to distract the view but nothing doing. Lovely work in all.
TFS, abhijit.

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