A Mother-Daughter Day

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• GreenBaron (38863)
• [2007-08-12 10:56]

Hoi Janneke,
Super joh! Gave actiefoto.
Perfect colours and great pose of Vivianne. Great how you composed the image with Vivianne fully of centre. A really excellent presentation in the large white frame. you must be a lucky mom ;-)
TFS
Hans

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• rychousmama (226)
• [2007-08-12 11:04]

Hi Janneke, I really love the sense of energy and joy coming from your daughter, jumping in the water. Her expression is perfect and so natural, I can tell you two had a blast together. The colors came out really beautifully here, and the yellow bikini actually breaks up all the blues and greens really well and makes your daughter pop out even more. Really sharp and crisp shot, and I love the use of the very fast shutter speed to perfectly freeze the motion of Vivianne as she jumps as well as the water. The first thing that caught my eye was the curve of flying water from her feet, leading the viewer's eye from the bottom right to Vivianne. The framing and composition are excellent too because you have all the horizontal lines and motions of the sky and waves of water below, and then Vivianne contrasts with this, so there is a lot of balance. The use of strong daylighting is great and tones are just excellent. Nice simple frame with black and lines of white, and I love how you used a simple and clean thin black font at the bottom to title this and put your signature ("Made by Mother" hehe ;) ). TFS!
-Lara

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• Shogun (10108)
• [2007-08-12 11:06]

perfect timing and exposure Janneke. love her pose and smile. Tfs

Oggie

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• nova (8163)
• [2007-08-12 11:10]

Hi Janneke,this is a real beautiful picture.The composition is perfect with your daughter being the focus point on the third vertical and the thrid horizontal at the same time.Wonderful pose and expression captured.Very well done!
Michel

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• stery (2036)
• [2007-08-12 11:11]

Hy Very very very nice picture....Great work
rEGARDS
stery

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• shelbeesmom (33712)
• [2007-08-12 11:19]

HAHA! There is NO WAY my daughter would do this for me! HAHAHA! She would scream "MOOOOOM NO!!!!!" This is a wonderful stop action shot! Nice POV excellent comp! You should be proud Janneke!!
B-)
Linda

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• rater (957)
• [2007-08-12 11:29]

Excellent shot, so full of energy!!!! Good composition and colors. A good souvenir of your girls day!

r.

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• hamperium (0)
• [2007-08-12 11:30]

perfecte scherpe actiefoto en mooi van kleur

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• ttreen (14419)
• [2007-08-12 12:23]

Hello Janneke
I love the energy in this shot... outstanding frame and text... looks like your mom/daughter day was a success!!!


Tricia

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• asiivalceni (0)
• [2007-08-12 12:52]

Hallo Janneke..
verry nice Picture and tolle Moment!:-)
SUPER JOB
BRAVO
Regards,
Ella

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• LvanMil (358)
• [2007-08-12 12:55]
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Great shot!! Great expression!! Great colors!!

That must have been a lovely mother-daughter day!

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By the way, how was the musical? In a few months I am going too... with my mother!

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• korbee (8529)
• [2007-08-12 13:00]

Zo hallo Janneke!Dit is letterlijk spetterend in alle opzichten.
Prima scherpte,kleur,compo. en natuurlijk timing.
De omlijsting is een klassieker,heel mooi verzorgd.
Je mag wel zuinig zijn op zon mooie meid.
Gr van jan.
ps.morgen zal ik mijn meid(dochter) op het strand eens laten zien.

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• taba (1564)
• [2007-08-12 13:20]

Hi Janneke
Outstanding image, and with the note you wrote the picture is complete.
great colors, DOF, POV, sharpness and fine details in the image...
I hope you will have another day like this and shot as this one...
regards;
Taba

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• docdexter (661)
• [2007-08-12 13:35]

Hi there!
WOW you have a beautiful daughter. It always helps to take a nice picture if your subject matter looks like this, and is spontaneous and so full of life!
Lovely framing, sharp details and crisp colours too.
Well done!

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• timtim (7189)
• [2007-08-12 13:40]

nice capture great energy like the water splash

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• joergen115 (4310)
• [2007-08-12 14:02]

Wau great capture! Action shot perfect shot in right moment. Really good work
Jorgen

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• Beger (15131)
• [2007-08-12 14:21]

Hi Janneke,
Splendid and joyful image! The splash and the jump of your daughter are captured just in time. Not easy to do it with such clarity! I envy you a little, I haven't daughter! Very well done and thanks for sharing! Annie

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• jonathanhart (10570)
• [2007-08-12 15:19]
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hello Janneke
it's an excellent job from you for the framing and the perfect exposure, and from your model/daughter making a great pose/action full of life joy and energy,
the result is professional.
a pity there is no exif datas but i guess speed was over 1/1000 of course as drops are frozen and it's a bit dark in spite of a strong sun,
i suppose you did not do a lot of PP,
i have done a WS with +5 of brighness with photoshop elements, just an idea, i like your version like this but i guess a bit of brightness gives the light like it was, i guess..
however a real great shot !!!
congrats
regards
jo

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• rewshearer (15644)
• [2007-08-12 15:35]

What a fantastic jump - and beautifully captured! Sharpness, light, metering, tones, depth of field, pose, position in the frame - all are A1 perfect!
Very well done
Rew

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• AJ786 (6671)
• [2007-08-12 18:55]

Hi Jan,

WOW a super shot. Love the action made by your daughter. The bacground outlining the waves and the horizon compliments the action very well.

