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A Day of Friendship.


A Day of Friendship.
Photo Information
Copyright: Janneke de With (Jan) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 388 W: 119 N: 606] (3981)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-08-17
Categories: Friends/Family
Camera: Fuji Finepix S7000
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Mijn Treklens foto's 2006-2007 [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-08-21 11:56
Viewed: 956
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 67
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A day of friendship...

Once in a year we have a friendship-day, Mas and I. We pick a place where we want to go and drive very early on that day to that particular spot. We make photo's (a lot)... talk a lot, laugh a lot, sometimes a tear...eat a lot, buy a lot(for our kids :))..... and then we go home!

We have a great time, and to make sure we never forget that day, we only have to look a our photo's, think of the great moments we have together and we know.... friendship is what we all need and we have it!!

Thanks Mas, for being my friend!

Jan

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  • Juliet Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 716 W: 34 N: 1531] (9580)
  • [2007-08-21 11:58]

Jan
A beautiful photo and note. Colors and lighting are good. Nicely done- TFS Julie

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  • japiey Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1324 W: 103 N: 2310] (8724)
  • [2007-08-21 12:00]

Hi Jan.

Fantastic image to mark a great day in life.
So soothing, so warm a feel watching this..
Lovely is the composition, excellent tone balancing.
Regards,

jean paul

a great shot presented in a lovely way and accompanied by a tender note ... what could we ask more?
many TFS it
ili :o)

Hi Jan,
I love this motive, fantastic light and beautiful reflections, thanks
Sabine - wishnugaruda

Beautiful image, composition, sharpness, colours, everything just perfect!

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  • stery Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 330 W: 24 N: 71] (2036)
  • [2007-08-21 12:36]

Hy Janneke!
Very nice picture...Great color and pov
Congratulation
STERY

Hy janneke;-)
verry nice Picture and got shot!:-)
regards,
Ella

Hello Jan,

A wonderfully composed shot!
The rippling, reflective blue water is divided from the soft blue sky by the sharp images of the boats. Very good!

Best wishes,
Bev :-)

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  • carmia Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 317 W: 6 N: 125] (2797)
  • [2007-08-21 13:31]

Pleasant image ! I like the details and the POV
.Well done!! Carme.

merhaba janneke
beautiful atmosphere and marine.beautiful boats and reflections.well done.
regards.
gürkan akçakır.

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 995 W: 0 N: 773] (8515)
  • [2007-08-21 13:40]

Kijk daar hebbe Jan en hoe!Wat een prachtige foto,de boten de kleuren en zoals gewoonlijk bij jou super SCHERP.
jan

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  • limba3 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1112 W: 430 N: 391] (10929)
  • [2007-08-21 13:46]

Hi Janneke
Beautiful photograph. Everything is on the place- pretty the sky, the composition, colours. Well done.
Anna

Hello Janneke,

I really like this pOV alot well composed and captured photo

TFS Kyle

Hello Janneke,
outstanding shot, realy, realy, realy splendid,
a great cheer,
Pat

Hello Janneke!
Another great composition!
Wonderful colours and perfect sharpness!
Lovely reflexion and nice point of view!
Excellent done!
Best regards!
Lili

Perfecta!
Me gusta mucho, muy bonitos colores, composición y presentación... Y tambien comentario :)
Felicitaciones...!
Mical :)

You are so right Janneke about friendship, it is a precious jewel and 'your day of friendship' is a very nice idea!
Those boats and this picture is a beautiful way to remember good moments... they are free, strong, and if they know your imperfections, don't tell you: like a good friend ;)
TFS;
V.

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  • Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1225 W: 110 N: 3235] (16109)
  • [2007-08-21 16:27]

Very beautiful photo Janneke, I love the colours and I think you have done a great job of the composition...which can be a bit difficult taking boats like this.

Lovely reflections have been caught, and your presentation is good.

Your friendship day sounds a great idea..

Regards
Dawn.

Well... honestly imho it's not so good shot... Looks like the boats are the primary subject, but they are displaced in a messy, random way - the photo makes impression of being a casual shot along the pier... Very nice, clear reflections of them in the water with really nice drammatic sky can't balance the shot. I think that if you'd chosen another angle - to have the masts and the poles in series (you'd have to shot almost parallel with the pier), you'd get much stronger photo, with good lead-ins and with atmosphere of crowded port. With that crispness you presented, lots of details this would be an excellent shot.

Marek

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  • Hendrika Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1749 W: 582 N: 4125] (17840)
  • [2007-08-21 23:54]

Hi Jan,
Wat een vreselijk mooie foto - alles is meer dan okay, maar het bijzondere moet in het licht en de kleur zitten.
Fantastisch,
TFS
Els
:)follow

is gewoon een prachtige foto
super mooie kleuren en compositie
en het frame past er mooi bij
M.

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3348 W: 688 N: 1921] (16125)
  • [2007-08-22 0:38]

What a wonderful "painting" !
many congrats !!!


v

hi janneke
beautiful tones, good POV and very well framed, great composition
regards
jo

Very balanced and clear picture
Take on a nice time of the day with good light
Superb view
En dat gemaakt met de nog vette handen van de paling
Prachtig
RuudBlok

Hi there!
A lovely photo to remember a lovely day.
I love the colours, so pastel-like and calm. Your composition is spot-on, and the reflections excellent.
Well done!

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  • Mas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 59 W: 62 N: 250] (2555)
  • [2007-08-22 16:20]

Thx Jan, for this beautiful tribute to our wonderfull day of friendship !
The pastel colours of the sunset reflection are beautiful.
You captured one of the great moments of our beautiful day.
To be remembered !

Thanks for your friendship and your lovely note !
Mas

ps @ ruudblok: No 'paling', but 'kibbeling'

Hello Janneke!
I think your photo is very good-composition,tones,colours,sharpnes and mood.
Well done.
Cheers.
Cezar

Great shot Jan. Wonderful tones and lovely composition. I think the frame really adds to the shot as well. Nice work!

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  • A-lex Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 117 W: 52 N: 244] (2000)
  • [2007-08-28 9:16]

Hi Jan,

Prachtig, prachtig!!
Wat een rust straalt ie uit!!!
Heerlijk!

Alex

Hi Janneke !
I like this photgraph very much.
It is very beautiful - so much works for it.
Colours, exposure, mood, reflections, details, etc.

The framing is also first class !
You've done VERY well here :-)

best regards, Daniel

Anjhello Scoring System:
DOF - 3 POV - 3 CREATIVITY - 3 COMPOSITION - 3
LIGHTING - 3 SHARPNESS - 3 COLORS - 3

Average: 3.00

Range:
1 point: Average < 1.99
2 points: Average > 2.00

Scoring System:
1 Good 2 Better 3 Best

tfs!

Hi Janneke, no matter where you stood to take this shot the masts would not have lined up. Different yachts have different masts, some straight and some curved. I like the composition, tyhe colours are good, lovely reflections and fine detail. TFS,
David

Many thanks for your comment on ‘Foggy Days VII’

Waou !
Très belle composition, très sobre et réussie. J'aime beaucoup beaucoup beaucoup !

Hi Janneke!
Very nice photo with excellent composition and POV...
Congratulation


Philip

Amazing reflections and soft colours! A beatiful composition of that quiet place! I really love the pink clouds! This shot is more than a photo, it is a window to feel relaxed thinking in Volendam! Congratulations!

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