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The rail of live...


The rail of live...
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Copyright: Janneke de With (Jan) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 388 W: 119 N: 606] (3983)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-03-10
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-03-10 15:14
Viewed: 521
Points: 32
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Today I bought A new camera. Its the same as my firts digital, but it has more pixels. I want to try it out today, but it was getting dark when I went home...
I made a few photo's, and one otf them is this one.

Sometimes you look at your live, you can see a meaning, a goal. At least that's what your hoping for..
You can see where you're coming from, if there were obsticals on your road, or great things.
Sometimes you dont see your goal, but you know where the road is taking you....

I hope our road is fortunate, I hope I can take the Highroad.

Jan

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To GreenBaron: Dank je!Jan 1 03-10 15:36
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like the idea here and the note certainly is recognizable! like the colour setting in this picture and the sharpness is excellent.
hope your new camera brings us many more photos like this one!
have a great weekend,
J.
ps dank je voor je commentaar op 'here's looking at you kid'!

Hoi Janneke,
Nieuwe camera? Toe maar! Mooi man, eerste inzending is perfect. Uitstekend POV mooi perspectief. Goede keus om het een sepia toon te geven. Perfect frame! Je note een beetje filosofisch, maar dat mag ;)
Hans

Hi Janneke,
Very good photo.Very beautiful compo and colours.Congrats!!
Best Wishes,
Deniz:)

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  • Noslo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 230 W: 82 N: 118] (916)
  • [2007-03-10 15:43]

Very interesting composition here. Well done. You have created a feeling in this photograph. Great!

Hi Janneke
Good crisp image with low POV. The sepia tone adds to the mood you have created with your note.

Paul

A very creative shot Jan. The POV and DOF really make this shot. The sepia tones are superb.

Regards Mark

Hi Janneke,
a superb image to this new beginning with your new camera. I love the point of view that give a very strong perspective and that mysterious presence that let a lot of place to imagination. Nice technique too very beautiful definition. Great work!
Patrick

Wat een prachtplaat Janneke De speia tinten doen het hier geweldig. Het gevoel van oneindig komt bij mij op mede door het excelente standpunt. Mooi gedaan.
Suc6 met je nieuwe camera

Grtz Pim

Hello Janneke.
Beautiful composition and color tones.Nice image. Thanks for sharing.
Greetings from Ankara
H.Ayhan

great picture! composition and concept makes this picture superb!
TFS
davis

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3259 W: 375 N: 2713] (11644)
  • [2007-03-11 9:57]

Mooi, Janneke. Alles is perfect: compo, scherptediepte, omzetting naar sepia... en een bijzonder goed idee!
Ik vind het frame nu niet echt geslaagd, maar da's een zeer subjectief gevoel.
Knappe foto!
TFS

Hi Jan, I like. The legs in the shot works well. So does the sepia effect. In respect of the road we on... we all know where it's leading. It's just what events and places we going to visit on that road, and for what reason, and whether we going to make the journey pleasant for ourselves or not...
TFS

You are on the good way...it is sure....
Love the sepia...an a great quality...
Your new camera is....ready for work...
Thanks
Claude

HI Jan
Liking this shot alot. Sepia tones was a good choice for this one. This photo tells a story, and could be different for each viewer...that makes a photo a good photo. Well done Jan...very well done.

Lyndon

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  • debz Gold Star Critiquer [C: 68 W: 0 N: 7] (280)
  • [2007-04-05 3:09]

Excellent POV! love the sepia tones, you must have been very low to take this creative shot. The perspective is wonderful and it has a lot to say.
tfs
debz

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1691 W: 0 N: 1] (11059)
  • [2007-04-19 7:49]

Dit is een sterke comp Jan.
Mooi in beeld gebracht.
het geeft dramatiek weer.
GR JOs

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