TFS

Cheers
AJ786
:-)

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• Danert (3593)
• [2007-08-12 19:18]

Hi Jan,
Beautifull action shot of your daughter . I like the colors and the sharpness . Your composotion is also very good . My congratulations for this one and for your daughter .
Daniel

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• Dawn (16119)
• [2007-08-12 19:19]

Hello Janneke,

WOW this is a very eyecatching photo, so beautiful, so well composed. You have captured a lovely light on your daughter, good skin tones, and well presented.

Excellent job.

Regards
Dawn.

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• TripleT (3038)
• [2007-08-12 19:28]

Awesome capture, such clarity! Excellent!
Tracy

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• japiey (8724)
• [2007-08-12 20:23]

Hi Janneke .

EXCELLENT.
PERFECT TIMING !!

Lucky family you have.
Smiles for this....
Well taken image.
Kudos.

jean paul

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• anjhello (4544)
• [2007-08-12 22:09]

Anjhello Scoring System:
DOF - 3 POV - 3 CREATIVITY - 3 COMPOSITION - 3
LIGHTING - 3 SHARPNESS - 3 COLORS - 3

Average: 3.00

Range:
1 point: Average < 1.99
2 points: Average > 2.00

Scoring System:
1 Good 2 Better 3 Best

tfs!

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• guinness_fr (3168)
• [2007-08-13 0:13]

very nice composition and timing.

thanks for that summer taste :)

Olivier

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• perryhooter (26072)
• [2007-08-13 5:26]

Hello Janneke!

What a beautiful program! A memorable day for both of you . We can see the successful results here. Superb moment captured.

You will have high scores on this one. She is not only a pretty model, but her happiness and exuberance are remarkably well rendered.
Well done!
Robert

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• cezar62 (7870)
• [2007-08-13 10:26]

Hi Janneke!
Great action shot,very good timing.
Well done!
Cheers.
Cezar

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• vandana2923 (22149)
• [2007-08-14 1:19]

Hello Janneke,

This picture if full of life, joy and energy.
Wonderful capture, good colors and composition. TFS

Vandana
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• nainnain (3413)
• [2007-08-14 1:53]

hello
bravo, photo bien réussi et bien vu ce saut dans l'eau, cela me rappelle mes vacances, belles couleurs
bien vu, merci du partage, amitiès
edith

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• tomek_wap (4571)
• [2007-08-16 13:39]

Nice jump.
Good catch, and perfect timing.

Tom

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• deanophotos (2250)
• [2007-08-18 13:04]

Actually I looked at part 2 first, and have got to say this is much the better image although number 2 is great, the added extra of the splashing water in this makes it a much stronger image, and the position of the main subject.

Dean

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• willienda (502)
• [2007-08-18 13:26]
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Hey Janneke!
Dit is een super foto! Echt een favorietje.
Zo te zien hebben julle errug veel lol gehad.
Ben benieuwt welke foto's van jou zijn gemaakt ;-)
Groetjes
Willienda

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• lilimih33 (13802)
• [2007-08-18 14:42]

Hello Janneke!
Really wonderful action shot!
Great colours and perfect clarity!
Lovely composition!
Excellent done!
Best regards!
Lili

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• Mas (2555)
• [2007-08-20 6:13]

Great action picture !
Nice 'frozen' droplets !
Top timing !
Famous framing !
Very good composition !
Splendid colours !
Rasorsharp image !
Wonderfull supermodel !

Good work, Jan !
You'd better be proud with a picture and a daughter like this.

tfs
Mas

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• Janone (18097)
• [2007-08-21 4:28]

Fantastic.!
Really a superb picture of this Jumping daughter.
Prachtig resultaat kan zij en jij trots op zijn.
Groeten, Jan

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• pundoy (163)
• [2007-08-25 5:25]

Awesome composition and a wonderfully timed capture Jan. Lovely subject as well :)

Good work!

Cheers!
Ian

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• A-lex (2000)
• [2007-08-28 9:15]

Whoeoeoe
Vet gaaf Jan!!!
Alle punten dik waard!

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• OWO (2335)
• [2007-08-28 14:28]

Janneke,

10/10!

MVG

OWO

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• Jeruel (1275)
• [2007-09-05 3:21]

Another work of art masterfully done and a captured moment!

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• strom (389)
• [2007-09-07 0:04]

Hi Jan,
this is a great picture exuding free space, free spirit of your girl, free time and fantastic spot to enjoy it. It is very positive, clear and sharp.
Thx
Petr

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• Wolski (1216)
• [2007-09-08 15:15]

yee nice cach :))very dynamic foto sory for my english :))

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• kri54 (614)
• [2007-09-29 3:07]

perfection totale

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• bzees (366)
• [2007-10-02 3:59]

I love your timing with this shot. Must not be easy with a compact camera.

Very fun and enjoyable photo. Your framing is great.

TFS.

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• allanbarredo (6824)
• [2007-12-04 2:25]

This is a very lively shot Janneke! Love the action in this one.Thanks for pointing it out.

Allan

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• afshinazizi (31)
• [2008-06-29 14:32]

Hi

Great shot

Amazing time freazing.

Great details and nice use of space.

Your timming is so great in this shot.

I like waterdrops from girl's feet.

All the best